Date: 07/06/10 05:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
aww, thats sooo sad
Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
Date: 07/06/10 04:22 pm Title: Chapter 2
No. You do not just end it like that xD I was getting so deep in the fic and then it ended...
In the first chapter, I couldn't tell if my eye sight was dying, or something b/c all the words looked blurry too. I'm betting I was crying during it. : It was very sad, lovely.. I'm sorry about your friend. :(
And this is really tragic, in a beautiful way. I just want to curl up and die now. But, this is really heartbreaking... I hope nothing ever like this happens to Bill. o_O Pray to God it won't. X_X
...Hm, I love how you're portraying Tom, he seems to broken up and confused. The G's seemed like they didn't know how to react. and it looks like David is going to end up with a really bad headache...
Cancer is a scary word. :[ I don't like seeing it.. anywhere T.T
However this fic is progressing nicely, even with only 2 chapters. Do really continue. :)
The banner is gorgeous btw.
And also, instead of typing multiple capitalized "X"'s just put < hr > without space, it is used to put those long ___ line's like that. ;)
Very beautiful! :')
Author's Response: I'm sorry for making you cry! My intentions with this story are to hopefully portray how people would react if someone so close with them were to be diagnosed with something as terrible as cancer, and how relationships change, etc... I glad that you're enjoying this, no matter how sad it is. I tried to get the reactions of the characters 'right', so I'm really glad that you liked how people have reacted. Thanks a ton for the review. rnrnThe Banner was made b Nina Elisabeth, isn't she wonderful? rnrnThank for telling me how to put in a line, I had no idea how to do those, and it will definitely be better. :rnrnThanks again for the review; feedback is the best thing I can get. rn
Date: 07/06/10 02:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
One of my friends died of osteosarcoma recently. 'Beat' the cancer twice, but on the third time she was too tired.
Love the story, all the characters have this little *spark.
Author's Response: Thans a lot for the review. My friend died of the type of cancer Bill has the second time round, he just seemed to give up at the end. I'm very sorry for your loss. rnrn
Date: 05/20/10 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
cant wait for more
I am sorry about your friend
And yes, Tears In Heaven is a beautiful song. Did you know it was written by Eric Clapton for his son who died when he was 5 (he fell out of a window)
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I did know that Eric Clapton's son died, but I didn't know how. SO sad.
Date: 05/20/10 04:19 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm so sorry for your loss =( it's terrible to die so young =(
great chapter though =)
Author's Response: Thank you for the rerview!
Date: 05/19/10 11:12 am Title: Chapter 1
WOW PLEASE CONTINUE! xD I LOVE THIS ALREADY!
Author's Response: I'm glad that you like it :)
Date: 05/19/10 10:07 am Title: Chapter 1
Awwww I hope bill dsnt die
Author's Response: Me too! ;)
Date: 05/19/10 08:51 am Title: Chapter 1
poor Bill and Tom and, everyone! this was really good and sad at the same time! can't wait to read more! hope you'll update soon!
and i'm really sorry about your friend!if he somehow can see what we are doing down here, i'm sure he is very happy that you write this story to him ;)
Author's Response: I'm sure he is too, he loved Tokio Hotel. Thanks a lot for the review!
Date: 05/19/10 08:27 am Title: Chapter 1
This is really good, I can't wait for more. It seems really realistic and when I read the chapter end note I understood why; I'm so sorry to hear about your friend, that's really horrible :( I hope I never have to go through that.
*hugs*
But yeah, this is good, I'll be tracking it.
Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked it, I really tried to make it realistic. Thanks for the review!
Date: 05/19/10 08:16 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm sorry for the loss of your friend-I also had a friend(RIP Eric) die from cancer. *hug's to you*
This is going to be an extra kleenex story...
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, and I'm sorry about your friend.
Date: 05/19/10 12:59 am Title: Chapter 1
Aww... You had me tearing up. My Nana had cancer, so i can kind of connect to this. It's really touching and i can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review, and sorry about your Nana. That would be hard to go through.
Date: 05/19/10 12:43 am Title: Chapter 1
poor Bill!
I love tom in this story he is so gentle with his brother.
cant wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I'm glad that you liekd Tom in this, I tried to get him right (ish) in his relation with Bill.