Date: 04/02/15 07:54 pm Title: The Heartbreaking way
Loved it! Absolutly loved it
Date: 08/01/11 08:59 pm Title: Prologue
Awww the ending was so sad and like the title says: heartbreaking :'( but it was also intensely great! Truly amazing story! :) I loved the horror of it, and how Bill was torn by emotions throughout the chapters.
Date: 06/26/11 12:31 am Title: The Heartbreaking way
That really IS heartbreaking. I teared up at this. Ironically enough, when I read what the first 4 were I thought to myself it would hurt the most if he commited suicide in front of him, and when I read that's what he did, I would have laughed if I wasn't so sad. Really great story though :')
Date: 06/25/11 11:50 pm Title: The Messy Way
That was disgusting. Great! But disgusting. I'm nauseous now. ( )o,O( )
Date: 01/06/11 02:08 pm Title: The Heartbreaking way
wow, now i wanna cry ö
I was still hoping they would work things out in the end, but that didn't happen...
but... that's what makes it realistic, which makes it so absolutely beautiful
Author's Response: And thank you very much for reading! I was also hoping for some kind of happy ending, but I didn't think that would ever happen. xP
Date: 10/09/10 12:13 am Title: Prologue
oh, poor Bill!! it was so sad story!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Date: 07/08/10 01:31 pm Title: Prologue
You crazy girl... I love it! I've told you already, but I love it! And I think it was a great way to end it. It was sad, but it was the right way to do it. Really good, you deserve to be proud of yourself and your work. :)
Author's Response: Danke shön! It really means a lot to me that you liked it! :D
Date: 07/06/10 09:45 pm Title: The Heartbreaking way
*crying*
Author's Response: Sorry!
Date: 07/06/10 09:43 pm Title: The Heartbreaking way
*crying*
Author's Response: Sorry!
Date: 07/05/10 12:31 am Title: The Heartbreaking way
This WAS a heartbreaking one, a bit cruel even since Tom loved Bill. Seeing that would injure and haunt him all his life.
On the other hand, Bill offing himself is the best ending, I think. I'm glad in a weird way. Tom probably never meant to hurt Bill as bad as Bill claimed he was hurt, and Bill's actions and thinking were scary and a little bit insane. I don't think relationship problems like cheating or getting dumped are ever worth killing yourself or the other person. But stuff like domestic violence and abuse makes things more complicated. And did Bill have depression or suicidal tendencies? Probably, and that adds even more dimensions to his motives and thoughts. I guess every situation is different, but hardly anything--if anything at all--warrants death.
Gah, I'm thinking too much (but that's a good thing) and I want to say yay for you, you have the right to be proud and I liked the way you concluded this story.
Author's Response: It was very cruel, in my opinion. If I was Tom, I would rather die myself, I guess. But in the end, for Bill's sake, suicide would be the only option, he just didn't realize it sooner.
I think, when you're so over your head in emotions, it may be hard to separate what's the cause of everything. I do agree with you, relationship problems should never be the cause of someone's death, but Bill's case was somewhat special because of his childhood.
Thinking is always a good thing. Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. :)
Date: 07/04/10 06:22 pm Title: The Heartbreaking way
*sniffle*
that was so amazing
T____T
Author's Response: Thank you very much! :D
Date: 06/29/10 11:34 am Title: The Kinky Way
Awww poor Bill ): It was very good (YY)
:) xxxxx
Author's Response: Thank you very much! :)
Date: 06/28/10 04:31 pm Title: The Peaceful Way
Bill is frightening in this story.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for reviewing, I am really thankful. And yes, he is. But hopefully, that doesn't stop you from enjoying the read. :)
Date: 06/12/10 06:17 am Title: The Peaceful Way
I have no idea for the next chapter.
But honestly this is amazing.
I LOVE it so much,
I can't wait for the next chapter,
Author's Response: Thankyou, thankyou, thankyou! This review makes me wanna finish it right away. Next chapter will be fun, I promise! Well, it's at least very much fun to write it. :)
Date: 06/04/10 08:10 pm Title: The Messy Way
very cool and murderous story
Author's Response: From time to time, killing people is a great way of having fun, you know. xDrnWell, thank you for reading and reviewing, even though it's a bit creepy! :D
Date: 05/31/10 06:19 am Title: The Messy Way
Wow that was really sad . :( awwwwweh poor Tom poor bill next one please.
Author's Response: Next chapter will be up as soon as possible. I'm going away tomorrow, and will be gone for a week or so, but once I get back, I will for sure put up a new chapter. :)
Date: 05/31/10 12:10 am Title: The Messy Way
Ugh, my stomach.
Author's Response: I can promise you that the worst is over now! No more blood, not very much pain and no more stomach twisting deaths. :D
Date: 05/30/10 12:15 pm Title: The Messy Way
I love murder! Mwahahaha.
Author's Response: Yeah, it is kinda fun, right? In some twisted kind of way. XD
Date: 05/26/10 05:02 am Title: The Painful Way
Awwwww that's so sad. :( It's written really well though :) I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. Next chapter will hopefully be up in a few days. I've already started on it. :)
Date: 05/26/10 12:08 am Title: The Painful Way
Man, so is each chapter gonna be like this, with murder scenarios played out as Bill decides which to choose? It's enthralling. I'm just sitting here like this O_O and flinching from time to time.
Author's Response: Pretty much. I think I'm loving to kill people way too much for my own good. Well, thank you for reading and reviewing! :D