Date: 08/07/10 10:46 am Title: Chapter 11
A very interesting visit indeed. i can't wait to find out what happens!!!! ^_^
Date: 08/07/10 09:46 am Title: Chapter 11
OMG!!!
Update SOON!!!
Date: 08/07/10 05:29 am Title: Chapter 11
This was such a sweet chapter! Man makes me want to go cuddle on a soft bed with the one love drink some champagne and watch a movie together. That's so too cute!! But now I can't remember does Tom and his parents have a bad relationship? O.o
Date: 08/07/10 04:29 am Title: Chapter 11
it was amazing ! perfect exactly how i imagined it !! :) wow im speachless
Author's Response: I tried! Took a whole day to write it! The next chapter is drama. I'll leave it at that. Jules and I have how well end the story but di you have any ideas? Toms parents cause the drama! TTY soon! Thanks again! :)
Date: 08/07/10 04:06 am Title: Chapter 11
some typos and grammar issues, but overall a very good chapter. I'm glad Bill got the romance he wanted. =)
Author's Response: Sorry! I rechecked it and thought I got the issues! Well I couldn't wait to post it! Thanks for pointing it out! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 08/07/10 03:32 am Title: Chapter 11
With the way Tom & Bill go at it, they'll have another set of twins. XD
I wonder how this is going to go down with Tom's parents in town.
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Toms parents equal major drama! No more kids for Bill and Tom......for now. Lol! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 08/05/10 04:57 am Title: Chapter 1
woot woot can't wait to read
Date: 08/05/10 01:41 am Title: Chapter 10
Wow, i really happy to hear that and i love this chapter a lot. i can't wait for the next chapter!!!!! ^_^
Date: 08/05/10 12:39 am Title: Chapter 10
this was great
im glad that Jere is getting better with the twins.
Date: 08/04/10 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 10
i can't remember what bill is getting his masters in. i'm very glad jeremiah is coming around. thanks for the update.
Author's Response: He's getting it in child psychology.
Date: 08/04/10 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 10
ok sweet :) my eamil is : Danisaur_GRRR@hotmail.com
jsut so when i email you your not like whos that :P
Author's Response: Ok. I'll be talking to you soon! Once again thanks again! :)
Date: 08/04/10 06:35 pm Title: Chapter 10
oh i know i love when you throw in drama :) i have read all your stories multiple times im actually reading family portrait right now :)
Author's Response: Awesome! Dont for get 'When I Grow Up'. Lol! Thank you so much! I need aq bit of drama between Tom and Bill because this story wont be a happy ending...well maybe not. Oh! and you can contact me at my email address: Rockbandlover@aol.com or on Yahoomessenger: Brittney_Mccray87. Im so happy your going to help! Excited! :)
Date: 08/04/10 06:28 pm Title: Chapter 10
OMG! that jsut made my life ! id love to help you with this again !:)
Author's Response: Awesome!Just so you know, I need to to throw in some drama. Not for this chapter but for the next one.
Date: 08/04/10 05:53 pm Title: Chapter 10
yeah a cute romantic one would tie it all together :) im so excited to read this :)
Author's Response: Ok. I'm going to write it and hopefully post it when i get out off of work tonight. I want to thank you for all you wonderful ideas and I actually want to work with you and your ideas for this story. :)
Date: 08/04/10 05:45 pm Title: Chapter 10
how about charlie st. cloud. it looks like a really sappy movie
Author's Response: Your so quick with your responsives. I love it! Well I'll make Tom have the power to get it early cause bill wanted to see it. I know I asked alot from you but the chapter have a sex scene or no?
Date: 08/04/10 04:47 pm Title: Chapter 10
i just got the perfect idea for at the hotel :P maybe when they go to check in the girl behind the desk could start flirting with tom and then then they go to the room and tom proves to bill thats hes the "only one" :P
Author's Response: I like that. Ok I'll use that. I'll put it before the other idea you gave me about the movie. I wanted to ask which movie should they watch.
Date: 08/04/10 12:19 pm Title: Chapter 10
i can't believe jere almost drowned the baby. the chapter was wow and then some
Author's Response: Jealousy and Jeremaih doesnt mix. Thanks for the review!
Date: 08/04/10 10:29 am Title: Chapter 10
hotel. sorry didnt see that you had said hotel the first time :P
Date: 08/04/10 09:58 am Title: Chapter 10
Finally the brat came to his senses :/
Author's Response: He sorta did! Thanks for the review!