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Reviewer: justwin Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/10/10 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 4: Hilf Mir Fliegen (Help me fly)

OMG.DID BILL JUST JUMP?????0.O
Nahhhh!!!it wasnt whiney at all!its that lil part of bill which we all wished we knew about, and u miss gilgamesh just let us in a little on that part of his life.:)
i wish it was a lil longer though!!!!!!
keep writing.cuz ive stopped for awhile now.busy with my stuffs, sad sad. but ill get on it real soon!!!!!
ps: dont stop writing, or u'l get lazy, like moi. :)

Author's Response: he jumped ONTO the wall. hahaha...and then just lay there flat, soaking up rain.rni'll add more to it soon!! i wanna make this POV a little longer. so what u see is only the first part XD

Reviewer: justwin Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/04/10 11:26 pm Title: Chapter 3 Hello, C-Bill!

HAHAHAHAHAH!IM HOOKED! firstly, the J&J lotion., Then, the freaking chicken wings!LOL TO THAT!dude, i laughed freaking loudly!(am still laughing).Honey is CAINEN HOTTER THAN BILL??i aint want no threesome going on here!i only want bill!!!ps:the real one, not a cutout.hee!omg u just stopped at a cliffhanger(to me it is), i wanna know what happens next!

and you want porn??i seriously LMAO-ED at that part! no no no, my story is rated G, what about yours?? 18SX??
my next chapters coming out on monday!yours better as well!XD

Author's Response: mmm, Cainen's hot, more MANLY, but Bill's definitely hotter :)rnyup yup, you will soon XDDrnrnhah, you better change yo rating then!! i think mine is PG-13. hahahahha. that aint gonna stop ME.rn

Reviewer: justwin Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/01/10 01:06 am Title: Chapter 2 Dog Drool

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAH!YOU MADE ME LOL! GREAT ARM!!HAHAHAHAHA, NO SHIITTT!!!!!and woah, i don't know any estonian words, your turn to teach!me likes the way you describe details in your story! and Tom + thuds = LOL. its gooodddddd!now u got me drooling for more!MORE MORE MORE!COME ON!GET IT ON!

Author's Response: XDD ME HAPPY I MADE YOU HAPPY!!!8D 8D rnI was hoping you'd like the great arm, and cough the SoB part XD :) oh, and i;ve run out of Estonian. heh. Cainen and Poldon and blabla daddies are all elvish names :) gotta make them sound speshel!rnrnAnother chapt coming up!! i will try~!! still haven't made up my mind totally how the faery world works..but i got a little idea, which you shall see in time. >:D

Reviewer: justwin Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/29/10 12:40 am Title: Chapter 1 My Hand is Nearly Masticated

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!OMG! its HILARIOUS! but seriously Renee, you didnt have to tell everyone about my unearthly appetite (ahem, i had consumed 2 big macs before, so you weren't writing fiction at that part,lol!). i love it so far, its DIFFERENT from what i mostly read around here. HAHAHAHA. you're maddd!!!!its so punny as well.:D

Author's Response: Hi! oh really, you kid about the BMacs!! well, *high fives!* i can too, it aint herculean~ they is yummmy.rni'm gonna make you more fwaaaahhh soon. XDD just plotting it out now :)rnrn

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