Date: 06/22/10 12:36 am Title: All The Worst Places
Oooh, tres awesome! So original and so interesting. I'm loving your vision of the future...guess that whole 3D thing caught on then?
Your awesome banner reminded me of the Matrix..I'm kind of seeing Bill as your Neo :) So innocent and unknowingly falling in love.
All you need to do is work in a white rabbit :D
Waiting patiently for more!
Date: 06/06/10 06:53 pm Title: All The Worst Places
OH MAN this story is so exciting O_O
Author's Response: Thank you ^-^ I appreciate the review and I'm glad I can keep your interest :D
Date: 06/06/10 09:25 am Title: All The Worst Places
Poor Bill
Author's Response: I know xP thanks for the review ^-^
Date: 06/06/10 02:59 am Title: All The Worst Places
why? :O :( don't like, but if u must then it might be okay... :/ why tom saw and heard everything? :O I'm curious!! :D:D so u must update soon!! xD
Author's Response: All in good time ^-^ I formed a twist inside my mind so it may take a while until it's told in the story. Patience, m'dear. Update should be tomorrow :D
Date: 06/06/10 01:20 am Title: All The Worst Places
Poor Bill. :(
Can't wait to see how Tom rescues Bill from his awful black and white world.
'Cause Tom's gonna rescue him and they're gonna live happily ever after, right?...Right?
Really enjoying this! Looking forward to next chapter! :]
Author's Response: I'm not sure how it's going to end yet. I never even know what's going to happen when I start each chapter xD The story writes itself. I am just the tool it uses to be told ^-^ But more likely than not, it'll be a sad ending. But I'm going to try to maybe make it not as upsetting as my stories usually are. Thank you ^-^ for the review and the compliment :D
Date: 05/29/10 03:03 am Title: Other Side
psst, you could try using the control + f search for YU, to make it easier, :) ooh yah, so that's why, i think in one of the previous chapters it mentioned a lock of blonde hair and then a second later was back to black, haha. now i get it. no biggie.
anywho, aw a conversation! and bill seems intelligent enough...but now he's being punished because tom didnt have sex with himmm thats not fairr how can he escappeee??
Author's Response: oh thank you (: the hair thing was for bill? cause the story was about bill on CBF too. But if it was Tom, i don't even know xD I get so confused doing this. And yes... he's getting punished. All in good time ^-^ thanks for the review (:
Date: 05/29/10 01:37 am Title: Other Side
:O :( Are they gonna beat him or lock him up?!? Tom and bill are so cute together in this fic!! :)
Author's Response: We shall see (: thanks for the review :D
Date: 05/28/10 07:33 pm Title: Other Side
i know i mentioned this at least once before, but gosh, i absolutely love your quick & timely updates (:
i always get a bit frustrated when i have to go back and read previous chapters to remember what was going on before i read a newly posted chapter [because sometimes the updates are more than two weeks apart]
*done with my update ranting*
im really curious as to what exactly Bill's punishment was. I mean, he keep telling himself, 'take it like a man' and since he was designed for sex favors, was he sexually assaulted, or physically, or? [you dont necessarily have to answer that, if it was your plan to be revealed in a further chapter] Now that im thinking about it, was there anything as to what would happen if H.I.Ps didnt do their job in a earlier chapter?
Bah, im so full of pointless questioning
XD
i really liked this chapter though.
for a story like this, where its pretty much polar opposite worlds the main characters live in, its always best to give the thoughts from each of the main peoplee. Plus, i definitely like reading Bill's inner thoughts (:
[now if only i had the power to control his thoughts. mwahahaha. just kidding ^^]
& i have to awee
*_____________________________*
Billyboy got his first kiss
*giggles*
(:
Btw from your last review response,
im totally jealous of your TNBC themed room. Burton is a complete genius, & who the hell doesnt love Jack the pumpkin king? (:
he's so cute XD
-----Samantha
Author's Response: Everything will be clear in the next chapter ^-^ Thank you!!! You have no idea how much I adore your reviews. All the thought and feedback is amazing ^-^ And yes, Burton is famazing!!!!!
