I really like this first chapter (:
& i definitely plan on continuing to read any more chapters you post ^^

I just have one slight question.
Jeremiah called Bill, "Daddy," but at the one part in Tom's line he said,
"...pussy?" and im a bit confused at the moment. Bill is a guy in this story, correct?
[plus, the story summary says, 'father' but i just wanted a little clarification for my teenie mind, hehe]

& Bushido, Being Sweet?
I think this is the first one ive read where he has had that type of personality [i like it ^^] In alot of the others, he is rough xD

I really cant wait to read more about Tom & Bill, to see what happens from here. & to see if tom will try to contact Bill after their little blow-up.

Great Start (:
-----Samantha

Author's Response: I havent explained it yet but Bill has both sexual parts. It will get explained really soon. So hes a daddy/mommy. Bill doesnt like the fact that he has a lady part so he leans more to the male side....even though he's gay. Sorry if this is confusing. All will be clear soon. Thanks for reviewing.