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Reviewer: MidnightsRose Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/09/12 01:58 am Title: Chapter 9: The Hamburg Hilton

awe come on you have to write more i'll die if you don't

Reviewer: justwin Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/23/10 01:26 am Title: Chapter 9: The Hamburg Hilton

EARTH TO JUSTWIN! CAINEN IS SMOKING HOTTTT! I can sooo imagine! Like the whole faery concept going on, i do. It feels so real for me! only one issue, the REAL justwin aka MOI, is not wanting bill anymore, me want cainen! i hope cainen has a thing for 'me' !!!! i wanna be with cainen and watch bill die in agony! OAO

Author's Response: OHAHAHAHAHAH!! This is hilarious! XDDD YAY i purposely put more Cainen scenes in the story for you, beb. We'll just see how much agony i can put Bill through then. hehe.rnOh noes, had it been the OLDER Bill with the Zimmer hair...it would be a completely diff story huh. :(

Reviewer: DjLiz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/21/10 03:27 pm Title: Chapter 9: The Hamburg Hilton

OMG!!!!!!renee! U CHANGED UR WRITING STYLE DIDNT YOU????BUT WHY? I WANTTTT/NEEDDDD/ORGASMED AT UR SNAP SNAP SNAP STYLE!

but i loveee cainen looking emo bit!love love love!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: did you really feel it was diff? :D I just put more background scenes into the story, teehee!

Reviewer: DjLiz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/20/10 02:24 pm Title: Chapter 8 The Other World

awwwwwwwwww i heart the im coming for mecki part! i really do! renee, ur writing style is really diff! really,really diff like SNAP SNAP SNAP kind of thing, no lagging (like mine-uh so archaic) no bullshitting, no fuss, everything is free straight to the point , i wanna eat u up style. AND I LIKE IT! it's new it's fresh,bewildering yet enticing! continue the good job!

Author's Response: you should SEE MY FACE NOW. it's like a mix of d-awwwwwhhhh and my cheeks are JUST bursting with HAPPINESS.rnthis means sosososososo much to me ;A; Mhhh! *Happygasms!!*rn*rolls around the bed HAPPY* rneh eh yours tak archaic la babe, it's more adult, i feel. :)rnand eh THANKS, seriously, imma sleep sweeeeetly tonight cos of your review. <33333

Reviewer: justwin Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/19/10 11:32 pm Title: Chapter 8 The Other World

OAO OAO WHY SO SHORT???!!!!!!!!! OAO
Okay, that was cool, the whole description on the faery part. like damn, woah. It sure as hell felt like wikifaery!LOL. Omggg.....coincidence shizzzzz, a real faery dog! Seriously, you make me want Cainen, not Mecki!

Author's Response: awhh ; w ; i was typing up to 4am teehee! and was like oraaait juet upload la, shorter is easier to read also.rnfufufu NEXT CHAPT on the way!rnrnooh! close! it was GOOGLE FAERY.rnLIKE THERE ARE all these sites telling you8 that faeries are real and all sorts of plants to attract/repel them..and it just tak masuk akal for me to imagine an ASIAN faery. seriously. rnwe get orang minyak! TATrnrni DO? hm, Caninen you sparkle too much!! *swats*rnBilla needs more Attention and air time~ so..next time he'll get it!!

Reviewer: DjLiz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/19/10 06:27 pm Title: Chapter 6 We’ll both be Angels

smoke will kill you. HAHAHA

Author's Response: i didn't knowie what Bill would do to release stress so pakai tembak jer!!rnNoow i found out he TALKS. oh well next time! There's a reason why he's grumpy, hehe.

Reviewer: DjLiz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/19/10 05:37 pm Title: Chapter 5: I get lucky.

the ring ghost part killed me XD

Author's Response: oosh!! Successful attempt at humour huzzzahhhhh

Reviewer: DjLiz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/19/10 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 4: Hilf Mir Fliegen (Help me fly)

haish...u know this is wat they really are facing in reality i bet. sometimes i feel blessed to be among the mass,where i dont have to give much,u know?compared to a celeb? their world is for public view,reminds me of the truman show. where truman is just a puppet =/

Author's Response: ; w ;rnthey pay this price for us, the fans. So we'll respond by voting like 26 times for them for awards like that crazy lady JUSTWIN~~ I pun vote 3 times jer. no more email adds hahaha.rnOh right..can use fake ones. ah wtv!!

Reviewer: DjLiz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/19/10 05:10 pm Title: Chapter 3 Hello, C-Bill!

I do NOT want to glow at college.

XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

Author's Response: yeeheehee<33333333

Reviewer: DjLiz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/19/10 05:02 pm Title: Chapter 2 Dog Drool

son of a bitch! hahaha i loveee this part! funny!

Author's Response: ooh yay! -happy wiggle- 8D

Reviewer: whiterain Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/05/10 08:45 am Title: Chapter 7 To Tear, To Rip

Like the description on the faery court etc etc. 6 months! That's so long! Poor Justwin and I see you effectively forgot Justina and the brother??

