Date: 10/13/12 04:17 pm Title: Prologue
Hi!!! Any chance you might continue this story? I have reread this chapter so many times, always finishing it and wishing there was more. You write so beautifully! I hope your muse returns and gives you a little nudge to continue this story :)
Date: 07/14/11 08:29 pm Title: Prologue
Wow. This is an amazing story. It's well-written and very captivating! I do hope it gets continued!
Date: 05/25/10 01:23 pm Title: Prologue
okay... i think im hooked...
*offers you a cookie for your efforts*
your right, i agree with the whole broken bill thing i adore stories like that...great prolouge..very well written and i cant wait for more xo
Author's Response: Really? Yaaay 8D <3 Thanks so much :)
Date: 05/25/10 02:37 am Title: Prologue
O__o oh no! Eek! I can't wait for more
Author's Response: Thank youu :)
Date: 05/25/10 12:05 am Title: Prologue
Awww! Omg this story sounds sooo good.
And poor man damn xD everyone died... He just needed to say that his dog, cat and birdie died there too xDD
xoxo its cool update soon!
Author's Response: Thank youuu :D Yes, poor Stephen. xD I'll definitely try to update, thanks for reading. :)
Date: 05/24/10 08:34 pm Title: Prologue
HOLY SWEET MARY MOTHER OF JESUS WAS THIS AMAZING. WOW I WAS BLOWN AWAY, I CANNOT BELIEVE THIS IS THE DAMN PROLOGUE, ICH WILL MEHR JETZT. SO SIMPLE AND BEAUTIFUL. GEISTERFAHRER BRING IT ON, COS I'M READY FOR W.E. IS NEXT. O__________________O PS; LOVE YOU! :)
Author's Response: Aww Blanca I love you xD <3 Thanks soo much liebe :)))
Date: 05/24/10 08:10 pm Title: Prologue
I don't understand the last paragraph.. It must just be the fact that large chunks of paragraphs distracts me.
Anyways, oh DEAR, this is GOLD.
I love these.. broken and pained boys who meet up with older men. It's such a beautiful little thing. When a boy adopts another man as the father never had.. I just.. want to hug your prologue so tight and cry. ;_; How lovely < 3
I wanted to cry... and I teared up, Now I want to SQUEE. I l o v e d it. OMG. I need to read this again.. dear... I love asylum fics too.
At the last paragraph, Stephen heals Bill. *explodes with love* Black leather book.. now I'm confused, did he get inside the book? [lol I don't think that.. I'm so off.]
I want to tear up again... Stephen lost his 'son'.. shit.. you killed me, yet made me smile. I love these feelings. So tormentingly gorgeous...
Took him..
Now Bill has no KAya, and Stephen.
Assuming he'll meet with the stunningly lovely Tom huh?
Shit, love it already.
*fave*
This story means a lot love. Really..
I hope Stephen comes back.. because.. to be honest, boy love is getting cliche'. 0.- Some more boy/man father/son is needed.
Either way, beautiful.
Author's Response: Wow thank you so much for your long review! I really appreciate it.rnOkay sorry if it was confusing, I'm gonna try to clear it up for you. The last paragraph was long because it sort of summed up everything that happened from the time Bill and Stephen met, until Bill was taken away to the asylum. rnrnI'm smiling like an idiot right now at your review, oh my. XD <3 I agree with your love for broken boys/asylum stories, so that's why i decided to write this. :) rnrnI can't believe it made you want to cry, got to you that much :x Wow that means a lot lol.rnrnOkay the black book... I'm still working out this but no, he does not get sucked into the book lol. It's just a minor detail for now, and I'll do into depth about it later in the fic, so try not to let it bug you for now. Don't worry. :)rnrnAnd yes, you're correct about him meeting the 'stunningly lovely Tom' ;) He'll come into place in the next, first real chapter. Now, I hope I don't ruin your interpretations/make you lose interest when I say this, but it is a Bill/Tom fic? I don't want to spoil anything, but it's going to be focused on them mainly, but Stephen of course made a big impact in the whole fic. I'll try not to make it 'cliche' though :(rnrnBut again, thank you so so much :) I really appreciate your review, and I hope this helped clear things up for you. :X <3
Date: 05/24/10 07:50 pm Title: Prologue
so im kinda in love with the story, i really love the idea of it. i hope you update really soon!
Author's Response: Aw yess! Thanks so much :DDDDD I'll sure try
Date: 05/24/10 07:45 pm Title: Prologue
I would definitely be interested in reading more of this (:
& Stories that include Asylums, are always worth a shot [and i totally have to agree with what you said, where you mentioned liking the broken down Bill, and then you write about fixing his torn soul. I like fics like that, where its completely tragic and at rock bottom, and then something happens to change and do a 360 degree turn around. [or maybe its a 180 degree turn around? xD]
Im quite eager, to dive into the actual plot and story itself. Your prologue was really good ^^
*ill stop rambling now*
-----Samantha
Author's Response: Thank you so much! ^___^ I sure can't wait to make that 360/180 (xD) and get into the plot as well :D I'm glad you liked the prologue, thank you again, and I hope I can match up to your expectations!rn(oh, and I don't mind your 'rambling' hahaa :D)
Date: 05/24/10 07:43 pm Title: Prologue
omg rachael :) this is beautifully written.so well thought out and each word picked. i absolutely love this story already. since my dad was a mortician and i love dead things etc. :)
Author's Response: Aww Hanna! Thanks you so much love youuu :))) <3