Date: 06/24/10 07:31 am Title: Whatever It Takes
Ah! Only part of my review posted, so you're getting another double review lol. Unless it did post and I just couldn't see it, in which case I'm sorry for repeating myself...Now where was I? Oh yes, I love Tom haha. And then Kim...oh Kim. She should've known that John would take what she said the wrong way. I blame everyone for this catastrophe lol.
And I'm truly sorry to hear about your dad. I had a feeling that was the case because I know you take pieces from your life and write them into your story, like John...and Alberta. (Well, I'm assuming you're from Alberta haha.) I'm glad to hear that he remembers you though, even if it is a little on-and-off. I think it's really important to take advantage of that. Thank you for sharing that with me.
Author's Response: I had posted the original chapter, but then decided that I didn't want to go there. (Tom hadn't picked Kim up from the airport and Laina was back =/) There was MUCH more fighting in that chapter and it ended MUCH worse. This one is a bit more happier...well in the beginning anyways. rnTom is way too nosy and jealous yes. Sometimes an idiot! HAHA But we love him anyways =] rnKim really should have known that John would take the 'I LOVE YOU' seriously, because really, JOHN IS AN IDIOT! LOL! Kim should have never said it in the first place. Just gotta wait and see what happens with that whole situation, I guess =/ rnAnd by the way, I definitely think you were the one to give me that extra push. I had read through my story not that long ago, and OH MY GOSH! The first part of it was AWFUL! I couldn't believe how terrible it was! Thank you for being honest with me! =D rnrn(I am from Alberta, yes. And yes, it is good that my dad does remember my sister and I. He does have his good days and bad days, but for the most part, everything is good. =D I think the thing that keeps him happy is my neice though. She lights up his life. =] )
Date: 06/24/10 07:19 am Title: Whatever It Takes
If this re-write is supposed to be happier, then I don't want to know what the original was like! God dammit, just when things were going well, John fucks everything up. Fuck. Why did Tom have to read those texts? WHY? He's too nosey. And jealous. And an idiot. [Not really, Tomi. I love you.
Author's Response: The beginning is happier =] =/
Date: 06/24/10 06:10 am Title: Whatever It Takes
LOVE IT!!!!!!
Author's Response: THANK YOU!!! =D
Date: 06/21/10 10:03 pm Title: White Wedding
Please tell me she was just being friendly when she told John she loved him and always would :(
Author's Response: She loved John before, but now it's more as a friend. I think she will always love John in some way or another. He could never replace Tom though =D
Date: 06/21/10 09:13 am Title: Love You Still
yes, do put the name of the artists, I want to listen to them :) and ooh I miss tom in this chapter T.T haha
Author's Response: Will do! =] I went back and added them to the previous chapters and I will start to put them in the upcoming one's as well =D rnrnI miss Tom in this chapter too =D
Date: 06/20/10 05:42 pm Title: Love You Still
No, it definitely doesn't suck! It was awesome...a little suprising here and there...but great non the less!
Sure, you can put the names, too...XD
PS. 'A Time To Heal' is really interesting! You truely are an amazing writer! :D
Author's Response: Thank you! Surprising is good, right? =D rnrnI will start putting the names to the songs =] I may even go back and add them to the other chapters. =]rnrnThank you for the comment about my new story as well! I am happy to hear you like it =]
Date: 06/20/10 01:35 pm Title: Love You Still
when is she gonna tell Tom?!
Author's Response: I think in the next chapter? Maybe...? Ya I think so =]
Date: 06/20/10 12:34 pm Title: Love You Still
I think this chapter is good!!!! U always say that your not sure about a chapter but it always seems good to me!!! You are an amazing writer so keep up the good work! (ugh... I sound like a teacher or something)
Author's Response: Thank you for saying as much =] I am very insecure about my writing. I am still VERY new to this and I know I have to STOP being so unsure about the chapters. I will try to stop thinking like they suck. Thank you for the positive feedback. It really means a lot to me. (And no, you do not sound like a teacher =D )
Date: 06/20/10 04:57 am Title: Love You Still
love it
Author's Response: =D
Date: 06/20/10 04:25 am Title: Love You Still
Jesus, this chapter very nearly made me cry. I mean, there was the whole situation with Kim's dad, and then there was the phone call with Tom....I can't even imagine how Kim feels about her dad's condition. It would be heartbreaking if my dad couldn't have a conversation with me, let alone remember me. And then the whole cafuffle with Tom over the phone made her feel even shittier. I think it was the first thing Kim said when she called him back that got me. :( The next chapter better be happier! And more Tom-ified!
P.S. After all this time, I finally checked out the song that's Kim's ringtone. I really like it, especially the chorus!
P.P.S. I actually think you're clinically insane. Did you just say this chapter sucks? If I knew who you were and where you are right now, I'd go there and smack you upside the head lol.
