Date: 08/03/10 03:57 pm Title: Visitor
great chapter....i love this story...but poor bill..and im looking forward to more X
Author's Response: Poor Bill to an extent, I agree. And more coming very soon. =)
Date: 08/03/10 02:40 pm Title: Visitor
Okay, well, I think Bill should apologize to Andi but I don't think anything should happen between them because Bill should be with Tom even though they're both idiots. Can't wait for you to update.
Author's Response: That seems to be the general concensus. =)
Date: 08/03/10 01:43 pm Title: Conquest
Yes they where!! :D
Author's Response: Good! =D
Date: 08/03/10 01:25 pm Title: Visitor
I was thinking of this story last night....
*nods head*
:)
Author's Response: I hope they were good thoughts you were thinking? =)
Date: 08/03/10 12:01 pm Title: Visitor
Bill should do something about andi, but its Toms turn to Come to Bill, Bill should just ignore Him until then. nothing should happen between andi and Bill though!
Author's Response: Got it. So Bill should apologize to Andi but no funny business, and Bill should ignore Tom until Tom comes crawling back to him begging for forgivenes? =)
Date: 08/03/10 11:41 am Title: Visitor
ohhh, evil! the side of WHICH story???? Tom's, Andi's or Georg's??? *twitches* oh come on!!!!!!!!! LOL
Author's Response: Hehehehe! I can't say yet! But you'll only have to wait a week. ;)
Date: 08/03/10 11:37 am Title: Visitor
I feel so bad for Bill. I know this is a mess of his own making and all, but he's actually changed from the start of the story. He cares about Andi and likes Tom more than he ever thought he'd like someone. And yeah, I guess he needs to apologize, but I still feel for him. :( I'll be looking forward to more!
Author's Response: He certainly HAS changed, but he definitely needs to apologize. And things always work out the way they're meant to work out, so we'll see how it goes. ♥
Date: 07/29/10 10:57 am Title: Truths
You are too good at breaking my heart! I'm so sad to see Bill getting everything taken away from him, even if he did back himself into a corner with his lies. ;~;
Author's Response: I'm sorry! I'm not TRYING to break hearts. It just happens.
Date: 07/28/10 01:21 pm Title: Truths
oh shiz its about to go DOWN!
ha :)
Author's Response: IT'S ALL GOING DOWN! Hell yes. =D
Date: 07/28/10 08:14 am Title: Conquest
*sigh* Bill, Bill, Bill. Dear Bill. Your head is swimming in so much drama that you can't even see that you have TWO boys in love with you. Yeah, Tom may have used you.....but he fell for you just as quickly as you did for him. Poor Andi, god knows I feel for you because I've been there......can't move on to someone who actually likes you because you're hung up on someone you can't have. Looking forward to what happens next!!!!
Author's Response: I've been there, too. It's not a fun place to be.
Date: 07/27/10 11:52 pm Title: Truths
I feel so awful for Bill :(
First that asshole Tom turns on him and then his best friend Andi. I know Bills done some bad things but this is deeper and more hurtful than anything that has happened to him and now two people he thought liked/loved him are now against him.
I just hope Bill doesnt get crushed by more people, or stands up for himself. He was wrong to an extent, but he shouldnt be treated like a squished bug. Hes better than that.
Author's Response: In order to change and get to a better place, a bit of struggle/pain is involved. He's morphing. It's good for him to hear these things. =)
Date: 07/27/10 11:43 pm Title: Truths
Well damn, Bill's world is crumbling before his eye's! Tom never admitted to "messing up the rival", wonder if that's what he done-but I don't think so... What the heck is gonna happen next...can't wait to find out!
Author's Response: Happy to be keeping you guessing!
Date: 07/27/10 10:50 pm Title: Truths
Someone DOES have to do it, but...*whines*
Author's Response: But, but, but...it'll be fine. ;)
Date: 07/27/10 09:29 pm Title: Truths
Ouch. You know, I wasn't particularly fond of Bill's character when this story started but I actually felt bad for him just now. :(
Author's Response: He needed to be brought back down to reality though, yeah? =)
Date: 07/27/10 06:42 pm Title: Truths
poor bill, wow..tom knew and was using him..
but it was a brilliant chapter! & i loved it #faithapproves
take care and update soon X
Author's Response: I'm happy you liked the update. Ophelia approves, too. ;) And there's another one up now. =D
Date: 07/27/10 06:37 pm Title: Truths
Ohhnnn
Author's Response: =)
Date: 07/27/10 06:31 pm Title: Truths
Didn't see it coming !
Poor Bill, everything is falling apart, but he sorta deserves it... I really hope things will got better for him tho!
Author's Response: He does sort of deserve it, doesn't he? I agree completely.
Date: 07/27/10 06:30 pm Title: Truths
Oh wow, I feel so terrible for Bill ;_;
One thing to lose the person you have feelings for, but to lose a best friend as well D:
Lol I'd probably break down and cry and guilt them into sticking with me XD
Author's Response: hahaha That may be what Bill ends up doing; who knows? =D
Date: 07/27/10 06:30 pm Title: Truths
Oh man, this whole chapter had me grinning. Hurting, but grinning. Is it wrong of me that I'm glad Bill is being told off by everyone? And while I had suspected Tom knew all along about Bill, Tom having motives came as a shockingy good surprise. Definitely looking forward to the next update.
Author's Response: I don't think it's wrong of you at all. I think he kind of deserves it, in a way.
Date: 07/27/10 06:29 pm Title: Truths
And this would be the Abyss.
Abyss Checklist:
1. Water (he's on a swim team, so, check!)
2. Near-death experience (uhhhhh....)
3. Faces greatest fears (being alone? Check!)
4. Alone (nobody likes him, so, check!)
yay for Abysses! And we all know what comes after Abysses! REVELATIONS!! (the beginning of change)
okay, I am officially a nerd. Btw, I am totally in love with this story. It's just...... Yeah. I love it. :)
Author's Response: Okay, I LOVE lists, so this review pretty much wins all other reviews. =) Revelations are certainly in the works, and I LOVE that you're totally in love with this. ♥