Date: 07/06/10 03:07 pm Title: Lovers
This chapter was sososososo good! Loved the sex scene, and how they cant get enough of each other. God I just know its all going to turn to shit somehow and its keeping me on my toes!
I LOVE YOUR STORIES!
Author's Response: I LOVE YOU FOR LOVING MY STORIES. lol I'm so glad you liked this chapter, and I hope I can continue keeping you on your toes for a bit longer. ;)
Date: 07/06/10 03:01 pm Title: Lovers
So glad Tom came over to check on Bill...and have some sexy time. ;D
Bit awkward when Tom saw the inground pool. I'm starting to wonder if he believes that Bill can't swim.
Love this! Can't wait! :D
Author's Response: Definitely some sexy times!
Date: 07/06/10 01:48 pm Title: Lovers
oh my god! =0
this chap was sooo totally awesome! i love the way u discribe bill's thoughts and the way he's so conflicted with his own feelings.
can't wait to read in what way they'll be a bad influence on andreas ;D
Author's Response: Thank you! The next chapter should be fun. =D
Date: 07/06/10 12:44 pm Title: Lovers
Awww, I actually feel bad for Bill in this chapter, he's letting himself feel for someone else, letting him in and I really hope Tom doesn't break his heart. Loving Andreas, he's such a great friend! I'll be looking forward to more! Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: Loving that you're loving Andreas and feeling bad for Bill. Thanks! <3
Date: 07/06/10 11:54 am Title: Lovers
*flails* OMG!! so hot!!!
i really love this story.. your amazing talented writer and this was a great chapter.. looking forward 2 more so update soon X
Author's Response: *flails with you&* I'm so happy that you like it that much, and another chapter will be posted in a few days. =D
Date: 07/03/10 03:39 pm Title: Rivals
Oh come on, Tom!
You cruel girl left us readers craving for more :D
I really enjoy the way their relationship is starting to develop. I think this was probably even the best working chapter so far. It's finally diving deeper into their relationship. Goodgoodgood!
I'm not sure if I understand completely of why those different schools are so important to them, but I guess it's just me. I hated those girls... bitches... but this chapter really brought much softness to Bill's character and I liked it.
Waiting for more :)
Author's Response: Hopefully I didn't leave you craving for more for too long, because the next chapter is up already. But I'm so happy that you're enjoying the way their relationship is starting to bloom. AND I love that you think it's maybe even the best chapter so far.
Author's Response: Hopefully I didn't leave you craving for more for too long, because the next chapter is up already. But I'm so happy that you're enjoying the way their relationship is starting to bloom. AND I love that you think it's maybe even the best chapter so far.
Date: 07/03/10 12:19 pm Title: Rivals
I like this chapter, seeing the boys interact without sex and actually kind of sort of make the first fumbling moves toward falling for each other really warmed my heart. They're so sweet. I enjoy that Tom liked snuggly affectionate drunk Bill, and was too much of a gentleman to take advantage when he had the chance.
Oh maaaaan I had a flash of this ending badly. With the two schools and Bill lying about being on the swim team and all. Even with fun playful stories you still manage to wrench my heart!
Author's Response: No, no, no. No heart wrenching allowed! The forecast is cute and fluffy with a slight chance of mild drama, otherwise known as conflict and plot. ;)
Date: 06/30/10 04:01 pm Title: Rivals
LOVE that Andreas knew exactly where Bill's shoes were! That is a great friend!
"The way Tom was looking at him, even still when so many other people had given up on Bill after only a few days of hanging around him, made him feel genuinely attractive and desired. It was a feeling he didn’t feel often." Awwww. This made me really feel for Bill. Also made me wonder if when he started dating he was used by his dates for sex and became tired of it so decided to become the user instead.
How sweet is Tom! Tom not staying makes me think he really does like Bill and wants a relationship with him, not just sex.
