Date: 08/17/10 12:03 pm Title: Nothing Good About Goodbye
tbh, it's up to you who you write about in your story, not the readers. the AUTHOR is the writer and decision maker of the story, not the READERS. i love having john in the story, he just makes a massive impact in the story and he causes so much drama, i absolutely love it! so he shouldn't be out of the story just because he's a jerk :L keep up the amazing work, hun! i'm loving this story.
Author's Response: You don't know how good this comment makes me feel. I was a bit worried about my end chapter notes. You saying all of this totally eases my worries. Thank you so much hun! rnrn
I don't want to remove John from my story...and I'm not going to. He's been apart of it from chapter one and he probably will be till the end. =] I'm glad you love having him in the story even though he does cause so much drama. rnrn
Thank you for the continued support and I am so glad to hear you love this story. =D
Date: 08/17/10 11:44 am Title: Nothing Good About Goodbye
Ok, this is officaly the BEST STORY IN THE WORLD!!!!
Author's Response: You are making me blush hehe. I can't believe you think that my story is that good! rnrn
THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!!
Date: 08/17/10 10:10 am Title: Nothing Good About Goodbye
Yay another update, so soon. I loved it. The goodbye broke my heart, it was so beautiful. And tom talking to her belly/twins, absolutely adorable. I'm happy everything is settled with John ;)
Her family is very pushy, but little things like that make this story more real to me, cause my family would be just as annoying, lol.
Am I a spoiled brat if I beg for more;)
Author's Response: SURPRISE! I'm so happy you loved it!! rnrn
The goodbye broke my heart too =[ I hate having to have them say goodbye to each other, but it had to be done =/. Tom is too sweet, hey? We all need a Tom! =Drnrn
Yeah her family is pretty pushy. Just wait for the next chapter HAHA. More fun times ahead LOL. rnrn
Nope, it doesn't make you a spoiled brat if you beg for more =]
Date: 08/17/10 03:59 am Title: Nothing Good About Goodbye
Well, it looks like you read my mind regarding the whole Tom-wanting-to-rip-John's-head-off thing lol. I hope you don't think I was annoyed at you for writing about John. It was more of a frustration with Tom haha. I think I'm allowed to want to smack certain characters upside the head, right? Good, that's what I thought lol. Besides, John's a (fairly) important-ish character in your story. You're not just going to delete him from the magical world of fiction.
ANYWAY. The whole first section of this chapter was pretty much the most freaking adorable thing I've read in a while. =D Tom talking to the babies? Ridiculously cute. I wish I had a Tom. Actually, I wish I just had Tom. Can you find him for me? Kthx.
Oh, and dude. You want me to be your Beta? Really?? Even though I'm not actually an official THF Beta? Hmm. I've thought about it, and I think I'd like that. :) I mean, it's just proof-reading. How hard can that be? Pff. (On a more serious note, I actually do have an eye for grammar and stuff like that...so, yeah. =D)
Author's Response: No, I didn't think you were annoyed with me at all =] I was just noticing people were over the whole John thing and I had been wanting to say something for a while. I'm just frustrated right now is all, and I don't want people to think I'm pointing fingers at them, because I'm not. You are definitely allowed to want to smack certain characters upside the head HAHA! I mean, I ALWAYS want to smack John upside the head LMAO! rnrn
I hope with everything that happened in this chapter, everyone will be happy. John and Tom are kind of okay and Tom is okay with Kim and John being friends. No more drama. It wasn't exactly how I wanted things to go...I wanted to have something else happen...but since I had been so frustrated lately, I just said fuck it and I decided to just have it over and done with. It doesn't mean John is completely out of my story. He's never going to be gone, just like he's never going to be out of my life =/rnrn
Anyways, onto the rest of the story =] I loved the beginning of the chapter too. I seriously wasn't going to have Tom talking to the babies, but I thought what the hell! Might as well add some cuteness to it. You wish you had a Tom? I wish I had a Tom...well the Tom! After writing this damn thing I am seriously considering going to find him LOL! J/K! You want me to go find him for you? If I were to do that, I think I would keep him for myself LOL! But, I guess I might be able to share him with you...NOT! HAHA. Sorry =/ rnrn
Does it surprise you that I want you to be my Beta? You are good with catching all my mistakes. You are completely honest with me and tell me when I'm not 100% doing a great job. So yeah, why wouldn't I want you to be my Beta. Do you have to be an official THF Beta to Beta my stories? I've tried having someone on here do that. I sent her my story and she never got back to me. I decided to say fuck it! It would be nice to have someone help me out when times got tough...grammar, ideas, etc. That is if you want to? What do you say? I know you said yeah...but that was for the grammar part. What about for ideas?
Date: 08/17/10 03:35 am Title: Nothing Good About Goodbye
LOOOVE it!! just keep writing like you want to do, and honestly i like that john is in the story, he's a part of it :) so PLEASE keep writing the story with him in it =D I'm really easy to tears and i was sooooo close to get teary eyes in the beginnig =D LOVE IT, LIKE I ALWAYS DO!!
