Date: 06/18/10 10:55 am Title: Chapter 11 - Ich kann nicht mehr langer warten. (I can't wait any longer.)
SPEECHLASS. I AM SPEECHLESS.
and wiggling out of control, and smiling like an idiot. With a wonderful bubbly feeling in my chest!
Bill's POV? HELL YES.
AWhhhh Renee's prettyyyy xD THANK YOU.
Justwin Koit's in for something the next chapter >:)
Been keeping them apart for too long. But i needed to grow the story :m That aint too fun for readers. Blegh. and i am thinking of a non-related twincest fic next! Escort's really rubbing off me.
Right! Justwin, I feel like i'm right there when you narrate the story.
VERY GUD.8D
Date: 06/16/10 03:41 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Was passiert? (What's happening?)
WTF BRO!? are you kiddin me?!
what happen to her?!
Author's Response: HAHAHAHAH, K, firstly, i ain't no BRO, i'm yo sista! HAha. RELAX TEDDY! I'll be updating REAAAALLLYYY soon so you guys will find out . :) *wink wink* and thx for reading, SERIOUSLY!
Date: 06/16/10 01:29 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Raus! (Get out!)
this was really nice for me to read ; w ;
the pool scene and it was so real... :D
ah, i wanna swim there FOREVER.
LOL at bill's hair and the scissors!!hahahaha~~
aND I GOTS A SEXEY BODYYY?
Date: 06/16/10 01:20 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Was passiert? (What's happening?)
OAO OAO OAO OAO OAO OAO OAO OAO OAO OAO OAO OAO OAO OAO OAO OAO
THAT'S LIKE MA FACE RIGHT NOW!!!!!!!!
seriously justwin, you spin such a realistic fairy tale for meeee TwT
I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NXT CHAPT!!
HULLY HULLY :D
Author's Response: HAHAHAHAHAHAH, I KNOW RIGHT!I WANT THAT EPRESSION FROM YOU!HOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHO! Relax, k? i'l update soon! reaaalllyyyy soon!
Date: 06/16/10 10:42 am Title: Chapter 10 - Was passiert? (What's happening?)
Oh oh oh ! please update soon!
Author's Response: OH I WILL! thank you sooooooooooo much for reading my story, i really appreciate it!love!
Date: 06/08/10 08:18 am Title: Chapter 8 Das ist mir scheissegal. ( I couldn't give a shit.)
ooOOOOOOOOoooooOOOooooh, did bill PEEK?
hahahahhahaha.
ohhh my...gosh...this chapter is so so lovely. so wonderful..how you phrased everything. from the staring at bill and the getting to know him part--you even started that last time, so GOOD PLANNING.
and that part about knowing him from Magdeburg, and not TH, OH lovely justwin, i'm melllting.
and then it ends like that--DAMN NICE WRITING SKILL YOU.
OSSMMMM. best chapter!! hahahaha.
Date: 06/04/10 12:00 pm Title: Chapter 7 Mist, Was machst du?!(Crap, what are you doing?!)
HAHAHAHAHA EPIC LOOOOOOOOOOOOL AT THE MUGGING PART, I FREAKING LOVED EVERY WORD. BWAH~~
THE SINGING, the money and finally the preference of rape victim. HAH! XD
*dies!!*
i really liked how you altered it--or perhaps just the journey walking up to Andi's woom.
woohoo, the girl would have been so scandalous but this works just fine! haha, now to the MAIN course. >:D
Or did you mean at :You're done" in the end notes mean you're DONE for good? No right? noooooo.
You MAST CAWWIE on.
BTW thx for tagging me in Kerli's pic! i didn't even Like her page b4, can't believe that XDD
HUGS, YOU ROCK, MA SEXEH BABE.
Author's Response: HAHAHAH, GLAD YOU LIKED IT!It was this spur of the moment idea, just to get the characters to get gloser a lil more, i guess! come on, if u were a rapist, Bill or some ordinary girl??? :) the girl wouldve been cliche and ugghh!!me no wan it that way.rnand no la..im done as in, you know, im done with that chapter! there's freaking MORE to come soon!aint KERLI such a pretty thing?you know yesterday i was watching walking on air(finally), and i noticed she looks like miley with her bangs...well not miley actually, HANNAH MONTANA!LOL!
Date: 06/01/10 05:47 am Title: Chapter 6 Wer bist du? (Who are you?)
Hahahaha... Tom surely moves in fast!!! =)
Why not add into ur next chapter, the breakup between Renee n Andi, n the starting romance between her and Bill?? =)
Author's Response: pateince la!coming soon,:)
Date: 06/01/10 05:32 am Title: Chapter 2 Hilf mir, bitte. (Help me, please.)
Hmm, portayed Andreas as a Jack**s huh? Its better if you've written u slapped him too! =)
Date: 06/01/10 03:16 am Title: Chapter 6 Wer bist du? (Who are you?)
haha, Jess lives under a wock. for nt hearing of TH~~
btw--tiny typo> openning (opening). & too bad, jess beat me to it (Hmm, to bad Jess beat me to it)
EEEEEEEEEE the twins came!! SOcuuute, i loveds that part~!!
