Date: 08/21/10 02:27 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Wie es gerade ist. (How it just is.)
squealllllllllllllllllllllllllll yes! my part!!!!!!!!!!gimme the juiceeeeeeeeeeeeee!
Date: 08/21/10 02:20 pm Title: Chapter 14 - Geb mir deine Herz und ich sags dir. (Give me your heart and i'll tell you.)
nein ,it was a nice chapter. :)
Date: 08/21/10 02:15 pm Title: Chapter 14 - Soll das alles sein? (Shall that be all?)
yes u shud end! dont leave it hanging!
ohhhhhh i loveeeeee the if im dumb so r u twin facts bit! kinda true!
and u got me thinking yeah! tom maybe pulling stupid jokes as if his head is in his pants but really, it might be to i dunno make their routine job casual n stuff. not boring. so he has to crack jokes... nice chapter!
Date: 08/21/10 02:07 pm Title: Chapter 13 - Kann ich dich halten? (Can i hug you?)
i love the interview bit! very TOKIO HOTEL! VERY TOM! VERY GUSTAV!
Date: 08/21/10 02:00 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Wer bist du? (Who are you?)
cheese is yummeyh :9
Date: 08/21/10 01:55 pm Title: Chapter 11 - Ich kann nicht mehr langer warten. (I can't wait any longer.)
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fuck andreas!
Date: 08/21/10 01:39 pm Title: Chapter 8 Das ist mir scheissegal. ( I couldn't give a shit.)
bill whyyyyyy didnt u walk by renee stark naked??????????????????
Date: 08/21/10 01:28 pm Title: Chapter 7 Mist, Was machst du?!(Crap, what are you doing?!)
dat mama kaulitz part tore my guts out!funneh!me like!
Date: 08/21/10 01:19 pm Title: Chapter 6 Wer bist du? (Who are you?)
HAHAHAAHAHAH the fact jess wore RED DRESS SEQUINNED at dat kills me man! wtf girl?????lolllllllllllllllllllllllllllll love this !
Date: 08/21/10 01:08 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Part two (consists of mostly text messages, XD)
tom! tom! tom!!!!!!!! *hyperventilates* but im a bill girl????? tom marry meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Date: 08/19/10 02:15 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Wie es gerade ist. (How it just is.)
You do? Rejected I mean? o`A'o that's weird!Seems completely fine to me! but the Beta reader wld be cool too. get advice and shiz man.
And WOW what a cool contest! that 2 week stay thing! At first i thought it was a real prize, frm that Reebok ad Tom did! But seriously, NAICE idea, it's gonna be so. much. fun. >)
...Weelll i really like how you described Bill's feelings and the scene. It feels authentic to me. :)
Date: 08/19/10 01:30 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Wie es gerade ist. (How it just is.)
LOLLLLL I went straight to this chapter baby! haha don't kill me. coz ive been so busy with sewing n my own fanfic, cannot wait! =P hurry up with 16!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 08/18/10 01:56 am Title: Chapter 1 - Du bist'ne arschloch! (You're an asshole!)
hah! when will my cameo appear man???can't wait! make me feisty but still a virgin! hahahah =p and when ure finished with my bit only then i'll continue reading!
*threatening eyes*
Date: 08/17/10 11:48 am Title: Chapter 14 - Geb mir deine Herz und ich sags dir. (Give me your heart and i'll tell you.)
WAGH where got boring!!
Got a confession here LOLLLLLLL
it was funny too!!
It read like they were really in character Justwin! Lovely. :)
And FUNNY abt Tom's reaction HAHA. Bill talking to his feet or wall, and Bill's SO CUTE when he says it's embarrassing! mwahhh. GOOD JOB, YOU.
and i hear IzzahBABY will make an appearance?? AWESOME. cant wait to see the drama unfold! izzah the virgin i REMEMBER hahahahahhaa.
Date: 07/06/10 05:24 am Title: Chapter 14 - Soll das alles sein? (Shall that be all?)
HAHAHA YOU HAD ME LOLLING FROM THE START about the cameo favour!!
Imma start reading it now!!
*anticipates happily*
OHHHHMIIGOSHHHHH hahahahhahahaha scheisse that's GUUUUD, got my name, story's name, oh loooollll
*BANGS MEATY HANDS ON TABLE*
AHAHAHAHA.
oh wooooooww..i really like how you ended it!! *shiny eyes* You do have a way with words, so keep that writing fire barrrrning~ though it may be like little and blue now. :)
Just write whenever you want to dear~! Good things come in time. :)
As long as you finish..ten years later pun takpe. But i'll keel you first!! XDD
This is already a fantastic gift, 14 chapters already!! No one's written such a long story for me before, or a story, for the matter. A TH story!! ^ ^
Date: 07/02/10 09:28 pm Title: Chapter 13 - Kann ich dich halten? (Can i hug you?)
Loving the story! ;)
Date: 07/02/10 02:40 pm Title: Chapter 13 - Kann ich dich halten? (Can i hug you?)
Soooo sooo cuuuute!!
Date: 06/23/10 05:22 am Title: Chapter 12 - Wer bist du? (Who are you?)
AHAH!
NAO THAT PARANORMAL header makes sense!! it was confusing me before!!
OOOOooooooOOOO, bill cried, the sweetie, and no dear, it's not cheesy! just surprising, but pleasantly so! :)
woaaah i DID NOT expect this. did you come up with it recently? teehee.
NICE. now bill's forced to put up with renee hovering around, and she forgotz him too!! WHAT FUN.
I LIIIKKKE IIIIIT >:D
which part did you think was weird? i don't see nothing weird, apart from the obviously paranormal :)
Date: 06/18/10 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 11 - Ich kann nicht mehr langer warten. (I can't wait any longer.)
ohhh man everything is tooo sad!...
i keep readin the most depressin ones but these are the ones that come out the best lol!
Author's Response: im gonna take that as a compliment! heehee, thanks for reading!ill update in two days btw!
Date: 06/18/10 01:34 pm Title: Chapter 11 - Ich kann nicht mehr langer warten. (I can't wait any longer.)
ohosdhohkhsadjkafdshkdsdddjslkdjs
SPEECHLASS. I AM SPEECHLESS!
and wiggling out of control, and smiling like a madman. what a terrific bubbling feeling in me chest cavity!
Author's Response: HAHAHAHAHHA,UR SO FUNNY! hoohoo, wait till u get a load of the next chapter! *smooch*