Author's Response: =] Thanks hun! I think out of all of my reviewers, you may be the only one who actually wants John in the story haha. Thank you!!! =D He is a part of it and until everything is resolved that's how it's going to be =]rnrn
I got teary eyed writing the chapter. haha. I'm so happy you liked it. I will try and update fast so you don't have to wait too long =]
Date: 08/17/10 03:18 am Title: Never Gonna Be Alone
lol What the hell? I wasn't expecting Tom's visit at all haha. I'm super glad they got to see each other again. Like, for real. None of this Skyping shit lol.
And vbutigbhvut8w. Tom and his stupid John problems. That is all I'm going to say haha.
Author's Response: HAHA Surprise! Nobody was expecting Tom's visit =] rnrn
Awe, you don't like it when they SKYPE? LOL! I hate is as well! Fuck, I never know what to write when they do their live video chat. UGH! I can't wait til this damn tour is over and done with =/ Did I just say that? Yeah, I did! rnrn
Yeah, I know, sorry...Tom and his stupid John problems =/
Date: 08/17/10 01:24 am Title: Nothing Good About Goodbye
omg that was fast lol TY it was a welcome surprise I liked this chapter alot even if it was kinda sad, it just added more to their relationship
Author's Response: Well, I thought since I've been slacking in the updates lately I might as well surprise you lovely readers with another chapter. It's the least I could do =D rnrn
I'm glad you enjoyed it and I hope to hear from you again =]
Date: 08/16/10 07:14 pm Title: Never Gonna Be Alone
Still lovin' the story!!
LOL Bill was so excited!!! Just like I predicted!!!!
Author's Response: Awesome! That's what I like to hear! =Drnrn
Yep! You were right! =] Uncle Bill is totally excited! hehe
Date: 08/16/10 12:31 pm Title: White Wedding
YAY!! im exited for the new chapter! =D yeah exactly TH, is for all ages, but some people dont think that =D i also sometimes wish i was 21 cause it sucks to be 15 in denmark you arent allowed to do anything :D but it still great to be young =D
Author's Response: hehe yes, it's great to be young. Don't wish it away. It goes by way too fast. rnrn
Date: 08/16/10 11:06 am Title: Never Gonna Be Alone
freaking amazing as always....
but why hasnt she told John yet?
she needa tell him soon so that he knows to back the hell up lol :D
Author's Response: Next chapter...she will tell John next chapter. The pregnancy would have been revealed to him in this chapter but Tom interrupted their conversation =]
Date: 08/16/10 08:57 am Title: Never Gonna Be Alone
Now im home from school and all the time i was at school, i was just soooo excited to come home so i could read the new chapter, i honestly have to say, I LOVE IT!!!!!! and i was defitnely woth the wait, it totally made my day i really love this story as usaul, this is just the greatest story on this site =D LOOOOOOOOOOOOVE IT!! it was soooooo great that Tom came back for a few days, sooo cute =D hope you are gonna upload soon :) and hope you enjoy your new car :D
Author's Response: Awe, you're too sweet! I'm so glad it was worth the wait =] Tom wasn't supposed to come home, but I decided he should =] I'm glad he did! rnrn
I will try and make your day again soon and have another chapter up tomorrow or Wednesday =]
Date: 08/16/10 01:41 am Title: White Wedding
you are NOT OLD AT ALL!! when you are 50 your old =D and i really dont mind you being 27!!!!!! :) i just think its awesome that people who arent a teengaer also are fan of tokio hotel =D and by the way so exited to read the new chapter you have uploaded, im gonna read when im coming home from school, cause i have to go to school in like 5 min :)
Author's Response: I feel old haha I wish I was 21 again. I loved that age. I had so much fun then. =D rnrn
Tokio Hotel is for young and old! =D
Date: 08/16/10 12:59 am Title: Never Gonna Be Alone
please dont get offended, this is for comments and reviews, and im giving my honest review as a reader. I remember my last review you got alil offended and wrote 3 paragraphs back, some of which you put caps on so it seemed a bit, aggressive... thats why i havent commented/reviewed in a bit--which i do apologise for--im sorry, but i really do feel john in the picture really is getting... i dunno, (dont hate me!) but old. Kim and Tom have the same arguments-which are repetitive, so it seems like your just running in circles, trying to keep this john in the picture. If you have a purpose for him, do it so he can get out of the picture so that tom and kim can raise twins without tom getting all stressed out over another man. i apologise one again, but if kim had any respect for tom, she would stop talking to him. friend or not. i dunno, i guess im just old fashioned... great chapter though! once again, dont get offended, this is a place for readers to express their opinions and i expressed it. I love your stories, so i hope you know that, i read them all the time.
