Date: 08/19/10 01:51 am Title: Chapter 6 - Tom's house.
lol wow how old is the step mum? she sounds realllllly young haha, anyways jsut saw this in the resent stories its good i'm intrested on how this continues ^_^
Author's Response: Maybe you'll find out ;] Well thank you for reading, and reviewing ofcourse! <22
Date: 08/18/10 11:03 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Tom's house.
Lol Bill at the end
:)
Author's Response: <33
Date: 07/30/10 05:37 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Who said being ill was a bad thing?
L quote? I dnt get it lol. But I love the story so far!
Author's Response: Yeah I added a little quote from the anime Death Note, never mind ;] Thanks for your review <33
Date: 07/29/10 02:36 am Title: Chapter 5 - Who said being ill was a bad thing?
Wow, obviously Tom is attracted to Bill but I wonder how he is going to react when he finds out that he is a bet?!
I can't for the next chapter and I hope you upgrade it soon!!!
:)
Author's Response: Oh yes, the excitment xD Thanks for your review <33
Date: 07/28/10 05:52 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Who said being ill was a bad thing?
The L quote?
*is confused*
But nice chapter ^^
Author's Response: Don't worry about it, I just added a little quote from the anime Death Note. Thanks for you review <33
Date: 07/25/10 04:01 am Title: Chapter 4 - Unconsciousness
Poor Bill :) Such embarrassment getting the wrong kind of attention, but he got Tom's so he's good. Loved the handholding, and also the cigarette sharing from last ch. Tom and Bill click beautifully and I really like the gentle way Tom treats Bill through out the fic. good job
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing so much! Yes, this is a gentle fiction at the moment, but I'm sure lots of twists and turns will occur!
Date: 07/25/10 03:42 am Title: Chapter 3 - Dreams
I really like the little details of Bill's dull life. What is a paradise of relaxation to the tourists is the epitome of boredom to others. However, the parts of Bill functioning with his parents, the shrugs the boys pay to their addictions - all parts that flavour this story. I enjoy it a lot.
Date: 07/25/10 03:20 am Title: Chapter 2 - Unfair bets
The ending of the chapter was priceless, but before we got to that, I really thought Gustav was a foul prick as well :D So far so god. Tom seems interested in Bill and Bill obviously wants to go further. A shame his true infatuation is mixed into a bet because I think he could have managed the same thing without the money issue. Then again... he really needs the money ...
Author's Response: Oh so many trouble right? Yeah, I don't know if Gustav is a good character or not. Thanks for reviewing <33
Date: 07/25/10 02:23 am Title: Chapter 1 - Money willing to Win
I loved this! I like how you put them in an English environment. It puts a different mood to the school theme than high schools :D Bill is far out with all this gambling, but he takes a huge risk this time with the love project. I hope he wins. Am gonna read next ch.
Author's Response: Well I don't think I've ever read a fic here which has clearly said it's based in England, so I thought, why not? And most of the readers on this site are American, and I thought they'd be interested about reading and English based fic. If that makes any sense...thanks for your review! <33
Date: 07/25/10 01:10 am Title: Chapter 4 - Unconsciousness
Man! what did Bill cut his hand on!!?? Great chapter! CONTINUE!! I can see this being featured!
Author's Response: He got loads of paper cuts from a folder in his bag ;] Oh, that would be amazing ^.^
Date: 07/24/10 05:20 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Unconsciousness
hahahahaha i cant wait 4 the rest
Author's Response: Thank you so much <33
Date: 07/24/10 05:04 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Unconsciousness
I love this so much. Seriously, I love it!
Tom and Bill are flirting~~. =D
Author's Response: Yay! <33
Date: 07/24/10 04:50 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Dreams
Oh, no! What's wrong with Bill? Obviously, he can't handle blood well, but... is he sick?
Author's Response: He's not sick in this chapter, he just fainted at the sight of blood ;] Thanks for reviewing <33
Date: 07/24/10 04:34 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Unfair bets
Eep, I'm loving this! I wonder how Gustav knows Tom is bisexual! I bet Tom's secretly in on this bet. XD
Oh, I'm wondering now: what's Tom going to do when he finds out that Bill's flirting with him for a bet? O_O
Date: 07/24/10 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Money willing to Win
I don't understand why this doesn't have like, hundreds of reviews. This is such an interesting premise, and surfer!Tom? I love it!
You're a great writer, and this is only chapter one, but damn, I'm totally sold on this. I'm tracking.
Author's Response: Aww you're too kind. That would be amazing though, hundreds of reviews *Blushes* Thank you ever so much for tracking, I just I hope I don't disapoint! <33
Date: 07/24/10 04:11 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Unconsciousness
hahah thats was funny i loved it A lot
Author's Response: Thank you so much <33
Date: 06/21/10 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Dreams
oh wow poor bill is he afraid of blood
Author's Response: xD
Date: 06/20/10 01:51 am Title: Chapter 3 - Dreams
Awww! At least I know never to drink before class, then smoke before class, then get seveal papercuts in less that 1 hour (I think O.o?) It's bad lol
Author's Response: I'm glad my stories have educational meanings >.<
Date: 06/19/10 07:04 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Dreams
Uh oh! :O lol
Author's Response: ^.^
Date: 06/08/10 09:18 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Unfair bets
Bisexual Tomi... I likey 8D
Author's Response: Yay!