Reviews For Pain of Separation
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Reviewer: Lindseyx45 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/10/10 03:23 pm Title: Chapter 12

aww poor Bill, but I feel like he is blowing this all out of proportion :( I'm glad they have friends now. :)

Reviewer: Lindseyx45 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/10/10 03:19 pm Title: Chapter 11

im kind of excited, you've updated twice, but i feel like i haven't been on here in a while. :)

Reviewer: Lindseyx45 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/07/10 08:21 pm Title: Chapter 10

tisk tisk tisk, Tom's smoking. haha. Poor Bill is getting jealous. :( But I really like it, it's starting to get more intense. Please update soon :)

Reviewer: Lindseyx45 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/06/10 02:31 pm Title: Chapter 9

aw, i want them to be back together. im still waiting for Bill or Tom to yell something about the divorce.

Reviewer: ibsen Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/06/10 02:29 pm Title: Chapter 9

i love it sooooo much i wanna know whats gonna happen.!!!! please update soon

Reviewer: ibsen Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/05/10 06:30 am Title: Chapter 8

love it

Reviewer: Lindseyx45 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/10 09:44 pm Title: Chapter 7

i secretly hope they get back in the same classes, i thought for sure Bill was going to yell something at Simone about the divorece. I'm so happy that you updated again today :)

Reviewer: SVANG1X2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/10 03:00 pm Title: Chapter 6

thats right Bill....get in Alexanders face....knee him in the nuts next time XXDD...hehe....O_O!!!!....class separations and along with the divorce...what else could go wrong....T^T

Reviewer: ibsen Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/10 02:12 pm Title: Chapter 6

I Totally love it!!! you are just such a good writer :) its a really great story!! Poor Bill and Tom, but i love it as always!! please update soon

Reviewer: freiheit089 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/10 02:09 pm Title: Chapter 6

Aw, I really like this story *__*

Poor twins .____.
First they parents decided to divorce and now they got seperated in school ...

Reviewer: Lindseyx45 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/10 01:06 pm Title: Chapter 6

aw, they shouldn't be seperated. thats so sad. :( i hope you update soon.

Reviewer: Lindseyx45 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/10 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 5

i totally love the little 'twin thing' but the story is so sad, i feel so bad for Bill and Tom, it totally clicked to me what the title means now. :(

Reviewer: SVANG1X2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/10 06:07 pm Title: Chapter 5

yum....emotional Bill...you gotta love that =B....though seriously Bill...you arent the only one hurting too...theres also Tom and what hes feeling too...think about him too....though i guess that since he isnt that confident and strong, he cant really hold his emotions well ^^....thats right run to your room and punch/sulk in your bed XB....well cant wait for more angst in the next chapter ^_^

Reviewer: ibsen Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/10 02:42 am Title: Chapter 4

love it

Reviewer: Lindseyx45 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/01/10 05:52 pm Title: Chapter 4

haha i love how they think they are going to have sex. i didn't even think of them getting a divorce :( that's so sad. update soon :)

Reviewer: XxKaulitzXxPunkXx Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/31/10 09:33 pm Title: Chapter 1

ahh! you can't stop updating. (: it really is great! as mentioned, it's different than most stories on here & you go into good detail. :D so, please, continue writing. I can't wait to read more of this
story!!! [:

Reviewer: Lindseyx45 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/31/10 04:26 pm Title: Chapter 3

okay, so you can't stop writing it now, i want to know what happens between simone and jorg. :( i cant believe no one is writing reviews, it's really really good .

Reviewer: SVANG1X2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/31/10 03:35 pm Title: Chapter 3

awww....no please continue this....its interesting....^^...plus is there mom being suicidal or something...seems like it =B...and poor Bill....so sensitive to almost everything and they way that the other kids bully him ^_^....depressed...but Toms is there to protect you....somewhat =B....

Reviewer: Lindseyx45 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/30/10 11:27 am Title: Chapter 2

i like it, it's not the same as the other stories on here. i feel like you go into more detail. i hope you update soon.

Reviewer: Lindseyx45 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/29/10 06:10 pm Title: Chapter 1

love it, its really good so far. update soon?
:D

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