Author's Response: I don't mean to take offense and I do apologize for previously. I don't hate you, don't worry =] I hope you don't hate me =] rnrn
I am trying to have things sorted out between Kim and John, even Tom for that matter. rnrn
I want to be like, it's my story and I'm going to write what I want to write, but then there I go again being a bit, I don't know...not so nice. I value your opinion...I really, truly do, but John is going to in the story as long as Kim goes home to Alberta or if she ever phones home. Things between her and Tom are solid, don't worry.rnrn
I don't know if any of this makes sense. I just woke up haha.rnrn
Thank you for taking the time out to review and I really do hope to hear from you again. =D
Date: 08/15/10 11:42 pm Title: Never Gonna Be Alone
I am so happy they finally got to see each other, your update made my night: )
Happy john is behaving and the surprise engagement party was awesome. Hey, he never commented on her growing belly, but she must not be showing that much yet cause no one commented on it and john didn't know or notice, right? Just curious since you mentoned it in other chapter. I absolutely love this story, will definitely read your one shot.
Author's Response: I'm so glad I made your night! =D I wasn't going to have Tom come back, but decided that it would be nice to have him there for the engagement party =]rnrn
Kim is showing, she was just wearing clothes that hid it very well. I guess if I would have described her clothing, then it would have been more clear. Sorry =/ rnrn
Kim was going to tell John that she was pregnant while they were talking but Tom interrupted them. She is going to tell him...soon. Probably next chapter =] Plus, she still has to tell everyone she's having twins. rnrn
Date: 08/15/10 03:33 pm Title: White Wedding
do you mind if i ask how old you are =D its totally fine if you dont wnat i dont wanna be nosey =D
Author's Response: I don't mind you asking. I'm an older TH fan so I hope you don't mind haha. I'm 27. SO OLD! UGH! LOL.
Date: 08/15/10 03:30 pm Title: White Wedding
im soooooo happy for you, i really LOVE the design of the Ford Edge!!! Me too, i would LOVE to get a audi, but i would rather have a q7 (white), cause i love big cars =D but to get a r8, would also be really cool =D but there are a loooooong time until i can get a car, im only 15 years old and in denmark you have to be 18 to get a driver license, that sucks!! =D i really hope you are gonna enjoy your car :)
Author's Response: =] Awe, well thanks. It's been a long time since I've had a new vehicle. The last care I had was a Grand Am and I had so many problems with it. It was time for something new. =D I am really liking this one so far. Maybe my next one will be an Audi haharnrn
Date: 08/15/10 02:40 pm Title: White Wedding
Okay :) so exited =D do you mind if i ask what car you bought? =D its totally okay, if you dont wanna say it :) just take the time you need :)
Author's Response: I don't mind at all! I was going to tell everyone when I posted my next chapter anyways because I am SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO excited that I got rid of my old one and bought a new one! HAHA. I got a FORD EDGE. I would have loved to buy an AUDI R8 but it's way out of my price range LOL. Anyways, it's silver and I love it!!
Date: 08/15/10 04:59 am Title: White Wedding
ops there was supossed to stand * take
Date: 08/15/10 04:58 am Title: White Wedding
Hey :) When are you gonna upload agian!, soooooooo exited about whats gonna happen! I know you have a writer block, so just taje the time you need :)
Author's Response: I am hoping to upload the next chapter today actually. I have it started, I just have to finish it. I had to work yesterday and then I went shopping for a new car. Today I am busy cleaning and then I have to go grocery shopping =/ Once I am finished doing all my lame stuff, I will start typing again haha. I should have it completed today...I hope! =D
Date: 08/14/10 07:47 pm Title: Here Without You
Twiiinnnsssss!!!!! =D I think I'd probably die if I had twins. Two babies at once? One is hard enough lol.
And sorry it took me a few days to review. I came home from Edmonton and then pretty much left again straight away to go camping. I thought I'd be so behind with this story, but I see that I didn't miss much haha. Oh well, you'll get over your writer's block soon!
And I see that you snuck me in there hehe. At least I'm talented in the story. In real life I'd probably be the shittiest photographer on the planet, but who needs to know that?
Author's Response: HAHA I know right! Two babies is crazy! I thought since she was only pregnant with one the first time, she might as well have two this time =Drnrn
I actually thought you were never going to come back! I was missing your reviews! Although, I only posted one chapter for each story so I guess you didn't have much to review HAHA. I am slowly getting over my writer's block and have started the next chapter. I hope it's better than the last few. I did like this one though. I enjoyed having Kim and Tom talk about the twins. That may have been my favourite part. rnrn
I did sneak you in there! Your part will be much bigger too, don't you worry! I have plans for you yet! =Drnrn
I posted another story too! Well it's not really a story...it's a ONE-SHOT. It's called 'STAY' and if you are bored one day and have nothing better to read....;Drnrn
I hope you enjoyed your trip to Edmonton and had a great time camping! =D