Date: 07/12/25 03:47 pm Title: We Have the Afternoon
I am a Chinese fan who came a bit late. Discovering this website is the happiest thing for me in recent years. I used to use bookmarking as commenting. I must say that I have read and bookmarked this story. Reading this story is undoubtedly a pleasure! Today I plan to leave a comment. Thank you for your story. You are an amazing writer.
Date: 09/09/13 11:09 pm Title: We Have the Afternoon
The fluff and the emotions I felt... is simply so surreal and wonderfully heart-wrenching. Perfectly done. I love this so so so much.
Date: 06/22/11 10:21 pm Title: We Have the Afternoon
really beautiful, I'm glad I found this fanfic! it would be lovely if could write more!
Author's Response: Thank you. ;__; That means a lot, I was so self-concious about this fic. Much love.
Date: 06/16/11 07:37 pm Title: We Have the Afternoon
It was really great, even though I too prefer plot over whole fic written only about sex. Anyway yours PWP was great, very natural I would say. I liked how you managed to add their feelings to it.
And I totally love this part:
"No, he’d certainly be no where without Bill. He wouldn’t be alive if Bill wasn’t, and if for whatever reason a solo-existence came to be unforeseen, in any way, shape or form, he’d fix it immediately. Girls, fame, even friends came and went, but twins didn’t. Your own being is the only thing one can rely on to be consistent in life, and Bill was just as much a part of Tom’s being as his own limbs, his own mind and his own heart."
So beautiful and touching!
Author's Response: I wasn't expecting new reviews on this story, thank you so much! Ah, it makes me so happy you managed to enjoy it, I was very self-conscious of this fic, hehe. Thanks so much for reading!! xx
Date: 04/28/11 10:59 pm Title: We Have the Afternoon
okay this is soo sweet:)!
Author's Response: Thank you!!! :)
Date: 09/10/10 12:48 am Title: We Have the Afternoon
I’m so glad I decided to check this other fic from you! This was very different from Berlin, anon obviously but that’s what I liked about it so much. It just proves that you can write many type of fic and be really good at it!
The kissing scene was so good, adorable and intimate! Good job with that!
Really good one-shot, sexy and cute, my favourite kind of story :)
Author's Response: I'm... well, I'm shocked that of all my others stories, you picked this old thing to read! XD Oh gosh... this was my first little experiment. I'm a tad embarrassed by it, but I'm super glad you found it enjoyable. I'm still so shocked you picked this to read. xD
I forgot! You asked why I hated Dsquared in a previous review, and I realise I totally forgot to answer... there isn't much to it, I suppose, I just think they're obnoxious as they come and I hate their style. To make it worse, they're now ruining Bill, (and do they ever dress him up in the most ridiculous, freakish things ever), so now of course, it's -personal-. I hate it. *scrunches nose*
Anyways, thanks for reading and reviewing! You're awesome! ^---^ I didn't expect any more reviews on this... so happy. :)
Date: 06/02/10 05:10 pm Title: We Have the Afternoon
For some reason, there are quite a few I disagree with when they say they suck at something. I disagree with you, I think you wrote an awesome piece of fic here.
Author's Response: Wow, thank you. I do appreciate it. Thanks for reviewing, really. =)
Date: 05/30/10 12:26 am Title: We Have the Afternoon
FANTABULOUS! I love the romance....it's incredible!!!
Author's Response: Wheee~~ Thank you for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you enjoyed it. =)
Date: 05/29/10 10:18 pm Title: We Have the Afternoon
LOL, I know what you mean about writing PWP/Lemon, I suck at that. I generally come with these complex plots that give me headaches more often than not. *shudders* And very rarely have I written a one-shot or just a plain pwp.
Anyway, I loved this, as always! The detail, the fact that Tom took his time into kissing, touching and pleasing his brother was divine! I really enjoyed this very much.
Author's Response: *Run, jump, tackle* You read this! *shrinks away in embarrassment* One-shots are for far more perverse minds than my own. (I never thought I'd say that. My word. *goes to check temperature*) To others it comes easily, in fact to my own mind it comes easily, but to paper (or Word processor alike), it's quite a challenge.
I'm so relieved to hear more positive feedback, I thought maybe I screwed up so bad that people would shun me for even bothering to post such ridiculous content. (LOL) I like my protective, delicate and loving Tomis, it's a bit of a shameless, sub-conscious indulgence.
Thanks for reading love, as always you give me a reason to smile. =)
Date: 05/29/10 07:14 pm Title: We Have the Afternoon
I loved that... xD
I'm glad you finished..
It was wonderful.
The sex was great, and it was perfect all together. Never heard the song though.
Your first oneshot? It's great. And for your first lemon, it was really hot and different from the others. Not many have Bill getting his dick sucked, and that made the fic even better. *_* < 3333
Lovely job, and I was really focused into it.
:3
Author's Response: Wow you've never heard it? It was a pretty big hit I think, though back in 2001/2002 I believe. xD It's not that great a song, to be honest. (Haha) rn
Yep, my first for a few things. *anxious* Ah, yeah - I understand people like viewing Bill in the submissive (where we all believe he belongs, myself included most days), but I don't see why people tend to avoid writing him on the recipient end of a decent blowjob.
(Hahaha. =__=;) That's like saying in heterosexual relationships, a girl is to never gone down on. (Pffff.) I'm not a fan of oral sex, but I view it as a neutral act, something shared between two individuals under a mutual understanding. There's no set positions of who does what.rn
Anywhooo~~ *fans increasingly red face* I'm very glad you liked it, I was very insecure about this fic. Thanks a lot for reading and gifting me with your lovely review!