Date: 06/02/10 08:11 am Title: Chapter 1: Kisses
aww so adorable, the kiss was soo awkward that it was just so endearing..
i b29; this story..i think you write so well..
the banner was just soo preety and eyecatching..
*offers you cookie*
please continue this story, because i really cant wait for more and im excited about the direction you are gonna take the story..
overall good first chapter and keep it up!
Author's Response: They tried their best; to Tom's credit, he gave it his best effort, haha! I'm glad that you like this, and thank you so much, love! =) I'm flattered that you enjoy my writing. ^^
Why, thank you! It was a fun banner to make, so I'm pleased that it's getting noticed! =) *accepts cookie and offers you one, too*
I'm really excited for this story, too; it's my big project, so I'm pleased that you're so excited about it as well! Thanks so much for the lovely review! ♥
Date: 06/02/10 01:44 am Title: Chapter 1: Kisses
cute! want to read more now :) i like where this is going very much, i think
Author's Response: Hehe, as soon as I post more, it'll be yours for the taking, I promise! =D I'm glad that you like where it's headed; this is my baby, and I'm very excited about it, so I'm glad that you like it! =D Thank you, love. ♥
Date: 06/01/10 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 1: Kisses
Naaaw, this is so sweet! :D
My favourite part is Bill on the swingset, imagining being on a trapeze in a circus.. I think he'd fit in perfecty, somehow *snickers* It's an adorably childish dream..
Aaaaaand, I really like how they both know Tom'll end up doing exactly what Bill wants him to, but that he keeps holding back in a futile attempt not to. He's being silly.. Come on, there is NO way anyone can ever say no to a pouting Bill..or any other Bill for that matter ;)
I love the beginning of this story, and I'm really looking forward to see what happens next! :D Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you! :3
I think everyone has a dream like that when they're little. =) He knew from a young age that he wanted to be in front of an audience ;) Hehe, I think he'd fit in really well, too! If Bill Kaulitz were in the circus as a singing trapeze artist, I'd have a ticket to every single show they did in my town, haha!
Haha, Tom likes to try and resist. Just because he's older, he likes to think that he's calling the shots, but they both know that he's wrapped around Bill's finger. ;)
I'm so excited for this fic, so I'm extremely pleased that you're enjoying it! Thanks so much! =D
Date: 06/01/10 08:01 pm Title: Chapter 1: Kisses
It's very sweet and I really like to see where you are going to take this :) More please!
Author's Response: Thank you! I can't begin to tell yo how excited for this I am, so I'm glad that you're enjoying it. I'll update soon, promise! =D
Date: 05/30/10 03:49 pm Title: Chapter 1: Kisses
This is adorable. You're a great writer! Can't wait to read more of this :D
Author's Response: Cute is what I aim for. :p (I couldn't even try to resist that pun, haha) Thank you so much! I'm glad that you're enjoying it. =D
Date: 05/30/10 01:59 am Title: Chapter 1: Kisses
weren't they cutes!!! :D:D just SO sweet! oo.. I love LOVE this.. :) MORE!?!
Author's Response: Bill and Tom at age seven definitely is on the top ten list of the world's most adorable things. =) Thanks so much, I'm pleased to know that you like it! More coming soon. <3
Date: 05/30/10 12:12 am Title: Chapter 1: Kisses
O: Good good.
Update soon!
xoxo
Author's Response: Many thanks! More to come soon. =)
Date: 05/29/10 08:23 pm Title: Chapter 1: Kisses
I saw this fic in the ``recent`` section and just had to read it cause of the amazing banner and intriguing summary... I really like fics where you see the twins grow up... really good first chapter, I can't wait to read more :)
Author's Response: Aww, thank you! Haha, I was ripping out hair over that summary, because I was (and still am *cough cough*) paranoid that I'd made it sound like a really boring story. XD And I have to admit that I'm quite pleased that someone noticed my banner. :3 If that's the kind of fic that you like, then you'll love this one (I hope, haha)! Thanks so much, though. I'm so glad that you like it! =D
Date: 05/29/10 08:01 pm Title: Chapter 1: Kisses
Haha, that was really cute! =]
Author's Response: Thank you! =)
Date: 05/29/10 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 1: Kisses
“Tom!” Bill fusses, and Tom knows that he’s not getting out of it. “I don’t know her! Ew, she probably has cooties.”
