Date: 11/13/10 02:20 am Title: A Day To Be Alone
She suffered such a great loss, her behavior is toatally undestandable. This is so sad, I just hope at some point she realizes she is not alone, Tom is there fot her and heS suffering too. Thx zimmety. Please don't stop writing the story, I think last chpt was just such a shock to everyone that they got very upset. But that's a testament to how good and attached we are to thid story.
Author's Response: I completely understand how attached everyone is to the story and how much of a shock it was for everyone that Brian and the twins died. It was very hard for me to write...I am after all attached to every single one of these characters. I didn't mean to make anyone upset or anything...I had a feeling I would get this reaction. I didn't realize it would effect me this much though. I'm going to try my best to keep going with this story. I don't want to stop writing about Tom and Kim. They are too dear to my heart to quit. =]rnrn
I do think eventually Kim will realize that Tom is there for her...she just has to stop wanting to be alone. Tom just has to show her that he is in as much pain as she is as well. He has to stop keeping it bottled up in side. It may not seem like he is, but he's not really showing his true pain as much as Kim is. rnrn
Date: 11/13/10 01:50 am Title: A Day To Be Alone
its so sad but im really looking forward to what the future holds for them :)...don't pay attention to what other people say its your story and i know im not the only one who's still reading it :)
Author's Response: Thank you =] I try not to let what people say get to me...and I know what they were saying wasn't all that bad...it was just starting to drive me a bit crazy is all. rnrn
I'm looking forward to what the future has in store for them as well =D
Date: 11/12/10 05:50 pm Title: Heartache That Don't Stop Hurting
But they had names... This chapter is amazing, it's so sad and emotive. My eyes may have leaked as soon as Brian and the babies were mentioned... It's pretty horrible that had to happen, but i imagine it's for the good of the fic all around. I really hope Kim and Tom get through this, that they don't push each other away... What will happen to the room now, it's so pretty, but it's going to be so sad for them when they go home to see it. =[ And the wedding, will it happen sooner now there's no bump? Ah, i'm really looking forward to seeing what you put out next... =]
Thanks!
BrokenFeathers.
Author's Response: This wasn't the easiest decision for me...not at all. Thank you for understanding that this could be good for the fic =] I believe that it is...so thank you. Your comment is one of the few that is making me wanting to continue. rnrn
As for the room, it will most definitely be sad once Kim gets home from the hospital. It is still there, waiting for them. It will be hard. rnrn
The wedding may happen sooner, but I think Tom and Kim will have to get through this first. It may take time before any planning happens, but I do believe it will happen a lot sooner than planned =] rnrn
Thank you so much for the review. It has really made my day =]
Date: 11/12/10 04:45 pm Title: Heartache That Don't Stop Hurting
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! NO, NO, NO, NO !
Please tell me this isn't happening !
Tell me she will wakeup snd everythnig will be okay !
This is so horrible, I can't believe it !
I cried like a baby right now, this is really sad. I just cant believe, Brian and the twins ?!
Author's Response: I understand how shocked you are right now...you aren't the only one...believe me =/ rnrn
Brian and the twins, yes =[ I'm sorry...
Date: 11/12/10 03:02 pm Title: Heartache That Don't Stop Hurting
This chapter made me cry! why did you have to make the babies die?!?!
Author's Response: It made me cry too ='[rnrn
I'm sorry...I just had to do it...it wasn't something I wanted to do...it was just something that had to be done. =/
Date: 11/12/10 09:54 am Title: Heartache That Don't Stop Hurting
oh my god D: ;___;
Author's Response: I know ='[
Date: 11/12/10 06:38 am Title: White Wedding
forget all these damn haters. keep writing, your stories have been my favorite on this entire site!
I feel that you had to formulate deaths in this story, in order to successfully continue and make it more interesting; extend the story.
Once again, I love it, don't stop writing stories involving Tom =)
Author's Response: You do not know how badly I needed to hear that. rnrn
I've been going over and over and over in my head whether or not I should just do a complete re-write of the last chapter (which I DO NOT really want to do) or just take down the whole story altogether (I really don't want to do that either) Neither option sounds too appealing to me. I chose this direction of the story, just like you said, to make it more interesting and to extend it. I thought by the way things were going would make it more interesting, but I was wrong. It was just dragging on and on and on. It was leaving me in a rut; a writer's block rut. rnrn
Thank you so very much. Your comment has made me feel so much better. With this one review, I have been able to come up with the decision that has been bothering me for the past day and night.
Date: 11/11/10 10:52 pm Title: Heartache That Don't Stop Hurting
why!!!!
why did the babies die??
Author's Response: I'm sorry...I just...this was how things just played out =/
Date: 11/11/10 09:00 pm Title: Heartache That Don't Stop Hurting
how did I know you would take the babies away? -.- you suck! but it made me cry sooo badly!!! Poor Kim!! Poor Tom!!! AHHHH!!!! D: Great chapter, though. Soon more?
Author's Response: Well, I'm glad you liked it =] I'm contemplating a re-write...
