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Reviewer: BabyBird89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/10 12:31 pm Title: Chapter 12

I can not believe Bill, I mean first he leaves his husband alone with parents that are yelling at him. What if Tom needed him after his conversation with his parents was over. I might have left for a second to drop the kids off somewhere so they didn't have to hear it, but I would not have stayed gone. Then when Tom doesn't feel like talking and he is ready to talk he call Bu which is uncalled for. I understand what Bu means to Bill, but they did have a sexual relationship in the past and maybe Bill should consider how it looks for him to leave in the middle of the night only taking one child with the man he used to sleep with. If Bu was a real friend he would not allow Bill to runaway from problems in his marriage and come to him. That just my opinion though, I could be wrong!! :) Love the story!!!!

Reviewer: Tokio Jax Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/10 11:32 am Title: Chapter 12

OK..I don't understand where Bill went at the end, with just the one kid?

But let me back up first...
What Bill did was wrong. He should have stood by Tom's side and supported and defended his husband! He should have cussed Tom's parents out and kicked them out of his house, not turn tail and run! Tom obviously needed his support and he showed Tom that he would run at the first sign of trouble.
Tom has a right to be mad. I would be too! But Bill should have just waited until moring and found out what happened. How coud he leave his twins like that? That makes no sense at all! And cry at the end? No, I was pissed! Bill should be in mama bear mode, taking on all attackers and being a vicious bitch when it comes to protecting his family. What the hell??!!

Reviewer: bookme Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/10 11:27 am Title: Chapter 12

I love it, Tom is meen, he should talk with Bill, but I feel sorry for the twins. Keep on writing :)

Reviewer: Afri_Angel Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/10 10:28 am Title: Chapter 12

That was soo sad. WHAT THE HELL TOM!!!!!!!!!!!! What was that all about and why did Tom act like a fucking bitch!!!!!

Reviewer: frkostad Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/10 08:54 am Title: Chapter 12

awww how sad. i hope everything will be alright again and that bill doesnt do anything with bu

Reviewer: ibsen Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/10 08:19 am Title: Chapter 12

Love it!!! upload soon! :)

Reviewer: julialyssa Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/10 07:56 am Title: Chapter 12

Wtf just happened? Why is Tom being like this? And bill should have given it more time, running away is not the answer.

Reviewer: AutomaticGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/10 07:47 am Title: Chapter 12

*cries*

Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/10 06:14 am Title: Chapter 12

-pouts- Nein ;-;

Reviewer: ichbinda828 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/10 05:41 am Title: Chapter 12

Omg i was teary at the end omg wtf tom! i really have no words plz plz plz plz update soon. suspense is def not my friend!!!!!!!

Reviewer: omgthatshot05 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/10 04:32 am Title: Chapter 12

Okay so here is what I think. Tom had every right to be pissed but he did not have too take it out on Bill. Bill should have let Tom chill out before they started to talk. It seems that Bill keeps going back to Bushido and I don't really think that's right he is married now and can not go running to the arm of another man just because they got in a fight. Tom told Bill to leave him alone and Bill should have done just that. The fact that Bill did not take the twins really makes me mad but its whatever. Anyways can't wait till y'all girl up date and see where all this goes.

Author's Response: Nothing going on with Bushido and Bill. Bushido is a good friend to Bill. Always there for him in his time of need. Everything will come together.

Reviewer: kittyskull Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/10 04:29 am Title: Chapter 12

WTF Tom?!
Bill did nothing to deserve that sudden outburst of rage.

He'll regret that in the morning. :/

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: HollyWoodFix Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/10 03:52 am Title: Chapter 12

Why did Tom have to be such a dick?!?! And why did Bill have to leave?!?! I need answers people! ASAP!! :D

Reviewer: DAni_DISAster Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/12/10 02:33 am Title: Chapter 12

MORE!!!! it was so good though! i dont like tom being an ass face !:P

Author's Response: He didnt mean too. It was because he was stressed out with his parents

Reviewer: Sieren Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/08/10 02:32 pm Title: Chapter 11

cant wait for more

love ya guys

Reviewer: ingold Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/08/10 08:16 am Title: Chapter 11

Very,very,very god!

Reviewer: Tokio Jax Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/07/10 07:43 pm Title: Chapter 11

I loved it! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: KristineTH Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/07/10 06:33 pm Title: Chapter 11

Did Bill ever tell Tom what Chase did to him? Will he ever?

Reviewer: frkostad Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/07/10 02:06 pm Title: Chapter 11

hot chapter ;)

Reviewer: peache4u Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/07/10 12:34 pm Title: Chapter 11

oh toms parnets are in town, DRAMA

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