Date: 06/06/10 08:24 am Title: Chapter 6
stupid chase and that family of his! And poor Bill! And yay he wanna marry Tom! :D Great chapter.
Date: 06/06/10 08:12 am Title: Chapter 1
Ok first of all I think it was a great cap, as always.
Secondly Bill should only marry Tom becase he love him and not because of what Chaseīs family said. Its Tomīs duty to challenge that.
And the last one: how can you look like a German? Iīm german and I donīt think I look any different like an American for example!?
Date: 06/06/10 06:49 am Title: Chapter 6
wow...that chapter certainly had a lot in it, and I wasn't expecting any of it! Your characters sure have huge attitude changes...Anyway, I'm looking forward to the next part =)
Date: 06/06/10 06:42 am Title: Chapter 6
Chase is an asshole! How can you do that while your child is in the room?!
Bill's getting married! I hope..
Date: 05/31/10 08:34 pm Title: Chapter 5
i really like this story. its very interesting. please continue
Date: 05/31/10 06:42 pm Title: Chapter 5
omg why should he care if bill gets married. o and love this story cant wait for next chapter
Date: 05/31/10 02:27 pm Title: Chapter 5
awww chase cheated on billa. he's such a bastard
Date: 05/31/10 01:46 pm Title: Chapter 5
cant wait!
aww i wanted Bill to have a girl...or better yet, twins ROFL
Date: 05/31/10 12:39 pm Title: Chapter 5
Okay so wait I have to ask, Bill has both parts right. Will the new baby have them as well or no? Kind of sad to so Bu go but I guess it had to be done
Date: 05/31/10 11:50 am Title: Chapter 1
Good chapter, especially the flashbacks are very descriptive, but the only thing i'll tell you is the grammar mistakes are kind of distractive. I'm not saying that to be mean, just saying. =)
Date: 05/31/10 08:33 am Title: Chapter 5
great chapter. can't wait for more. =) this is getting really good.
Date: 05/31/10 07:19 am Title: Chapter 5
MORE MORE MORE MORE! I really hope that Tom doesn't turn out to be an asshole and leave Bill when he finds something better. Bill and Jeremiah don't deserve that, they deserve the world and to loved and cared for! I can't wait to read more.
Date: 05/31/10 06:07 am Title: Chapter 5
Grrrrrrr......
I have read way to many stories with
cliff hangers..
Dam you!!!!!
I must say.. they MUST get married or i'll come and kill you with a cookie :D
Date: 05/31/10 05:32 am Title: Chapter 5
Bill can always give marriage a 2nd try. This chapter is good, full of emotions :)
Date: 05/31/10 05:14 am Title: Chapter 5
How could anyone ever cheat on Bill? i'm in a 'loving Bill/Bu' faze so Bu leaving really made me sad. This is still great though, really enjoying it.
Author's Response: Oh no, Bu is still in the picture...trust me. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 05/31/10 04:46 am Title: Chapter 5
Poor Bill...poor knocked up Bill.
Chase is such a dick!
And I really hope Tom's good streak doesn't end and he doesn't go back to being a douche...
Anyway, can't wait for the next part =)
Date: 05/26/10 07:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
That is a seriously sexy banner. I must say!
Date: 05/26/10 07:12 pm Title: Chapter 4
Bill better not throw Bushido aside! He was the one that was there for him financially and otherwise. There's nothing wrong with Bill and Bu remaining friends...