Date: 11/11/10 08:30 pm Title: Heartache That Don't Stop Hurting
i'm not reading this story too many people get killed
Author's Response: They didn't get killed...they died in a car accident. I haven't had anyone else die in the story either....rnrn
If you don't want to read it anymore, then that's up to you. You have to understand though, this is my story. I am going to write it the way I want to. I value everyone's opinion greatly, but I'm going to write this the way I see fit. It was very hard to write this chapter...it wasn't like I wanted to have Brian die or have the babies die as well. rnrn
I'm sorry if I come off being a bit rude or whatever. I am actually starting to think that maybe I should stop writing this whole story altogether. Everyone has had a problem with one thing or another from the beginning. Maybe I should just take the story down and forget about it.
Date: 11/11/10 06:12 pm Title: Heartache That Don't Stop Hurting
heyy okey it sounded strange to me that tom was having twin girls but i didnt tell you to kill them it has hurt me too!!!!
Author's Response: It hurts me to do it =/ I'm sorry.
Date: 11/11/10 12:04 pm Title: Heartache That Don't Stop Hurting
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO :'( there gone! they can't be :'(
- but it was still extremly good, but really sad! :'(
Author's Response: I'm sorry...they are gone =[
Date: 11/11/10 01:45 am Title: Heartache That Don't Stop Hurting
.... yea i almost hate you. Its one of those i love but hate you things. I luff this story... but why does Kim/Tom get the shit end of the deal all the time... poor kids
Author's Response: Yeah, I almost hate myself for having to do this =/ I...I am wishing there was some other way I could have done things but there wasn't. I know it seems like they always get the shitty end of the stick, but soon, happiness will come there wa =] (I hope)
Date: 11/11/10 12:55 am Title: Heartache That Don't Stop Hurting
why
Author's Response: I really have no answer for your question. I'm still asking myself that one. =/ This was the way my head was telling me to take things and this was the way I took it. I was trying to come up with another solution to keep the babies, but nothing came to me. I am sorry =/ It kills me to do this...really it does =[
Date: 11/11/10 12:02 am Title: Heartache That Don't Stop Hurting
Awe man -cries-
I did not at all SEE THAT coming it was
MAJORLY intense. I can't believe it she lost her babies -cries more- .
Speechless.
Author's Response: I'm sorry hun =/ I didn't know how to exactly put in a car crash scene in the previous chapter so I just had everything go black. I tried writing up different scenarios, but nothing sounded right. I didn't mean to totally surprise you with this one =/ rnrn
Date: 11/11/10 12:01 am Title: Heartache That Don't Stop Hurting
Wow....I wanna cry now. That's just....wow. Its like I can feel her and Tom's pain. I actually thought she would have them this time. Aww and Brian is gone. So much sadness. Waiting for more.
Author's Response: I thought she would too =/ rnrn
It was hard letting go of Brian and the babies. =/
Date: 11/11/10 12:00 am Title: Heartache That Don't Stop Hurting
i finished the chapter this time, but, it's hard.
I was really attached. TO Kim, to Brian, to the girls, then their just gone.
What are you going to do with this now?
Author's Response: I know it's hard hun =/ I'm sorryrnrn
I was attached too...Kim is still there though. I know it sucks that Brian is gone and of course that they aren't going to have their girls anymore, but everything will get better...eventually. It will take time. Thank you for finishing it...it means a lot to me that you finished it. I know it was hard to do. The next few chapters may be sad, but I will try and have some happiness in them as well. rnrn
I have a few ideas on what's going to happen, but I think now things will start to move a bit faster. I was in writer's block rut for so long and now I feel like I will be able to get the story moving along better. I can't really say what's going to happen, but I think there is a wedding that needs to be planned =D
Date: 11/10/10 11:58 pm Title: White Wedding
...I might have to kill you :( But i'll still keep reading, because this series is by far one of my favorites. You write amazingly, my heart was breaking :(
Author's Response: Please don't kill me =/ If you kill me, then you wont have a story to read =] Then you wont know what happens =] rnrn
My heart was breaking just by writing it. =/
Date: 11/10/10 10:36 pm Title: Heartache That Don't Stop Hurting
I'm sorry. I couldn't even get through the chapter, I don't think I'll be able to read this story anymore.
Author's Response: I know it's sad...heartbreaking even...but things wont be like this forever. Everything will get better. It may take a few chapters, but it will get better. rnrn
I'm sorry you couldn't get through the chapter. It was a very hard chapter to write and I was very nervous about posting it. I almost couldn't go through with the whole thing. I hope you will decide to keep reading but if you don't, I understand.
Date: 11/10/10 10:28 pm Title: Heartache That Don't Stop Hurting
I wanted to cry. Hell I'm almost crying. I can't believe they lost the babies agian. But I loved it. You always do an amazing job writing.
Author's Response: I was crying writing it. It was such a hard chapter to write. rnrn
Thank you for the wonderful words. I'm so glad you like it. =]
