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Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/12/13 03:08 am Title: Chapter 8: "It's okay."

Please tell me this isn't abandoned...PLEASE

Reviewer: Jingolette Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/07/12 11:21 am Title: Chapter 1: “Hey, you’re not married yet, Trümper.”

Read it again and forget your story plot almost...when would you update? I love your story though but I think this would not be on hiatus totally...hear from you anytime...^_^

Reviewer: Jingolette Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/25/11 12:41 am Title: Chapter 1: “Hey, you’re not married yet, Trümper.”

All's been told in fairness for the sake of love and trust...and this story let me miss my appointment with my doctor today coz I can't let go of the part when Tom would rescue Bill...hahaha I re scheduled for tom....;D. I like the coolness of Jess, is there anymore would happen?

Reviewer: DaveyDel1Cious Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/16/10 09:02 pm Title: Chapter 8: "It's okay."

It was! Oh, poor Bill must be so sad, though. That's okay, Tom will love him all better.

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/16/10 08:00 pm Title: Chapter 8: "It's okay."

Thank God thing's were not as bad as I thought! Both guy's will need time to recover, neither has a job now...I think these two are due some happiness!
Thank you for the update

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/16/10 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 8: "It's okay."

thanks for the update!

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/16/10 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 8: "It's okay."

Yay u updated! I'm happy that things are going smoothly so far. I hope Bill's face heals up nicely. More soon plz!

Reviewer: yorutya Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/16/10 06:53 pm Title: Chapter 8: "It's okay."

im glad there safeee

Reviewer: yorutya Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/11/10 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 7: "You really shouldn't have come."

OMG

Author's Response: Yeah. There had to be an 'oh shit' factor. Lol.

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/09/10 07:53 pm Title: Chapter 7: "You really shouldn't have come."

O hell! That put me on the edge of my seat. Thank goodness for the cops showing up. I hope she didn't scar Bill's face up :( I love this! Plz post again soon!

Author's Response: New chapter is up. Go find out :]

Reviewer: twincestkindom Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/09/10 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 7: "You really shouldn't have come."

OMG!!!!!! poor bill!!! hate Lyla!!!! hate him!!! please continue!!! :D

Author's Response: I have continued as of today, lol. Yeah, Lyla is a betch.

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/09/10 07:39 pm Title: Chapter 6: "I'm in love."

Whoa! I really didn't expect Jessika to take the news so calmly but i'm glad she didn't beat him up or something =) Wtf happened to Bill? On to the next, hopefully I will find out.

Author's Response: She's in shock... major shock. xD;

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/09/10 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 5: “I just want to know the truth."

Tom is so sweet with Bill & I don't care much for lyla : / I love this story =)

Author's Response: Lyla is eeebil.

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/09/10 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 4: “I thought you were stronger than that.”

Ahh! I'm going nuts with anticipation & fear. I waiting for Tom to spill the truth to both of them but i'm afraid to read their reactions.

Author's Response: It'll be... interesting. o_o

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/09/10 06:35 pm Title: Chapter 3: "It’s hard to come back.”

Poor Bill :( I kinda figured his dad was like that. Aww, Tom stood up for him.

Author's Response: Well, yeah, he has to. He has to be nice so Bill won't totally fuck his shit up. :D

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/09/10 06:20 pm Title: Chapter 2: “Do you always trust people this easily?”

I love how much Tom has taken a liking to Bill & vice versa. This is so sweet. Love it!

Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, I tried to make it as innocent as stripper love can be. :]

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/09/10 06:02 pm Title: Chapter 1: “Hey, you’re not married yet, Trümper.”

Uh oh! Tom should have really been honest. I hope Bills not expecting too much, I don't want to see him get hurt. This is so sweet & adorable. I smiled through the whole thing =) I love it!

Author's Response: Aw, thankya. I love that I can make people happy with my writing. XD

Reviewer: twincestkindom Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/09/10 05:59 pm Title: Chapter 6: "I'm in love."

OMG!!!! WHAT HAPPEN TO BILL !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I WANT TO KNOW MORE!!!!!! :D
PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!

Author's Response: Yes sir/ma'am!

Reviewer: KristineTH Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/07/10 03:48 pm Title: Chapter 7: "You really shouldn't have come."

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Author's Response: AWESOMEFACE [:

Reviewer: Chi Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/07/10 03:22 pm Title: Chapter 7: "You really shouldn't have come."

........Not entirely what I was expecting x) I loved it though!!!!!! Damn o.o I did think Tom would say it was Bill's dad to the cops... Wasimmer x) I can't wait for more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! O.O
xx Chi ....

Author's Response: Yeah, Bill's dad is out of the picture for now. He had to gtfo Magdeburg due to Simone's restraining order. XD

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