Date: 07/08/10 06:03 pm Title: Chapter 5: Intruding Territories
i'm glad i make you happy!!! *feels life is complete*
ooooh andi you are just looking for trouble, aren't you? poor tom doesn't know what he's gotten into. if i were him i would be to scared to sleep cause i would imagine waking up with andi standing creepily in my room. yeeeaaaah, and that's why i'm not a character in your story. lol
i can't wait for more!!!!
p.s. tom and bill totally ike eachother.
p.p.s- here's a cookie!!! *hands TH cookie*
Date: 06/27/10 02:28 pm Title: Chapter 5: Intruding Territories
:OO GRRRR Andreas back of bill's toms!! :D:D This was good chapter it showed really well how much tom&bills relationship has progressed.. :):) I like!! More!! :D:D
Date: 06/27/10 12:19 pm Title: Chapter 5: Intruding Territories
I love this story a lotttt :DDDDD
But, technically, unless they aren't vegetarian in this story, Bill and Tom wouldn't eat Skittles. They have gelatin in them, so they're not vegetarian T_T I just learned this today. I'm vegetarian. They're my favorite candy. I'm seriously considering letting gelatin be a part of my diet... it's in so much yummy food :[
And OH MY GOSH. favorite songg? Right now it's Sonnenystem.
Date: 06/27/10 06:00 am Title: Chapter 5: Intruding Territories
I love the fact that your chapters get longer and longer :D More to read^^
And poor Tom, Andi is really being mean to him :(
My favorite song from Tokio Hotel is kampf der liebe :D
Date: 06/27/10 04:46 am Title: Chapter 5: Intruding Territories
Oh oh and I forgot my fav Tokio song has to be Don't jump and Scream for the old cd and from the new cd they are That Day and World Behind My Wall.
Date: 06/27/10 04:36 am Title: Chapter 5: Intruding Territories
Wow! Hun that was really really loooonnnnng!! lol but that's okay I love long chapter. So I kind of have mix feelings about this one. Tom should be with Bill that just how things work lol. love the fact that Tom is trying to win everybody's heart that's around Bill and not just Bill's. I feel bad for Andi poor kid has been around for nine years and Bill has not been able to pick up on the fact that he is in love with him. I feel that its a really small town and Andi feels that he will not find another gay guy in the town and that's why he is hell bent on being with Bill. On the other hand Bill should have just him and Andi time, they have been friends for nine years and then just because of Tom he does not give Andi any time for just them self that's not cool. I know where Andi is coming from when he talks about being replaced. Always hope you can update soon : )
Date: 06/27/10 03:58 am Title: Chapter 5: Intruding Territories
love love loved it! I feel bad for Andi but I really want Tom to win! Totally awesome story, it's got me hooked! =D
Date: 06/27/10 03:40 am Title: Chapter 4: Like Skittles
I really do like Andi but I'm rooting for Tom xD
Date: 06/27/10 03:20 am Title: Chapter 2: Not for Sale
“You don’t, by any chance, have skittles here somewhere do you?” he cocked an eyebrow.
The woman just looked at him blankly. “Sir?”
“Skittles?” he repeated.
“I’m sorry, Sir. I’m not sure what you’re asking about.”
Hahaaa! My favorite part!! &Bill is such a sweetheart. I really like this story so far! :)
Date: 06/26/10 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 5: Intruding Territories
OhMz' I need more (:
Its like so freaking great! And so interesting!
My favorite song of TH will be... OMGz... idk but definitely today's fav song will be Human connect to human lolz!
Cant wait for next chappy!
Date: 06/22/10 01:15 am Title: Chapter 4: Like Skittles
oh you wish it was his brother. but no, it's just his friend that has a very obvious crush on him. of course...*sigh* this story will have 18398834847329 chapters. mwahahaha! okay maybe not that much, you need to get out sometime...maybe a couple million less? can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Ahaha, he sure isn't! He's prince charming, isn't he?
Ahahaha, I would love to write that much! If only I have more time to write! I will write more and upload as soon as I can! Thank you for the support and love! I hope to read from you again next chapter! :D
Date: 06/20/10 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 4: Like Skittles
Uh oh. Poor Tom... This is cute though and I love the description of how Bill thinks of things like how he feels things and hears things reather than seeing them. I can see a friendship blossoming with Bill and Tom and it's super cute:)
Author's Response: Thank you for appreciating those bits! I'm trying to think about how Bill would feel and perceive the world and it came to this :D
Thank you for reading once more and I hope to read from you again!
Date: 06/17/10 12:42 am Title: Chapter 4: Like Skittles
Aww I feel kind of bad for Andi he needs to step up his game if he want to be with Bill. Tom is just super cute!! I don't know how long you should keep this going but as long as it feels right to you I would just keep writing hun. Can't wait for more : ]
Author's Response: He'll realize that soon :D real soon! Thank you, I'm happy you like Tom here XD
Aww, much love, I appreciate the support! This will probably be long, judging from how the chapters I've been writing are getting longer and longer. But I'll do my best to make it an entertaining read despite the length.
Thank you for another review!
Date: 06/15/10 06:12 am Title: Chapter 4: Like Skittles
I love the thought of Tom and his guitar^^, and Andi...oh-oh, poor Tom xD
Author's Response: Thank you! I've always wanted to write about Tom and his guitar, but this is my first fic so I just wanted to insert it wherever it felt natural haha.
Thank you for the review! Hope to read from you soon!