Date: 05/27/10 01:03 pm Title: Too Beautiful
interesting idea,i think we all wish we had bill coming out of a screen,i really like the chapter in bills pov..im really excited about the next chapter and intrigued about the direction your going to take this story.
*cookie for your brilliant story*
Author's Response: There will be more from Bill's POV. WOOOO! Cookie!!! Thank you ^-^
Date: 05/27/10 03:54 am Title: Colors
aw, i had to take down all my TH stuff a week ago to move out of my dorm room. it's a pain and its sad not to see them everywhere....ahha. aaaw billy likes tom, but nothing has explained toms headache yet. i am so curious :)
Author's Response: Yes be curious! :D New chapter tomorrow!!!
Date: 05/27/10 01:30 am Title: Colors
Now I understand everything!! :D:D I'm so sad about toms stupidness... bill's sad.. :( and thats bad... :/ and btw. at the beginning of the chapter theres YU, but you probably mean TOM?? MOOORE! :)
Author's Response: zomg thank you xD thought i had all those little buggers. That's the downside of switching over with stories, I guess xP and the next chapitiore (that's a word!) is done!!! it won't be posted until friday though!!!
Date: 05/26/10 07:36 pm Title: Colors
Aww, poor CB D:
Just started reading the story. Really like it!
Author's Response: Thank you!!! ^-^ And yes, my poor CB babies are not on the wall anymore but I hope to put them back maybe.
Date: 05/26/10 06:53 pm Title: Colors
y a y (:
I was definitely excited when i got your author's response where you mentioned the next chapter would include alot more of Bill's thoughts on everything that was happening. & I can honestly say this chapter answered alot of the minor questions that I had lingering inside my teenie mind ^^
At this point, im just R E A L L Y hoping Tom decides to rebel against Geo. and request Bill's services quite soon. I want his bracelet to flash red and i feel so bad for him having to sit in that little room all day.
Especially with the such bland coloring and food. Oh gosh, i just ate dinner and if it tasted anything like paper...
Im not sure i would have eaten it xD
[even though i have tried eating paper before while i was ate school. someone told me it tasted good...they were such a blatant liar XD]
I think its super cute how even those these H.I.P things arent suppose to feel, that Bill still focuses and feels the desire for, 'him' (:
Definitely looking foward to another post [plus, woop woop for every-other-day posts ^^]
Btw, you are paitning your walls?
ohh, what color?
[even though its none of my business XD]
Im sorry for the grief of having to take down your posters. If only our world was like it was in this story, i bet you could command, "Paint Walls" or something, and it would be done without all that hassle.
-----Samantha (:
Author's Response: I'm glad I answered all those questions ^-^ I drank cologne twice when I was little. TWICE. Like I didn't understand just how bad it tasted at first, so I did it again xD So don't feel bad about eating paper. Yep :D And I just finished the next chapter and I can't wait to post it. We're painting my room gray. Which you might think is boring, but atm it's purple. I want it gray because my entire room is The Nightmare Before Christmas :D It's gonna be SOOOO wicked. Sadly, I would have still had to take down my babies sine they don't match with my TNBC stuff, BUT I've made them into a collage and now they are famazing and going on a different wall where they won't interfere but where I can still see them ^-^ Thanks for the review!!! :D I love the longness of them xD
Date: 05/26/10 10:51 am Title: Work
so... Is bill real or not? i'm confused.. :D:D good good!! :)
Author's Response: Bill is very real. I'm getting that question a lot :P I'll try to make it known. But yeah, he's real. Thanks :D I appreciate the review ^-^ and the liking!
Date: 05/25/10 09:59 pm Title: Work
0_o looks like someone has feelings!!
Author's Response: Indeed (;
Date: 05/25/10 06:33 pm Title: Work
yayyy shmex! wanna see where this goessssss~ how come bill didnt need prep? does he do it before he goes out, or are they...like, made that way? how come he doesnt seem as empty as georg saysss? questionssss lol only way to answer is to read more!