Aww, when is Bill going to meet Justwin?!?! Tensionnnnn

Author's Response: KYAA but the description is so short~rnYup. too many characs! i even left out dad. >DrnHAHAHAH you'll see bby!! i have an inkling of what to do :)

Reviewer: gilgamesh Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/10 08:58 am Title: Chapter 7 To Tear, To Rip

YEPO totally irrelevant!!
nahh Cainen looks like a scary volks doll. will get a reference pic soon!!

i steall your ideaaasss/ >D

Reviewer: justwin Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/10 06:19 am Title: Chapter 7 To Tear, To Rip

OMGGGGGGGGG, FIRSTLY WTFFFF??? RENEE AND JESSICA ARE HERE??/OLOLOLOLOLOLOL!totally irrelevant to my story though, k? hahaha, wth weyyyyyyyy. AHEM, long and nice chapter! BIG MAC? JUSTIAN? NO DUMP IN TWO DAYS? HAHAHAH, GOOD ONE!
damn, i feel so lazy to update laa...but real soon i guess.!!!
why do i have this feeling cainen is bil's lookalike?

Author's Response: YEPO totally irrelevant!!rnnahh Cainen looks like a scary volks doll. will get a reference pic soon!!rnrni steall your ideaaasss/ >D

Reviewer: whiterain Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/02/10 12:49 am Title: Chapter 6 We’ll both be Angels

haha can't wait to read more. BIll being insecure without makeup is funny haha.

Author's Response: hope it wasn't too out of charac!! hahahha.rni was pondering how much description of justwin to put in, cos i don't want her to become a mary sue. wuhhhh.

Reviewer: whiterain Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/02/10 12:45 am Title: Chapter 5: I get lucky.

ohohohohohohohoho like yaoi irl!!! disturbing!! haha. Got confused at first because I tot it was the Cainen Bill haha. Sexy chapter ;3

Author's Response: XD awh you~ looooolllllll you is funny!!rni was trying really hard to wite lovey dovey and lol, fail attempt one. rnYAOII??? but it's het bby!rnbut HEI since you thought it sexy i guess i no fail after all. woohoo~

Reviewer: whiterain Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/02/10 12:41 am Title: Chapter 4: Hilf Mir Fliegen (Help me fly)

aww. emo... but where is JUSTWIN KOIT

Author's Response: i think she's yabbering with Cainen. gotta put more stuff in~ i'm working the faery thing around wicked lovely. *no creativity/lazy*

Reviewer: whiterain Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/02/10 12:39 am Title: Chapter 3 Hello, C-Bill!

Haha. I don't wanna glow in college. hilarious! haha. Btw, love the vulnerable Bill who almost broke his nose by nodding. I see you use ernie language here. "meep" "change eet"

Author's Response: yeah!! LOOOL i can't get rid of meyself!! XDrnILUUU BBYY

Reviewer: whiterain Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/02/10 12:36 am Title: Chapter 2 Dog Drool

I'm dying haha. Super funny. Justwin great arm.

Author's Response: XDD gld you like it hunny~

Reviewer: justwin Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/01/10 12:55 am Title: Chapter 6 We’ll both be Angels

DUUUDEEEEE!!!! BILL IS SO DAMN CUTE HERE!!! SO CHEERY AND WHINY! HAHAHHA. ILOVED THIS " say it. say it out loud" - VAMPIRE! hhahahahahahahahahahahhahahaha im laughing my fkin asss offf!!!!!omg!!genius!!!!!hahahahahah, it was good cuz there was so muchie of bill in it!!awesome writing skill! AWESOME!
ps; dunno how to do banner la.:(

Author's Response: hee, i think i might switch POV more often to Bill..cos it IS TH fanfiction after all nia? :)rnBill..is hard to write. But i am supa glad you like it!!rnrnhahahahhaah TWILIGHT nvr fails to entertain.rnrni'll explain how to banner in Fb. see you thr!rnbut you can look here too. rnrnhttp://fiction.tokiohotelfiction.com/viewpage.php?page=bannerguidernrnOr get help from a banner artist. http://fiction.tokiohotelfiction.com/viewpage.php?page=bannershoprnrn

Reviewer: justwin Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/19/10 12:09 am Title: Chapter 5: I get lucky.

OH MA GAWDDDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!!
I KISSED BILL KAULITZ!!!!!HHAHAHAHAHA!SHIT WEYH, I LOVE THAT SCENE, I CAN IMAGINE AND I WANT IT TO HAPPEN DAMN IT!!!ahhhhhh!!!!!!!
That was a very good scene really. VERY GOOD. Dunno why you doubt yourself! Escort was great, yeah, but yours is different mahhh..this is a fairytale! and i love it - HONESTY THERE.

Author's Response: *BIG GOOFY GRIN*rnI GIVE you more soon.teehee.

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