I am really enjoying this! Can't wait for more! :D
Author's Response: Andreas is just THAT friend who is super awesome no matter what. I love him. ;) And you! Thank you so much for another awesome review. =D
Date: 06/30/10 12:09 am Title: Rivals
I think it's kinda sweet that he didn't stay. And I'm not sure Bill knows what to think of it. A guy didn't take advantage of him, that's gotta be kinda weird. Yeah, I really liked this chapter. :)
Author's Response: lol Bill DOESN'T know what to think of it. His life is a bit confusing at the moment. ;)
Date: 06/29/10 07:50 pm Title: Rivals
What's up with Tom is a very good question. The rival schools issue sounds suspicious. I wonder if Tom is in the swim team in the other school, even if he says he's not into sports and knows all about Bill already. Hmmm, I guess I'll find out soon. Loving this, honey!
Author's Response: You'll definitely find out more sooooooon. =)
Date: 06/29/10 06:06 pm Title: Rivals
Good chapter. Those girls were awful. I know Bill and Tom will have strong feelings for each other but all this lying is gonna do some damage unfortunately. I wish it werent so, but then we wouldnt have a plot :)
OH AND THE END WAS SO SWEET, LOOOVED IT
Damn you Tom, stay the night and cuddle!
Author's Response: Those girls WERE awful and it sad that I actually know people like that. It's just terrible. You're right though, the lying is going to cause some problems and if it didn't, there would be no plot. ;) And I'm glad you loved the end. I thought it was cute, too. =)
Date: 06/29/10 05:44 pm Title: Rivals
Well if he really doesn't wanna do anything while Bill is drunk cause he respects him, I think it's cute ! And Bill should stop lying about the swimming team, it's going to get him in trouble!
Author's Response: He really should stop lying, shouldn't he? Lies get you nowhere but tangled up. ;)
Date: 06/29/10 02:20 pm Title: Rivals
Yes.
No.
Maybe? >.>
Author's Response: In the words of Bill: maaaaybe? ;)
Date: 06/29/10 02:07 pm Title: Rivals
Huh. I thought Tom would have stayed. D'aw, he's such a gentleman. :')
Author's Response: Huh. Tom is full of surprises, isn't he? ;)
Date: 06/29/10 01:54 pm Title: Rivals
aww ^^ tom's cute! though he's prolly gonna get his heart broken when he finds out bill really is a swimmer...
can't wait for more!! *is hating bill a tiny tad for lying*
Author's Response: He might, he might. *sigh* I'm glad you're excited for more! ♥
Date: 06/29/10 11:22 am Title: Rivals
Oh God. I can imagine Tom looking at a Heizer Yearbook now and seeing Bill on the swim team. I don't suppose 'that's my secret twin brother' would work, huh? xD
Author's Response: You know, I don't think that excuse would work, even if it were true. ;)
Date: 06/29/10 04:18 am Title: Friends
I love this story, so much!
I love feisty Bill, but I wish he was a bit more considerate of Andreas. this party thing should most certainly happen, because parties are awesome. maybe Bill could let Andreas off the hook for a night, though? since Georg isn't going? or Andi can think up and excuse that Bill will believe/allow to pass? [sorry, I'm just a sucker for those guys who are looked "down upon"]
but! whatever happens, I know it will be fantastic, as it always is, so I'll just let it happen. C:
Author's Response: I'm so glad you hear that you love it so much. Really. And I like feisty Bill. He's a little bit dense when it comes to his friends (well, Andi), but I'm having a really great time writing him. ♥
Date: 06/23/10 06:58 pm Title: Friends
partaaaaaaaaaaaay
Author's Response: Yes!!
Date: 06/23/10 05:13 pm Title: Friends
Aww, that's so sweet for Andi and Georg! :). I say: party! I want to see how it turns out to be and maybe a little Tom/Bill-action there, right? You know I'm sucker for that :D
Author's Response: Sucker for the Tom/Bill action? Really? Huh. =P But no, really...there'll be a party next chapter for sure.
Date: 06/23/10 03:53 am Title: Friends
Greatt :DD
well you can write about the party or whatever im sure ima' love it!
xoxo
Author's Response: haha Well I'm happy to hear it. Definitely a party next chapter though.