I'm so glad that you updated this!

But oh no DX

Truly and sadly beautiful

Author's Response: Thank you, I adore this story and I cannot wait to be able to devote my full attention to it.

That was really intense. I have to admit I grabbed my heart when Tom screamed that he's tired of Bill expecting to be with him 'all of the time'. It hurt, it did. D: Oh dear, what a mess. Well, cheers mate, keep going strong. :)

Author's Response: Thank you, I am glad you like it so far. I always imagine what it would be like to be forced to have a connection with someone, even if you don't strive for it. I imagine it would be painful.

Greetings! I'm very far behind in my reading of all the stories I've been tracking you'll have to forgive my tardiness here. T^T
The chapter is clean and yum, characterisation, but I have to say I'm becoming a bit lost, in regards to plot. It was a little here, there, and everywhere and my eyes are like, 'ahh what should I be keeping an eye on, and what should I take in passing?'~ xD Until the very last sentence of this chapter, it all felt a bit idle to me, that's all. Not bad, just idle.
Which, on to the last sentence... I can finally see the prospect of excitement here~~ They key, the key, keys are always fun, I do wonder what's going on with that.
Man, on a side note, those Kaulitz twins, particularly the younger sound down right spoiled. xD Gracious~~ xDD Damn, I know nothing about brands and fashion, it was certainly amusing to see Bill lose it over brand name items. At any rate, I hope you're still sticking with this~ (I seemed to have lost you on email all that time ago, it wasn't that I said something wrong or anything I hope. o.o) Anyhow, keep smiling, keep writing!

Author's Response: Thank you very much Estricnina, I am sure you can see that I am also quite tardy on responding to review work. rnrnI am glad that you are enjoying my work so far, I hope to have more time for this story in the future once HUMANOID is closer to completion. The plotline is not going to be very full of surprises as far as minute details, so if you decide to keep reading I recommend relaxing and just letting the story take you where it will. This work is going to focus much more on the internal emotions of the twins that any massive twists and turns.

what?!? what does a single keycard mean? do they not normally share a room? D:

Author's Response: Normally yes, they do share a room. But Tom is frustrated with Bill in this part of the story. I hope that you enjoy what comes next.

Whew. I wonder still yet, where this is going. The idea of static to function as a physical representation of their connection is still very creative to me, I really like it, and find it interesting. God, their junk food sounds good. Cheese covered popping corn, spinach/garlic pizza (yum!), cheesecake, beer!? *faints from hunger*
The end section was the best part of this chapter I think. You basically nailed what I believe to be the twins in a nutshell, realistic with a simple, paranormal (?) of sorts twist.
I groaned a little, because no matter now many times I read, see or hear of Bill's desires for true love (in fiction, or in real life), it still makes me all squirmy. In this case, my twincest-obsessed self is screaming, Tom, Tom, Tom, Tom! He's right there!, but if you're keeping your promise as was outlined in the story notes, I'm sure I'm going to have to restrain my mind now because it will only lead to disappointment. I also feel for them, it almost sounds as if they're growing tired of one-another's company, the static acting as a unwanted boundary. Fufufufu. At the same time, their twin-ness (haha) is also well done and very cute. I try to be 'squishy' with my sister, but she usually pushes me away and says mean things. Doesn't stop me from trying the next day. xD Well, I'll be shutting up now~ Good day and keep healthy! ^---^

Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review, I really appreciate your input on this.rnrnThe static is a huge part of the twins connection in this story, and it will only become more apparent as time goes on. I am happy that I have caught what you believe to be a good representation of the boys together. Not having a twin, it is hard for me to imagine what it would be like to be as close as these two characters. It does seem like the two of them are getting tired of their company. Perhaps it is not each other so much as it is the fact that they do not have the option of being apart for too long. I believe that without the static they would choose each other over others most of the time anyways, but removing the option makes it harder on them.rnrnI hope you continue to enjoy. I am currently looking for a brainstorming Beta on this story. If you are interested in being involved with help, feel free to shoot me an email: Halcyon_MOD@yahoo.com

I don't know if I have any kind of idea what is to be expected in this fic quite yet. I suppose in a sense the ambiguity is rather mysterious, though a few more hints would have kept me on the edge of my chair more successfully. One thing that I did have an issue with, was I found it all to be a tad choppy; it was curt and straightforward sentences, one after another, so it didn't flow smoothly as I read to myself. Otherwise, I'm interested in what will happen next, this static connection sounds curious and I think I'll track it up and await the next installment patiently!

Author's Response: Thank you very much for the feedback, I agree that the first chapter has a hard time drawing me in. I think I must have missed this face when I was reading it over since I obviously know what everything is leading up to. I do hope that you enjoy what is to come.