Date: 11/10/10 10:41 am Title: Chapter 7 - Partying with enemies is never a good idea.
I'm more curious about the whole Andreas thing now than I was. Another fantastic chapter =)
Date: 11/10/10 10:24 am Title: Chapter 6 - Tom's house.
Great chapter. I love this fic so much. On to the next!
Date: 11/10/10 10:10 am Title: Chapter 5 - Who said being ill was a bad thing?
xDDDD On to the next!
Date: 11/10/10 09:55 am Title: Chapter 4 - Unconsciousness
Georg is so funny, I love his character. He makes me laugh =D Great chapter!
Date: 11/10/10 06:47 am Title: Chapter 8 - Country Club Surprises
*g* Had to re-track a bit to get into what happened the last time and wow, I'd forgotten how serious it was.
Even though Bill doesn't want Milly to tag along, he does feel responsible, so good job, Bill :)
Back at home, his little planned party is spoiled again by Milly when she manages to capture the bed after all.
In the morning once more she throws a minor drama, and that is my only 'but' to this chapter. Milly steals the show too much and I'd honestly rather read about Tom and Bill and not what happens in her little teen life and how she constantly steals the show :)
I can understand how the drama with Milly works for this part of the story, so fear not, I like it very much.
Just less Milly for my taste.
I loved the way Bill got distracted when Tom came back for the bathroom and yeah, he must be a glorious sight :)
I really look forward to how the evening will proceed for them if Tom tells Bill he likes him. It's really becoming a problem now that Bill has that damn bet. It's bound to end sourly, unless Bill has a way to sneak out of the bet.
Also fun detail with Georg being at the country club, too :)
I look forward to the next part! *Maria
Author's Response: Thank you for sharing your opinion! I will keep the things you've said in mind for the nexh chapter, where Milly won't be in it <33
Date: 11/10/10 03:35 am Title: Chapter 8 - Country Club Surprises
yayayayayayayay! I am literally doing a superfast happy dance and squealing. Something I haven't done in months. Please don't stop writing on this. I need more. It's like a drug!
Author's Response: Oh I'm so happy you like this story. It so hard for me to tell myself that the stories I write are on the internet and people all around the world could be reading them...yeah. It's crazy! <33
Date: 11/10/10 02:26 am Title: Chapter 7 - Partying with enemies is never a good idea.
I LOVE IT!
Author's Response: <33
Date: 11/10/10 01:51 am Title: Chapter 5 - Who said being ill was a bad thing?
Yay! Yay! Yay! I love this story. It makes me very happy.
Date: 11/10/10 01:13 am Title: Chapter 3 - Dreams
lololololololololololol OMG! I have been laughing my ass off. I just have to say thank you for writting this. I have been having a hard time life wise for the last couple of months and this is helping me by giving me a reason to laugh.
Date: 11/10/10 12:53 am Title: Chapter 2 - Unfair bets
Dear god. I'm hooked. Like seriously hooked. I love it!
Author's Response: Hehe, I don't often get hooked on stories on this site. So it's amazing to think you're hooked on mine! Thank you so much! <33
Date: 11/10/10 12:45 am Title: Chapter 1 - Money willing to Win
Oh! Cute story so far.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! <33
Date: 11/09/10 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Dreams
Aww they are really liking each other now. Did Bill faint? Haha, nice =) Tom is so sweet. I love this.
Date: 11/09/10 11:10 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Unfair bets
Love it!
Author's Response: :D
Date: 11/09/10 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Money willing to Win
This is so good so far =) Love it!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! <33
Date: 11/09/10 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Country Club Surprises
I'm so glad you finally updated, I've missed this fic like crazy! It's so cute and sweet, and I love the fact that you're pacing and taking your time.
Lol, Milly is just a young girl trying to figure things out, but Bill's reactions to her are priceless. XD
Author's Response: Yes, I am very sorry it's taken me so long :'[ but hey, I'm back on track! <33
Date: 10/14/10 02:37 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Partying with enemies is never a good idea.
bleh didnt kno u had U/D srry. just saw it after I saw u commented back on my review hehe. Anyways Milly seriously needs to not do that, I mean shes 14 gosh. ok lame review but I can't do anything about since my hands are forzen and I don't exactlly want to type any more lol. so yeah luved the chapter though ^_^ xoxo-SS
Author's Response: Get those hands in the warm please! Thank you for your review <33
Date: 09/23/10 10:44 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Partying with enemies is never a good idea.
I can't wait until the next chapter, it's really good! :-)
Author's Response: Thank you <33
Date: 09/05/10 01:17 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Partying with enemies is never a good idea.
i caught upp!
uh oh, milly.
wut happend between bill and andres?
oooo bill and tom!!
amazing!
Author's Response: Hehe I know xD <33
Date: 09/04/10 11:14 am Title: Chapter 7 - Partying with enemies is never a good idea.
Okay, so I love this story, so far it is just very well written and the plot is amazing (:
I love the way you write your character, as it seems so much more REAL than a lot of other stories on here (:
I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you ever so much <33
Date: 09/03/10 05:06 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Partying with enemies is never a good idea.
O_O
Now I really Want to know what happened between Andreas and Bill
:D
Author's Response: Just wait and see... <33