“Then my brother has them,” Tom realizes, panic darkening his face. “Oh, no! I’m going to get cooties!”
“Which is why you should kiss me now, before you get them,” Bill says with a triumphant smile. He’s quite proud of his logic.
I loved this so much! It's cute and fun and I absolutely adore that Tom just can't say no to Bill, heehee. Fantastic start, honey! I'll be looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Bill's always had Tom wrapped around his little finger; Tom just tries to act like it isn't true. ;D
Thanks so much! That really means a lot coming from you. ♥
Date: 05/29/10 06:31 pm Title: Chapter 1: Kisses
This is really really good you MUST continue it. PLEASE. -puppy dog face-
MORE.
Author's Response: Haha, of course I will! Thanks so much for the love, darling! =) <3333
Date: 05/29/10 06:23 pm Title: Chapter 1: Kisses
I saw this on the recent stories page and had to click on it once I realized you were the author of the stereo fic (:
oh, and your banner:
F A B U L O U S ^^
On to the first chapter.
*s q u e a k s*
I L O V E stories where Bill & Tom are itty bitty little rascals (:
[even if its only for part of the fic.]
They are just too damn adorable to imagine, especially in scenes like when Bill was on the swing set. (:
I can't really explain how terrific of a job you did in your description of the pre-kiss and then the actual kiss between the boys. If i were to hide behind a lamp post, and watch two little friends questioning 'kissing' and such, i perfectly picture this as to what I would end up seeing.
[hope that makes sense XD] I mean the nervousness, the 'cooties' thing, & the fact that they didnt even know what to do. Gosh, it was too cutee ^^
[h u m o r o u s & a w e (:]
As for the part where Tom & Bill saw Tom's older brother kissing a girl.
L M A O XD
Tom thinking his brother might not be so cool because he kissed a female, bahahah :D
To be honest, I was thinking Bill would see Tom's brother getting it on with some chick through the crack of the door, so i was a bit suprised [and relieved. children shouldnt see such things LMAO] that it was just a makeout session.
Super Cute Job (:
Looking Foward To Another Chapter Post ^^
-----Samantha
Author's Response: Aw, you're too kind! *blushes*. And I'm glad that you like my banner! =D
Hehe, thanks so much! I really wanted to write them as seven year olds, but I wanted to make sure that I actually made them act their age, so I did a lot of reminiscing over my own childhood for that. *coughcoughBillontheswingcough* :3 I'm glad that you feel that I portrayed it acurately! I owe a lot of that to the kids I've babysat over the years, along with my own childhood, and people from it, haha! Because that cooties thing? That was definitely me and my classmates as first graders. XD
Hehe, little Tom is still young and naive and hasn't discovered the joys of bodacious babes quite yet. XD Oh, I wouldn't scar Bill that much, haha. His innocence mustn't be tainted. ;)
Your reviews never fail to make me smile, so thank you so much! ♥
Date: 05/29/10 06:17 pm Title: Chapter 1: Kisses
Not gonna lie, I was laughing at the kiss, but not because it was funny, but just the mental picture of Tom with his tongue inside Bill's mouth and both sighing and looking up, wondering what the big deal is just cracked me right up, lol. XD
Boys, they're so cute.
Author's Response: First reviewer! =D Hahaha, that's exactly what I was shooting for with that. Awkward firsts. =) Poor babies, Tom was traumatized enough before Bill started demanding kisses, and then Bill got ambushed by Tom's tongue. XD
I'm glad you're enjoying it so far! Thanks for reading and reviewing. =D