Great description ;)
uwahhhhh lovely lovely conversation! perfect bits of everything--like bill being shy and opening up..and lol finally tom und jessica in the kitchen. Renee aint gonna look at that place the same way ever again XDD
Thanks for keeping up with it! HUGGUUU~
Author's Response: omg.....so much for me gonna proofread everything before submitting. lol. Thank you,GILGAMESH, what an exotic name. haha, im gonna do more tonight!
Date: 05/31/10 05:19 am Title: Chapter 5 Mensch! (Wow!)-Part one
hee, german lessons! i can say goodnight AND sleep well now! *applause*
haha at cave-like homey home XD!
I like how you portrayed Ren and Jess' r/ship, like the tripping and hopping XD
BTW RENEE MUST BREAKS UPS WIT ANDIZZZ, COS I NO WANT HIM!!
On the other hand, i Do like a pic of him all blonded up.
http://www.google.com.my/imglanding?q=andreas%20tokio%20hotel&imgurl=http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_k-7Xl1PhS_U/SWvcG84iTyI/AAAAAAAAAI4/yE1K9UcO2CM/s400/110057_905189155_andreas_le_pote_a_bill_H115228_L.jpg&imgrefurl=http://4evertokiohotelth.blogspot.com/2009/01/mejor-amigo-de-bill-y-tom-kaulitz.html&h=262&w=350&sz=21&tbnid=TyBVFCFjp-mdvM:&tbnh=90&tbnw=120&prev=/images%3Fq%3Dandreas%2Btokio%2Bhotel&usg=__kEeiZsZ1-zsK47Vk78iIYNR2d1c=&ei=wX4DTPzjAcGxrAfYkMnuDg&sa=X&oi=image_result&resnum=3&ct=image&ved=0CB4Q9QEwAg&start=0#tbnid=TyBVFCFjp-mdvM&start=2
can't wait for you to unravel MOARRR.
Yo serious reviewer,
Gilgamesh.
LOVELOVELOVELOVELOVE
Author's Response: HAHA, omg, glad im offering indirect german lessons! lol! thank you, seriously, for reviewing every single chapter eventhough you're alone in that, T.Trnhuhu, just you wait, more juice to come really soon. especially since i am so addicted to writing this story. an hour every night before i sleep in fact. :D
Date: 05/29/10 10:51 am Title: Chapter 4 Ich brauch das. (I need that.)
ho, Bill thinks renee's sick! Little does he know >)
i like the part where the twins appear at her house, the labour shock and the fully wully..nothing rhymes with fully!
DU sprechen gut deutsch justwin!
btw i thought renee's german! klose~
hahaha XDD
^ ^ awating the next chapter!
Author's Response: hmmmm...i guess i skimped on her background. ah well, nevermind.you dont need to know. heehee!macam la u tak tau u tu bangsa apa,hah???hhahahahahaha.
Date: 05/27/10 04:21 am Title: Chapter 3 Es tut mir leid (I'm sorry)
HAHA.at first, whenever renee checked her phone, i thought it would be Bill! OTL imagine the second time, and it's jessica. but the kerli alarm was cute!
ahhh. then Bill texts. this is more like it~ XD hahaha!! georg and gustav nt coming, hahaha!
yay, love the last, part" get back to me soon, Bill."
and LOL at the "Ps : Riley's Renee's boss. He's not important."
MOARR. cant wait to see how it unfolds. i like the unravelling though, we cant be rushing too fast into things! ^///^
Author's Response: nah uh! i aint rushing it just yet. But, i have to say, i came up with a juicy idea yesterday for this story. hohohoho, cant wait to keep on writing!stay tuned.
Date: 05/27/10 04:04 am Title: Chapter 2 Hilf mir, bitte. (Help me, please.)
when i read the part about the slap, i was on my tummy on the bed and i squeeeaaaled and kick-kick. XDD like, le gasp, yo.
LOVE. and then Bill as superman!
i was afraid that this would be the end,cos it sounded final,but hey, heard that third chapter's coming so yay me!
Andy became so eeeeevviil for this purpose, hoho.
Author's Response: HAHAHAHA, DUDE! it wont be so short laa...how can i end it after two chapters of nothingness?heehee.just u wait, theres more to come.
Date: 05/26/10 02:24 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Du bist'ne arschloch! (You're an asshole!)
hey sexy! i've yet to read it but i like the title already! i've printed it out and will be back to comment!!
btw, i'm MRS KAULITZZZZZ
;)
Author's Response: HAHAAH! GILGAMESH gave you away, nevermind mrs kaulitz! thank you, will post another chapter today.:)
Date: 05/24/10 12:08 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Du bist'ne arschloch! (You're an asshole!)
Thats what i thought too about my story, but it takes time. I will spread the word of how great ur story is. :D
again keep writing no matter who listens. :D
Author's Response: ~.~ IM SO HAPPY RIGHT NOW! tahnk you, you're TOO sweet!xoxo
Date: 05/24/10 03:33 am Title: Chapter 1 - Du bist'ne arschloch! (You're an asshole!)
Keep writing. Really great so far. :D
Author's Response: AWWW, MY FIRST REVIEW! thank you so much for reading! i was kinda thinking nobody would wanna bother to click on it, but thx!!!!