Author's Response: I'm going to let you in on a little secret. The part about Kim's dad...is real. When I write, I take a lot of things out of my real life. For example, John is a real person. He lives and breathes ten minutes away from me. Before I started writing this story, I didn't expect him to move back here, but he did. Maybe it happened because of the story...who knows. =/ Let's just say things aren't like they are in the story. The thing about the dad, is real as well. My dad had a stroke in December, right after Christmas and he doesn't talk and he didn't really remember us. He does remember us now though...but I think it comes and goes. rnSo, there is a little piece of me in every chapter =] Sorry, I don't want to bring you down. The next chapter should be a bit happier and filled with Tom. rnrnThe ringtone is like one of my favourite songs! I used it in the first story and thought the title would be perfect for the sequel. It fit! rnrnI don't think I'm clinically insane LOL I'm just very insecure about my writing =/ I bet you would smack me upside the head too! rnrnThank you for the support and the wonderful reviews. I honestly couldn't do it without you. Seriously!
Date: 06/20/10 04:24 am Title: White Wedding
It didn't want to post the whole comment, pig!
anyways...
John has some serious issues. Kim is Toms now, so he should just back off! gah. xD
looking forward to a new chapter. :D
Author's Response: Yes he should back off. Maybe once Kim is back in Germany he will realize that she's never going to be his.
Date: 06/20/10 04:22 am Title: Love You Still
And I’m here to stay
Nothing can separate us
And I know I’m okay
You cradle me gently
Wrapped in Your arms I’m home
I love this song!
Author's Response: Me too! I started using it as Kim's ringtone in the first story, and that's where I got the idea for the title for this story. I thought it fit perfectly. =]
Date: 06/20/10 03:20 am Title: Home For Christmas
Ugh! John is such a...such a...he's an idiot, that's what he is! I can't believe he kissed her! I had a feeling that something like that was going to happen, but I kept telling myself to have more faith in John. Remember what I said about how I wanted John to go crawl in a hole and die? Well I still feel that way lol. (I'm way too attached to this story haha D:)
On a happier note, Tom is such a sweetheart! He's so good to Kim. :) And thank GOD Bill and Natasha are together! FINALLY. I've been waiting for this to happen for ages, woman! lol (Like I said, I'm wayyy too attached. XD)
Author's Response: LMAO! You really want him to crawl in a hole and die! Sometimes I wish he really would do that too! UGH He's as big of an idiot in real life too!! rnrnAnyways, ya he kissed her. And he almost did it again =/ I don't know what it is about John but I keep having him cause problems with Tom and Kim. rnrnI know right! FINALLY BILL AND NATASHA ARE TOGETHER!!! Sorry I've taken so long =/ My friend, who Natasha is based on, is so excited as well! HAHA Now she wishes it would happen in real life! =D rn
Date: 06/19/10 11:54 pm Title: Love You Still
its not shit! it's so good n juicy. n as for ur new story tht too is good&amazing! keep it up girl ;D
Author's Response: Thanks hun! Reviews like yours make me want to keep writing =D I will definitely keep it up! =]
Date: 06/19/10 11:37 pm Title: Love You Still
i love it, but she needs to get back to tom! i love tom/kim snuggles!!
Author's Response: I know she really does need to get back to Tom! Don't worry! Next chapter there will be tom/kim snuggles =D
Date: 06/19/10 08:10 pm Title: Love You Still
Tom was pretty honest on the back from the club, haha.
I can't believe that Kim ever considered moving back. I mean, she had been through so much for him, and they love each other. She lost her sanity for 5 minuts, but I'm happy she got it back.
And lastly, I have to say that I loved this chapter and it doesn't sucks ! You're excellent !
Author's Response: Yes, he was pretty honest =] rnYa, she did lose her insanity for a brief five minutes. Let's hope that doesn't happen again. Thank you! I'm so happy you loved the chapter! And no, you're excellent for being such a wonderful reviewer and reading this story! I wouldn't be able to do it without you encouraging me. Thank you!
Date: 06/19/10 01:02 pm Title: You Stop My Heart
oh i love this sequel! keep on writing okay! :)
Author's Response: =D I will definitely keep it up! Thanks so much!!!
Date: 06/19/10 07:26 am Title: Home For Christmas
omg, I agree with Kim.. that is actually an ugly watch xD
OH NOOO o: I hope Tom doesn't freak ):: I don't want problems in their relationship. Oh my god.. I'm such a 'happy-ending' girl xD I know it's not the end, but still.. you know what I mean xD hahaha
Author's Response: HAHA I actually think thats the watch that Tom wears =PrnrnThere might be a little freak out but we will see. Everything should be okay though....
Date: 06/18/10 04:32 pm Title: Home For Christmas
Omg i seriously cant believe john kissed her!!! Please update soon!!!
Author's Response: I know....stupid John!rnrnI will try and get a chapter up as soon as I can =]
Date: 06/18/10 05:41 am Title: Home For Christmas
wow.
he kissed her.
oh Tom is going to be maaaaad!
Author's Response: Yup he did =/ rnrnYa, Tom is gonna be mad =/