Date: 05/28/10 06:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
It's so cute and funny how Bill acts all "gentleman". more like a diva, really :) and that everyone seems to call him a brat. I think Tom will find soon enough how much of a "brat" can he be ;)
Author's Response: I think Bill's gonna realise Tom's just as bad ^_~
Date: 05/28/10 03:17 pm Title: Chapter 5
LOL, i love that he ran away. LOVE it xD and YAY Samy and Georg! I wanna know more about them!
Author's Response: They feature more :D Glad you're still into it!
Date: 05/28/10 11:55 am Title: Chapter 5
*squeals* sooooo good
Author's Response: ♥ Thank you!
Date: 05/28/10 10:28 am Title: Chapter 5
Oh Bill, you naughty creature. :3
Author's Response: He's very grown up ^_~
Date: 05/28/10 09:51 am Title: Chapter 5
this story just pulls you in. Hope to see another chap up soon.
Author's Response: I'm gonna try and keep them nice and regular for you ^_^
Date: 05/28/10 08:46 am Title: Chapter 5
yay, i really like this :D
Author's Response: ♥ I'm so glad ^_^
Date: 05/28/10 07:20 am Title: Chapter 5
great story. keep going.
Author's Response: It's already written and just needs editting so I'll keep it regular as I can!
Date: 05/28/10 07:15 am Title: Chapter 4
bill and tom fighting - HOT!!! martial arts tom is sex on legs.
Author's Response: Lol! I'm so pleased you liked it!
Date: 05/28/10 05:05 am Title: Chapter 5
This story is brilliant so far. It's written so well, and more intellectual than most on this site. I enjoy the chemistry you write so easily between Tom and Bill, and I wish this had as many reviews as it deserves. I hope you stay inspired to write this.
Author's Response: Thank you ♥ This fic is actually already written, so subject to extensive edits and such like with my beta reader, you don't need to worry about me stopping writing it!
Date: 05/28/10 03:29 am Title: Chapter 5
Damn that Tom Trümper and his dreaminess!! That Bill is a stubborn one and I can't wait to see them butt heads yet again. :)
Author's Response: Bill is very stubborn, lol. I'm glad you're still liking it Lena <3
Date: 05/28/10 03:18 am Title: Chapter 5
Oh jeez. One step forward, two steps back.
Author's Response: And then a gallop in the opposite direction. :D
Date: 05/27/10 11:47 pm Title: Chapter 4
hehe they are so funny
Author's Response: Thank you! ^_^
Date: 05/27/10 08:37 pm Title: Chapter 4
Hehe...Bill is such a priss.
Author's Response: He definitely is; thanks for reading!
Date: 05/26/10 08:20 pm Title: Chapter 4
I'm always happy to see an update for this story! Very good so far, can't wait to read more !
Author's Response: Thank you ♥
Date: 05/26/10 05:55 pm Title: Chapter 4
LMFAO. Bill's such a little loser, but Tom seems to be handling him JUST FINE. xD
I adore Tom in this, I really do. xD He's so kick-ass xD
Author's Response: Bill's just a bit of a brat here, lol. Then again, Tom does know how to play him at his own game XD
Date: 05/26/10 03:18 pm Title: Chapter 4
I love how in character they're staying! At this point, lots of authors would've had them break character, and they probably would've flirted a little, or something. I love how slowly they're progressing, and how you're keeping them in character. Bill is still prideful, but he slowly is relenting just a teeny, tiny bit, by allowing Tom to teach him. And Tom is still refusing to break. I noticed a few points at which they seemed to admire the other (staring; that was cute. :3 ), but other than that, there's not much between them at this point, and it's to be expected.
I can't say enough how much I love that you're taking things slow with them, and keeping them in character. It makes this all the more enjoyable to read! I'll be lovingly waiting for more. =D ♥
Author's Response: ♥ Thank you so much. Bill is very prideful in this, and so is Tom in his way. I think that's what I enjoy about the dynamic, and why it goes so slowly - it's very much about overcoming pride and learning to let go in a whole variety of ways. I'm thrilled you feel it's working so well!
Date: 05/26/10 01:44 pm Title: Chapter 4
very difficult period to write and thus far, it has been superbly done. please do continue.
Author's Response: Thank you! I really appreciate that ♥
Date: 05/26/10 01:14 pm Title: Chapter 4
I love how they're taking their time, actually taking baby steps on a relationship that might develop to be... well, I'd be lying if I said I had no idea/hope of what I hope it's developing to be ;)
Author's Response: Hee, lots of baby steps. I'm so pleased you're so into this fic, thank you ♥
Date: 05/26/10 12:45 pm Title: Chapter 4
lol bills learning something!!!:)
Author's Response: Slowly but surely... maybe ^_~
Date: 05/26/10 11:34 am Title: Chapter 4
Hahahaha. Love Bill and Tom in this one! I loved Tom locking away all of Bill's hideaways and how predictable Bill was in his reaction to it.
I am really enjoying the chemistry between them and I love the push-and-shove dynamic they have.
Looking forward to the next chapter. :P
Author's Response: Thank you so much ♥ They're a pair of brats really.