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Reviewer: DaveyDel1Cious Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/24/10 11:42 pm Title: Chapter 4: “I thought you were stronger than that.”

Oh jeez...

Author's Response: Oh sheeet. xD

Reviewer: mackiki Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/24/10 11:14 pm Title: Chapter 4: “I thought you were stronger than that.”

loving it. ^___^

Author's Response: Merci! :D

Reviewer: Atlantis Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/24/10 04:09 pm Title: Chapter 4: “I thought you were stronger than that.”

Tom needs to stop lying to Bill and Jess. Bill's going to be heartbroken when he finds out they're engaged.

Can't wait for more! :]

Author's Response: Yeah, Tom's bitten off a little more than he can chew o_ornThanks for your review!

Reviewer: DaveyDel1Cious Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/23/10 02:41 pm Title: Chapter 3: "It’s hard to come back.”

Tom seems like he's from a WAY different world from Bill and all these lies...NEVER good.

Author's Response: Yep, everything is slowly coming to a climax. A really dramatic climax! Which is both good and bad... thanks for your review :]

Reviewer: viciouswrappedinsugar Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/12/10 01:04 am Title: Chapter 3: "It’s hard to come back.”

I love it, please update soon :)

Author's Response: Things should be picking up after I graduate this Wednesday so I'm hoping my output will be a lot larger soon. C:

Reviewer: Melluransa Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/11/10 07:18 pm Title: Chapter 3: "It’s hard to come back.”

Tom's been virtually missing for a couple days. What is Jessicka thinking?

Author's Response: Jess is pretty laid back about it at this point. She figures Tom needs to get all the partying out of his system before they get married. If only she knew... xD

Reviewer: Melluransa Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/11/10 07:15 pm Title: Chapter 3: "It’s hard to come back.”

Tom's been virtually missing for a couple days. What is Jessicka thinking?

Author's Response: Jess is probably pissed as usual. D:

Reviewer: Maria Dane-Edwards Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/11/10 04:18 pm Title: Chapter 3: "It’s hard to come back.”

Love the promise of this story. I like how helplessly Tom became attracted to this strange boy Bill. Also, Bill was quick in finding Tom a sweet person. He may have gotten the facts about Tom wrong but not really. The genuine interest can't be faked. Look forward to more :) * Maria

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Yes, Tom fell for Bill just as easily as his IRL fans did... :3

Reviewer: mariawh Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/11/10 02:27 pm Title: Chapter 3: "It’s hard to come back.”

YEY update! *jumps up and down* Loved it very much, thank you(: I can't wait for the next chapter(:

Author's Response: Aww I love your excitement! Knowing I can get people eager for more is an amazing feeling. ^_^

Reviewer: Atlantis Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/30/10 03:33 am Title: Chapter 2: “Do you always trust people this easily?”

Love how sweet and innocent Bill is and how Tom is starting to fall for him.

Looking forward to next chapter! :]

Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, Bill is so lovable. <3

Reviewer: xLolloboll Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/29/10 04:57 pm Title: Chapter 2: “Do you always trust people this easily?”

OHHHHHH awsome
please more PLEASE

Author's Response: Yes ma'am/sir!

Reviewer: lollipop Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/29/10 04:11 pm Title: Chapter 2: “Do you always trust people this easily?”

Love, love, love can I say more ?xD

Author's Response: No more is needed, lol. I feel speciallll <3

Reviewer: mariawh Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/29/10 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 2: “Do you always trust people this easily?”

I like it, can't wait for more already! And aww, Bill's just so cute and innocent, makes me wanna go over and cuddle him:' ) And Jessicka seems nice. Too bad. Wish she was a mean old bitch so Tom could leave her without me starting to feel bad about it: ( Haha, love it though, please update soon?: 3

Author's Response: Lol yes, Bill is quite lovable just like IRL. <3rnJessicka is a good person who isn't entirely honest with herself sometimes. She wants to make everyone happy but she listens to her parents too much. X_X

Reviewer: viciouswrappedinsugar Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/29/10 02:38 pm Title: Chapter 2: “Do you always trust people this easily?”

i love it

Author's Response: AWESOME! :]

Reviewer: bmccray Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/28/10 01:38 am Title: Chapter 1: “Hey, you’re not married yet, Trümper.”

I like it!

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it <3 yayy first

Reviewer: phaerei Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/27/10 03:36 am Title: Chapter 1: “Hey, you’re not married yet, Trümper.”

-Tom would’ve never guessed that Bill liked to read when he wasn’t working the pole.- There is that myth that lots of strippers strip their way through college. Love it.

Author's Response: Heh, thank you. <3

Reviewer: kittyskull Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/27/10 02:50 am Title: Chapter 1: “Hey, you’re not married yet, Trümper.”

Tom's having second thoughts.
Bill's gonna be hurt when he finds out
what the special occasion is.

Author's Response: Trust me, Tom knows... so he's going to do what any man would probably do: lie by omission. *glares at him* lol, but he means well.

Reviewer: viciouswrappedinsugar Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/27/10 12:39 am Title: Chapter 1: “Hey, you’re not married yet, Trümper.”

oh so good, can't wait for more

Author's Response: Thank you very much! :]

Reviewer: DaveyDel1Cious Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/26/10 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 1: “Hey, you’re not married yet, Trümper.”

Wow, Bill really isn't used to people taking him out, is he?

Author's Response: Not at all. He's used to fending for himself mainly. He does favors a lot but no one returns them. In a polite way, anyway. Lol.

Reviewer: BillKaulitzLove483 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/26/10 09:35 pm Title: Chapter 1: “Hey, you’re not married yet, Trümper.”


I would definitely go with the start and idea of this fic [from the first chapter and the summary] a brillaint though.
m o s t . d e f i n i t e l y (:

Oh gosh. I know this is only chapter one, but i cant help but already feel a bit of a heartache for Bill. I mean, since the summary read, ive be contimplating the different ways Bill could react to finding out Tom is about to be married.

But i love how sweet he is (:
I mean, the fact that he doesnt want his mom to worry, and how he seemed so open with spending time with Tomi ^^
*oh gosh. could he be any cuter*

& as for Tomi.
well, He just fell into the same trap as many of us TH/Bill lovers did.
Mesmerized by Bill's gorgeous beauty-ness (:

I will definitely be tracking this that way i dont miss when chapter two is posted ^^

[and just one little question.,
will jessicka be introduced in the next chapter?]

-----Samantha



Author's Response: Jess will be in the next chapter for sure. Thank you for such a detailed review. :3

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