Date: 04/22/14 08:23 am Title: Happy by !NeverShoutNever!
This story was cute. I loved the 1-2-3 chapters the most I think, but I liked the whole story. :)
Date: 10/29/13 09:12 pm Title: Happy by !NeverShoutNever!
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!
Date: 10/25/13 01:48 pm Title: Vermillion By Slipknot
Honey, if I wasn't gay, I'd have proposed on the spot for that response. That was PERFECT. Oh and the story's awesome too. ^^ Jk, it was amazing but that response was just too perfect to pass up a comment. Not trying to be a creeper here (although I'm 98% certain I'm failing) but that really was great. If only people stood up for them selves like that more often. This world could use a little more sass ;)
Date: 10/05/12 07:59 pm Title: Happy by !NeverShoutNever!
So cute i love the story
Date: 05/20/12 08:28 pm Title: Happy by !NeverShoutNever!
*gross sobbing*
Bill and Tomi's relationship is pretty damn perfect and i love how Tom was so damn determined to make Bill fall in love with him!
Love the fic, good job!! < 3
Date: 06/15/11 03:38 pm Title: We Looked Like Giants by Death Cab For Cutie
I love your stories and think you have awesome ideas and plots.
It's just when your grammar's bad or you use wrong words in certain places which can ruin the atmosphere you've created. If you don't have a beta you could just quickly skim through as sometimes the mistakes are quite obvious.
But I do love your stories a lot and have a bunch more of yours lined up for me to read :D
Author's Response:
i know :/ this was done a while ago, before i got my beta. she does alot of stories but she will go back through and beta my old stories when she has time.
Date: 02/11/11 12:14 am Title: Happy by !NeverShoutNever!
This was a really good story! I like the reason you gave for the male pregnancy being possible along with the differences between a normal female pregnancy and the 'mpreg cases'. Wonderful job!
I do have to say, I would see about getting a beta-reader to run through it. They save my lives a million times and help you see your own writing in a different light. I hope you take that into consideration for any future projects. No one's writing is a hundred precent perfect and for all those trying to say yours should be, I want to see them try writing.
Date: 01/10/11 03:31 pm Title: Happy by !NeverShoutNever!
I LOVE CHISTOFER DREW INGLE he is sweeter in person
Date: 12/28/10 10:13 pm Title: Pretty Visitors by Artic Monkeys
I'm sorry that some rude reviews were written for your story. I, on the other hand, loved it. To be honest, I believe it's not about the grammar but the plot itself. I loved your story!! It was so sweet!
Date: 11/07/10 12:41 pm Title: Happy by !NeverShoutNever!
you should have a sequel of five years later and see how many kids tom and bill have running around
Date: 10/29/10 01:40 am Title: The Fear by Lily Allen
Now hunny, please don't take this in a bad way, I love the story line and everything, I just think that your grammar needs a little refining. Have you thought about getting a beta reader? Someone who'd help you fix all the little things? Or maybe try rereading it once or twice to get some of the errors yourself before you post it. That way, you probably wouldn't have people hounding on you about it all the time. Hahahahaha :) Just food for thought.
Date: 09/29/10 09:34 pm Title: Happy by !NeverShoutNever!
i loved this story!!!!!!! loved the songs u put up!!!!! beautiful job this is a piece of art!!!
Date: 09/19/10 09:50 am Title: Blow My Away by Breaking Benjamin
It's a good story line, but if you went back and checked stuff closely to make sure you got all the grammar mistakes it would be much better. Or send it to a beta. :)
Date: 09/11/10 06:54 pm Title: Happy by !NeverShoutNever!
deliciously Great!!!!
Thank you!! :-)
Date: 09/06/10 12:34 pm Title: Together by The Raconteurs
Sorry, I can't read this! Get this story beta'ed.
Date: 09/04/10 10:31 pm Title: Happy by !NeverShoutNever!
I love this story. It's really good. Yes there were mistakes but I barely noticed. An enjoyable read. :)
Date: 09/04/10 02:08 pm Title: Happy by !NeverShoutNever!
Congratulations on completing the fic.
Date: 09/04/10 01:54 pm Title: Happy by !NeverShoutNever!
What a perfectly sweet ending!
Just fix the line..Bll do you take Bill...
Date: 09/04/10 09:57 am Title: Happy by !NeverShoutNever!
NOOOOOO! It's over!!!!
Epilogue?
Date: 09/04/10 03:07 am Title: Happy by !NeverShoutNever!
aww i love this chapter so much. its sad this fic is done i loved it so much. <3