Date: 06/15/10 03:09 am Title: Chapter 4: Like Skittles
XD They're good.. Andi's stupid AND jealous... :D:D Tom&bill at the begin of new relationship (what could be more lovelier :D).. :D:D Hopefully everything goes well.. :):) I like u'r writing style.. really.. :)
Author's Response: Thank you! Why, he is, he surely is XD We all hope everything goes smooth sailing from here!
Thank you for another review! Hope to see you next chapter!
Date: 06/14/10 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 4: Like Skittles
Omgz! O:
I want to read more :I I need to read more.
Pleaseee update soon :3
Author's Response: I've just updated!
Thank you so much for the support!
Date: 06/14/10 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 4: Like Skittles
Firstly, let me start out by mentioning I was so happy when I found out you updated this today. It's been on of those lazy days for me and I've been reading fics off and on, & I was thrilled to know I could add another chapter of this one to my mental reading inventory. [oh goodness, i obviously couldn't think of something better to call it than 'inventory' XD]
I was seriously beyond stumped at trying to choose a color to use for this fic. But as you can see, I ended up going with a green. Mainly for the end of the chapter, where Bill's Mom and Andi [the color mainly for Andi] emerged back into the shop. His eye-narrowing looks at Tom just exuded an uncomfortable jealous feeling from him, so I referred to that saying, "the green eyed monster"
I can completely sense there will be some dramatic tension filled moment between Tom & Andi. I mean, Tom could barely look at him, and still knew he was in deep XD
I really enjoyed this chapter, as I enjoy all the ones you have posted so far. The little bonding moments between Bill & Tom while Bill's mom has to leave for some unexpected reason, leaving the two alone to chat vigourously,questioning each other, is so cutee (:
Just curious, the mentioning of trust issue and being too trustworthy of Tom & Bill, is that foreshadowing a later scene, or merely just a fact that I am reading too far into? (:
& I have to be completely honest when I say it's so cute how you wrote, "Catsup" in the mother's dialogue. Sometimes I think that name is more adorable than, "ketchup". Plus, I think 'Catsup' gives off the more small-town-old-fashioned-styled vibe
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Im so anxious for the next chapter. The little hint you gave at the end:
"some limits are just meant to be crossed"
Oh goodness, I only have a MILLION different thoughts of what that could be hinting towards (:
& you asked us, readers, how long we think this story will run. hmm, im not quite sure. It really just depends on how quickly you want an intimate relationship to develop between Bill & Tom, so I can't really tell.
But I shall be a reader no matter how short or long (:
------Samantha
p.s. if the site notify's you that a review was deleted, that was my fault. sorry :/ the color green I used was too bright [at least for me to see] on the review pag] so, just to be safe, i went back and changed the color. just to let you know XD
Author's Response: I'm very happy to hear that! Knowing that my story can brighten your day brightens mine just as well!
I'm really touched that you put much thought into the colors you use in your reviews, this makes me wonder what color you would be using this next chapter!
I'm still building up the tension, but I hope the events in the latest chapters gives you a dose of the tension you're anticipating XD And thank you, I'm happy that you enjoyed this chapter! I was worried that the interactions between the two would appear forced, I tried my best to make it nice and casual :D
Ahaha, sharp as always. Like pieces in a puzzle, I'm laying down all the small pieces for the bigger picture :D please look forward to it!
Aww thanks! The Catsup thing is pretty random, I just thought it sounded better (at least when I see it in text on the screen) compared to Ketchup, lol.
I hope this chapter meets your expectations! It's really longer than usual, I hope it doesn't disappoint!
I'm happy to hear that and I am very grateful for the support. The story will probably run a few chapters longer, seeing as I'm writing way past the number of chapters I intended haha. I hope you'd stay as the story gets longer and longer.
And oh, I didn't get a notice, I guess it's fine, lol! Also, hope to read from you again! Thank you so much for another wonderful review!
Date: 06/14/10 09:48 pm Title: Chapter 4: Like Skittles
awwwwwwwwwww!!! i love this chappie!!!! more soon please!! i really love this plot that youve got going!
Author's Response: Aww, thank you! This encourages me to write more :D I hope you like the chapter I've recently uploaded, it's a bit longer than usual tho!
Date: 06/05/10 03:09 pm Title: Chapter 3: Just Like a Prince
Lmao the last line was too funny! Andi seems like a good friend that wants more and Bill is to dumb to see it. Ughh I hate small towns like this everybody knows everybody and the only thing to do is talk about other peoples lifes! Anyways hope you can up date soon : )
Author's Response: Haha thank you! He is, Bill is pretty dense, lol. Gossiping happens to be their hobby in this small town haha!
And sorry for the late response, I got really busy lately. I just updated today, I hope you like the latest chapter. Thank you for reading and reviewing and I hope to read from you again next chapter!
Date: 06/03/10 12:00 am Title: Chapter 3: Just Like a Prince
Andreas is sweet:) I love that he takes such good care of Bill and that he cares so much that he would beat Tom if he hurt Bill. Some how I don't think that is Tom's motive here. I think he actually felt bad and now wants to make it up to Bill. Bill seems really sweet too. I'm glad he seems so happy in spite of what has happened to him. I love Bill in that way. He seems this way for real as well.
Author's Response: He sure is :D
I'm happy that you're liking the characters so far! And yes, I guess I wanted to write Bill with his usual cheerful and preppy goodness :D
Thank you for reading! And I hope to read from you again next chapter!