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Reviewer: onyx Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/21/10 06:08 pm Title: Chapter 8

please keep writing this is amazing

Reviewer: thruthemonsoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/08/10 12:04 am Title: Chapter 8

I am in love with this story. There is so much character development, and it makes me smile. A lot of authors write some character development, and then all of a sudden Bill and Tom are together. I love that you're taking your time and showing different sides to both while having the perfect balance of humor, fluff and everything else.

Reviewer: Zina Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/06/10 04:18 pm Title: Chapter 8

Poor Bill... And I`m really courios, what Tom will say:- Thanks so much for the fast updating!!

Author's Response: Thank you for reading! <3

Reviewer: dusty273 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/06/10 03:27 pm Title: Chapter 8

I love period stories, and this is not the exception. The pacing and the detail you're putting into it, makes it an even better experience for me. Loving this story so much, I love Diva!Bill, love the realization that he might actually need a tutor, the small clues that he might be developing some attraction to Tom, despite his disfiguration. I'll be looking forward to more.

Author's Response: ♥ Thank you, I really appreciate those sentiments and I'm so glad you like the way it's coming along.

Reviewer: fyredancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/06/10 11:54 am Title: Chapter 8

Progress! And yes, Bill is a serious diva. >_>

Author's Response: Ever slow progress!

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/06/10 10:11 am Title: Chapter 8

Haha of course Bill is and will always be a diva ! Bill is making progress, he finally realized that he probably should listen to Tom and learn from it! Can't wait to read more :D

Author's Response: Thank you ♥ Just so you know, I always really appreciate your feedback!

Reviewer: strssna Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/06/10 09:09 am Title: Chapter 8

I love Bill's behaviour in this, so entertaining :) And seeing the slow natural development of their relationship is a pleasure to read, Bill slowly building trust.

Author's Response: Thank you. Bill is just about getting a clue now, and I'm glad you're enjoying that slow build. ♥

Reviewer: lipa Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/06/10 06:45 am Title: Chapter 8

“He probably wants my body,” he continued, pulling his pillow down over his head. “So the poison is to make me vomit myself out.”

OMG LOL xD

Author's Response: Hungover!Bill excells in logic!

Reviewer: Majestrix Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/06/10 05:32 am Title: Chapter 8

You're right, Bill is such a diva. I'm glad he's beginning to realize that Tom might have something to teach him, because the big wide world is far different from the solitude of his practice room.

Author's Response: So very true, and squeee that you're still reading ^_^

Reviewer: umetnica Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/06/10 05:24 am Title: Chapter 8

I'm still endlessly amused at all the "my hair" stuff. Poor Bill. Tom's actions weren't exactly the babying that poor diva!Bill wanted, but I thought the end was so sweet. Though I possibly shouldn't get my hopes up that Bill will be any easier from now on, huh? I shall wait and see. ;)

Author's Response: Hee ♥ Thank you, Lenapie!

Reviewer: Athem Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/06/10 05:11 am Title: Chapter 1

Whoa I was not waiting for an update so fast. I was so excited.

"Bill felt as though some disease-infested-rodent had died, and proceeded to rot in his mouth for several weeks before he’d awoken" That's so gross, but it made me laugh. This was a funny chapter.

I love the way Bill feels about Tom. I think he likes him as a person, though he tries to deny it...of course that's Bill.

I was wondering how many chapter will story have?

Author's Response: It's a very silly chapter, so I'll glad you enjoyed it. I'm not entirely sure how many chapters the story will have, but I think we're around halfway through.

Reviewer: Zina Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/05/10 04:46 pm Title: Chapter 7

What a fantastic fic! I like this plot so much, the characters are very well written, and the story is so exciting! Update soon, if you can! Thanks for sharing this awsome story!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Aiming for tomorrow!

Reviewer: crystality Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/05/10 03:04 pm Title: Chapter 7

I really love this story! *___*

Author's Response: Thank you! ♥

Reviewer: thruthemonsoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/04/10 02:40 am Title: Chapter 7

I am definitely enjoying this. :) One of the best chapters so far! Their interaction in this chapter was perfect.

Author's Response: Thank you! This chapter ended up with a lot more work than the others so I'm pleased it paid off!

Reviewer: more_than_dreams Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/10 08:53 pm Title: Chapter 7

amazing. :D

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: troublemischief Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/10 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 7

hheeeeeeeeeee!!!!! This is quickly turning into one of my favorite stories!!!

Author's Response: Thank you!! So thrilled to hear that!

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/10 05:47 pm Title: Chapter 7

I'm definitely still enjoying this ! I like the end, where Tom said to Bill that he wouldn't have let him die... can't wait to see how they relationship will progress!

Author's Response: Yay! Ending with that sort of gravity felt like a risk, but I'm pleased you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: pattylake Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/10 05:35 pm Title: Chapter 7

This story is so wonderful. I hate reviewing on my blackberry but I had to just tell you how much I love Tom's characterization in this. Wonderful read!

Author's Response: I really appreciate you reviewing on your blackberry, thank you!! ♥!!

Reviewer: Nia Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/10 05:30 pm Title: Chapter 7

It's so sweet, the way Tom cares for Bill :) The end of this chapter made me smile.

I'm so in love with this! ♥

Author's Response: ♥! Yay!!! Tom is a sweetie, he just likes to hide it!

Reviewer: fyredancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/10 10:03 am Title: Chapter 7

Excitement!! Derring-do! I'm glad Tom didn't have to kill someone because Bill disobeyed. I like to see Tom's POV, the flickers of tenderness he has for his charge, the glimpse of the man Bill could, perhaps will be some day. ♥ And Bill, oh oblivious Bill. You're darling.

Author's Response: ♥ Glad you're still with me, Tay!

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