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Reviewer: gothicvamp06 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/10 07:45 pm Title: Chapter 19

AWESOME!!!!!!!!!! Can't wait for the next one. I hope bill goes with his dad.....and then comes back after a few years

Reviewer: ibsen Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/10 04:17 pm Title: Chapter 19

love it, soo sad about your brother i hope he is okay!!!!! hope you will upload some more, if you find time to do it :) cause i loveeeeeeeee this story!!!!!!

Reviewer: SVANG1X2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/10 04:14 pm Title: Chapter 19

aw, its good that your brother is ok =D

aw again for poor Bill, all this hardship. maybe Bill is going to go with his dad so that he doesnt have to deal with all this unless his dad would rather take Tom and then Bill will be in a nightmare. would it matter cause Tom is changing and his attitude towards Bill is somewhat eh. well i still love this fiction and still want more. cant wait to see who gets to go where ^_^

Reviewer: ibsen Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/20/10 04:48 am Title: Chapter 18

love it

Reviewer: Lindseyx45 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/19/10 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 18

Bill has a little diva moment :) Tom just kinda sits back and watched it all go down.

Reviewer: s_n_a_r_k Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/18/10 11:17 am Title: Chapter 1

Hey chica. just started reading. found a small correction for you. unsuite should actually be spelled ensuite.

Reviewer: TheCouture Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/17/10 08:49 pm Title: Chapter 17

aww Bill is so adorable. :)

Reviewer: SVANG1X2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/17/10 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 17

awwww.....they made up.... NO!!!!! want some more angst...well there probably will be more later onz XXDD....dude just tell your parents that you know cause keeping it a secret is kinda getting annoying now ^^a....come on...need even more disagreement from the twins XB....

Reviewer: ibsen Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/16/10 10:23 am Title: Chapter 16

love it!! and please keep doing it because i really love it!!!

Reviewer: SVANG1X2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/16/10 12:17 am Title: Chapter 16

i is still reading this....^_^...awwww....this is really a sad chapter....for Bill cause Tom isnt talking to him and his mad at him even though he didnt do anything T_T....and seems like Tom doesnt kinda want to hang out with Bill no more....ugh the bulling T_T...though it needs more Billbulling =B....come on Tom...not everything is about you =(....what is gonna happen next O_O!

Author's Response: Aww thank you! I can assure you that there will be lots more Bill bullying soon. ;)

Reviewer: OrangeCheezIt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/15/10 09:35 pm Title: Chapter 16

I love this!!! LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVEEEEE!!!!!! :D I can't wait for more, whenever I see an update a jump off my seat! :D I really reallyyyy Love it!!! XD

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you're enjoying it. :)

Reviewer: SVANG1X2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/14/10 02:56 pm Title: Chapter 15

seriouslt drifting apart.....i think that Tom wants to meet new people and Bill doesnt want to T_T....what are they gonna do....Pissed of tom...Pissed off Bill...what is gonna happen @_@....

Reviewer: Lindseyx45 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/14/10 12:07 pm Title: Chapter 15

that was like the best chapter ever :)

Reviewer: Thfan7273 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/13/10 05:08 am Title: Chapter 14

U know I like this story :) it's not about how Tom and bill r so in love and kissing and having sex and stuff like tht :) and it's really good too :D i wish i cud write storys but Ima crappy writer :) nice job with this so far btw :)

Reviewer: SVANG1X2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/13/10 03:51 am Title: Chapter 14

oOoOo....Tom is really changing while Bill doesnt want to yet ToT....though i do hope to see that when of if they will start acting different towards each other or maybe Mainly Tom is the one distancing himself from Bill or something....please keep going...cause now its starting to move into something really good =D

Reviewer: Lindseyx45 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/12/10 09:00 pm Title: Chapter 14

Someones getting birthday sex!! Haha. I'm glad tom spoke up. Now he's getting rewarded.

Reviewer: Lindseyx45 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/12/10 09:00 pm Title: Chapter 14

Someones getting birthday sex!! Haha. I'm glad tom spoke up. Now he's getting rewarded.

Reviewer: ibsen Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/11/10 05:39 pm Title: Chapter 13

love it

Reviewer: Lindseyx45 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/11/10 05:25 pm Title: Chapter 13

haha i poor Bill got busted, hopefully Tom owns up. it made me laugh. :)

Reviewer: SVANG1X2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/10/10 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 12

oOoOo...seems like Bill is withdrawling from tom....seems like Bill doesnt want things to change and they are since Tom is doing stuff and not telling Tom and Tom wanting new friends...guess Bill cant say much to Tom cause it just makes him sadder T^T....Twins T_T....

WANT MORE! =B

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