Author's Response: exactly xD There will be answers! As the great Willy Wonka would say, "All in good time." (;
Date: 05/25/10 06:25 pm Title: Work
Beep.Boop-Boop.Bop XD
*yes, that was a robot impression*
I only did that to go along with the futuristic type world you are writing about, which, may i say, is totally amazing ^^
If only my computer had voice activation or something. & i dont think i could fathom how amazed i would be if my door opened with a fingerprint scanner :D
I just read both chapters.
[which btw, didnt you just post the first one yesterday? if so, Golly Gee, i love authors that do quick updates xD I sometimes get so anxious waiting weeks to find out what happens next lol]
I guess I will start with what I thought of Chapter One.
I have to give credit to this line, just because i absolutely love it so much:
"Put two chunks of flesh hanging from
the front of their bodies and it was
supposedly hot? Ew."
L M A O XD
If i ever heard anyone say that in reality i think i would have a laughter attack.
When Tom ordered Bill, & you described him coming out of the screen, one arm after the other. [what im about to say, i dont mean in any bad way] it made my mind go back to this movie i saw, I think it was either the Ring or the Grudge, but its where the girl comes crawling out of the TV. With her, Id be scared shitless. if it was Bill.....
*giggles* :D
& You are definitely good at smut, so no need to write such a thing in your chapter end notes xD
Btw, just curious.
[after posting this i will go back to chapter one to read over again what you wrote on H.I.P.s]
but, Bill is just a computer hologram figure? or is he a real human that just has a job through the internet?
[oh wow. after asking that my question seems quite stupid xD]
I definitely like these first two chapters ^^
-----Samantha
*p.s. i think i typed too much. sorry*
Author's Response: Don't we all wish we had Bill coming from our computer screens? xD I'm updating quick because the first four chapters are written. It may switch to every other day if I can't get them out fast enough because I don't like to force the words out of me or it feels wrong. Bill is an actual person. There's more about it in the next chapter which will be up tomorrow ^-^ it gives you an insight into Bill's head instead of Tom's for once. Thanks for the review and the love!!!!!! This is probably the best review I've gotten :D thankyouthankyouthankyou! And you can NEVER type too much. I love every bit of thought and criticism I can get :D
Date: 05/25/10 04:38 pm Title: Work
Skid Row came out just as hair bands were dying out and Grunge rock had made it big. They would have gone a lot farther if they had just started a few years earlier. MTV was playing Skid Row and Pearl Jam all day but too soon it was mostly Nirvana. Oh well. By the way, love your story.
Author's Response: I don't know much about them since I wasn't into them when I was little like I was with all the other bands but I know the singer's voice is really really good. My dad raised me on Europe and Motley Crue and Poison and Queensryche xD but 18 and Life is famazing to me ^-^ and Thanks! I appreciate the review and the liking of the story :D
Date: 05/25/10 03:38 pm Title: Work
i'm guessing that the CB one is the original? since that one's gotten further?
not trying to be rude or anything, just honestly wondering, since i've noticed more and more ppl posting the same fics on cbf and here on thf.. just changing the names... =S and i'm really wondering why...
Author's Response: Well I was never going to do this one on THF. It wasn't like my intention or anything, but it had Bill in it, and I figured why not. I've got nothing better to do with my time xD Besides, it'll encourage me to really work on my writing. They aren't really the same. I write the CBF one and then I come to do the THF one and realize some stuff I could change and flip and whatnot. Besides, going from Diva-Strify to Georg requires tons of change lol But yeah the CB is the original. Idk why other people would change theirs other than the same reason. Of course, since CB are taking the "break" it's really hard to keep going and working on their fanfics. It really hit the ff community hard so maybe they're trying to switch over? Idk. You're not being rude. Just curious ^-^ And now that this reply has gone on for wayyyy too long, I shall stop xD
Date: 05/25/10 02:42 pm Title: Too Beautiful
:OO Such a cool future world!! omg!! :D:D and bill&tom action straight from the start... :D:D What could be better beginning?? xD Soon more? :)
Author's Response: Why thank you ^-^rnI'm usually against first chapter smut, but this writes itself xD thank you thank you thank you :D