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Reviewer: xXfaithXx Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/26/10 10:12 am Title: Chapter 4

im loving this story, its very well written and i love the idea, well done and keep up the good work

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: nastyfreak Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/26/10 08:56 am Title: Chapter 4

this is a really good story, very uniq. i like really much :D

Author's Response: Thanks! ^_^

Reviewer: Majestrix Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/26/10 06:28 am Title: Chapter 4

LOL

Yes, Bill. Backward.

This is so much fun to read.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: cutiexslut Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/26/10 06:20 am Title: Chapter 1

oh that tension building up is soooo, soooo. and we're only at chapter 3!
how many chapters are you planning for this story? :)
can't wait for more.

Author's Response: I'm not entirely sure, to be honest, but no more than fifteen I don't think! I'm very glad you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: Sara Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/26/10 05:44 am Title: Chapter 4

Bill's so spoiled but Tom is not going to give in easy
and i can tell that Bill finds Tom intriguing and that Tom likes Bill,he finds him breathtaking..that's a good sign

u didn't tell us how old is Tom

more to come

Author's Response: Tom's 29 in this :D I'm so pleased you seem to be enjoying it!

Reviewer: musicandstyle Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/25/10 04:37 pm Title: Chapter 3

I can't find the words to explain how much I love this. The words that you use really help to set the time, and your descriptions are just beautiful! I absolutely adore this. Bill's attitude, Tom's sense of calm and his refusal to let Bill get to him, everything. Even the servant had character!

Your characterizations are amazing, and ajksdfal. God, I can't wait for the next chapter.

Reading this is like reading aa book! I'd swear that it was written back then instead of now, in 2010.

Bravo!

Author's Response: ♥ Thank you so much. I hope you enjoy the next one!

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/24/10 10:03 pm Title: Chapter 3

Bill is such a brat ! I like the ending part, where Bill is captivated by Tom... can't wait to read the next chapter !

Author's Response: Bill is a complete princess ^_^ I'm glad you're enjoying it still, thank you for letting me know! ♥

Reviewer: Ryuuzaki_L Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/24/10 07:28 pm Title: Chapter 3

Wow, the last scene felt very real, I can totally see how Bill was captivated. I love both your Tom and your Bill and I can't wait to see how Tom will (hopefully?) break the diva! *_*

Author's Response: Lol! Bill's certainly going to put up a good fight first. I'm so thrilled that last scene felt so real; Bill's conflicting emotions about Tom are pretty much the central element to the story XD

Reviewer: Majestrix Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/24/10 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 3

Oh, Bill. You're so transparent. lol

Author's Response: His subtlety does fail, lol.

Reviewer: parallelheartz Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/24/10 05:18 pm Title: Chapter 3

LOL. OHHHHHHH BILL YOU'RE GETTING IT BADDDDDDDDDDDDD. xD

Tom sounds hot here. Like seriously. I think I need to take him if Bill (A. Man.) doesn't want him. xD

And I'm telling you, Bill is so petulant it's amusing me to no end.

Author's Response: Bill doesn't wanna admit how bad he's getting it though >.>

Reviewer: strssna Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/24/10 04:55 pm Title: Chapter 3

I think I'm under some mysterious spell, much like Bill, with this story. The characters, can't wait to get to know them better and see how things will develop. Very, very interesting :)

Author's Response: Thank you ♥ I'm so glad you're enjoying how it's going so far!

Reviewer: Nia Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/23/10 01:51 pm Title: Chapter 2

I'm definitely enjoying this :)

Author's Response: ♥ Yay!

Reviewer: Litago Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/23/10 11:39 am Title: Chapter 2

This is really interesting! I adore your writing style and language. I was impressed.
I'm looking forward to another update.

xoxoxoxo from Litago.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Abe Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/23/10 12:15 am Title: Chapter 2

I enjoy the dynamics between the two. And your writing is impeccable, my dear. I find it a bit counter-intuitive that Tom would be referring to his student as "master", because I would think Bill would show respect to his elder and tutor with that title instead. Then again, I know nothing about historical edicate haha. Anyways, this is great, I look forward to the next update. :)

Author's Response: I know exactly what you mean about Tom calling Bill 'Master', but the 'Master' title is connected to status, so that's where it comes from. Tom would be, by rights, Mister Trümper, but Bill's the son of a Lord so he'd be 'Master Kaulitz', 'Master Bill' or the 'young Master'. The latter are more appropriate to people who are more familiar with him, so Tom's stuck on 'Master Kaulitz'.

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/23/10 12:05 am Title: Chapter 2

I love their interactions ! This is gonna be so interesting, can't wait for more !

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Billa_Loves_Skittles Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/22/10 11:23 pm Title: Chapter 2

very much enjoyed :D thank you!

Author's Response: Thank you! :D

Reviewer: parallelheartz Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/22/10 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 2

LOL. *pats Bill on the head* Poor Kid. xD

And Tom is growing on me MORE AND MORE. I love his no-nonsense attitude. xD And You're doing the 19th century proud xD

Author's Response: ♥ I'm glad you're enjoying this, thank you. Tom is most definitely no-nonsense here.

Reviewer: Majestrix Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/22/10 11:14 pm Title: Chapter 2

I don't care, I'm loving it anyway!

Author's Response: ♥ Thank you!

Reviewer: bobbins Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/22/10 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 2

Ooooh, I really like this so far! Diva Bill is brilliant and I love that Tom just doesn't take his crap. I suspect the lessons are not going to go problem free, not if Bill has anything to say about it ^_^

Keep up the good work hon x

Author's Response: ♥ I think you suspect right! Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: THbillgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/22/10 05:05 pm Title: Chapter 2

loving it so far!!!

Author's Response: Thank you! ♥

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