Date: 08/06/10 05:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
I found this today, and like it very much so far. I'm a nurse, so the medical stuff is good, and accurate too. Good job. I notice there's no "Major Character Death" warning, so if Bill dies I'm gonna be PISSED.
Just sayin'.
I loved the little girl, and Bill's interaction with her. And the "bony white ass" comment made me smile. :) Because you know it's totally true.
Good story. Keep it up.
Author's Response: I'm not telling whether Bill's going to be alright or not... mainly because I haven't decided yet! We'll have to find out together ;) Thanks a ton for the review!
Date: 08/05/10 01:53 pm Title: Chapter 5
This is so amazing, I hope Bill can get through it.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review!
Date: 08/05/10 12:07 am Title: Chapter 5
poor Bill
My grandmother had cancer, although it wasn't leukemia
Author's Response: Thanks for your review, and I'm really sorry about your grandmother.
Date: 08/04/10 04:24 pm Title: Chapter 5
OMG-i'm ready for the treatment's to start and see how Bill and Tom along with all the other's cope with everything...
Author's Response: Treatments will start in the next chapter - and thanks for the review!
Date: 08/04/10 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 5
Awh. :3
Poor Biu. Get better. ):
Author's Response: Thank you for the review!
Date: 07/24/10 08:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
Thank you so much!
Author's Response: You're welcome, thanks for the review!
Date: 07/23/10 05:01 pm Title: Chapter 4
I love this to bits! And I awww'd at Bill's cute little interaction with the little girl, that was a sweet moment in the middle of all the serious stuff.
Love this.
Author's Response: Glad that you like her. Thanks for the review!
Date: 07/22/10 09:47 am Title: Chapter 4
aww.i like how bill is so concerned for tom even though he is the one who is really hurt. the little girl made me smile. :} i cant wait for more
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad that you liked it.
Date: 07/22/10 12:05 am Title: Chapter 4
I cried, I smiled, I loved it!
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Date: 07/21/10 07:11 pm Title: Chapter 4
I really like this story
please continue
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Date: 07/21/10 06:20 pm Title: Chapter 4
It's funny that Bill is so worried about Tom and he is the one who's sick :/ That boy is so selfless.
Author's Response: I think that Bill would be more worried about Tom than about himself, considering their relationship. Thanks for the review!
Date: 07/21/10 03:32 pm Title: Chapter 4
Awww, i like this story sooo much *-* It's so autentical written. Poor twins .___. Hope the new chapter comes soon.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I'm glad that you liked it!
Date: 07/21/10 07:31 am Title: Chapter 4
Aw. I had my doubts about this fic, but I love it! :3
Author's Response: I'm glad that you tried it, and twice as glad that you like it. :) Thanks for the review.
Date: 07/09/10 06:55 am Title: Chapter 1
i feel bad for bill. i hope he gets better soon, but i laughed at the boney butt part
:}
by the way, how do you add a line break?
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad thet you're enjoying this. To add a line breat just type < h r > where you want the line to be, minus the spaces. :)
Date: 07/08/10 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 3
A few people speak in German in France :)
Been there its really weird.. :D
I really like this
Author's Response: lol, thanks for confirming that for me! And thanks a lot for the review, I'm glad that you like this.
Date: 07/08/10 08:27 pm Title: Chapter 3
I can't believed I cried reading this chapter O.O I think it's so sad, knowing that Bill usually looks sorta small and delicate.
Author's Response: Sorry for making you cry! But thanks a lot for the review!
Date: 07/08/10 07:56 pm Title: Chapter 3
Lovely chapter. :) And you used the hr thing. xD You're welcome btw for that....
I'd like to say, I don't believe Tom is 'much heavier' than Bill. He has muscle, but not much... I mean, his legs are twigs, smaller than Bill's in fact, and his forearms are the same, just his upper arms are a bit more large. But he's still very small.. And he probably only weighs ten pounds more. Nothing more. Plus he's shorter by 2-3 inches, and every inch increases your weight, so he still isn't "much heavier". The twins have huge height, but a small body compared to what they should/could be.
Anyways, I loved the chapter, so beautiful. Really love how Tom makes Bill sit in his lap. :3 So beautiful. *heart*
The part where the G's were on the computer thing about cocaine was like... lol. Does the media really think he takes cocaine or is this something you made up? And the part of the comments made me laugh. XD It really looks like how TH fans type lmfao. x3
Jorg seems like a wonderful father (:
And the thing of the hair was funny. :p
I hate health talk. xD It's disturbing, scary, and sometimes plain ew. D: Like, IDK want to know what happens to the human bod. :S Please....
So.. they're going to Hamburg for care... So they're in France now...
I don't think it's impossible for Germans in France? I live in California, and everyone here speaks Spanish... and today there were even some Russians in the doctor's office! :) A lot Arabic speakers here too. And since Mexico is near us, we have much Spanish. And France & Germany are neighbors, so yes.. Plus people in Germany learn French, and vice versa! :D
Amazing how you're portraying Bill to continue to have his sunshine personality even during cancer. @_@ I would probably kill myself... ;P
Assisted death... /shot
LOVELY CHAPTER :3
Do continue your close updates. (;
Author's Response: The hr thing was definitely helpful – thanks again for that! rnrnAs for the Tom and Bill weight deference, I don’t think that it would be too much, but I think it would be closer to 2o pounds different or so. If you look at the Tom and Bill Maldives pictures yes Tom’s legs are even skinnier than Bill’s, but his chest, back, and arms are also a lot more muscular than Bill’s, and muscles weigh a lot. I also don’t think that he’s that much shorter than Bill, only about an inch. Bill has a tendency to wear pretty high heels, and the way he wears his hair (pushed back) adds some height. A certainly agree that they’re both really skinny. :)rnrnI got the cocaine thing from a fic that I’m currently reading. I think it would fit as well, considering the media likes to make a lot of strange shit up, and I didn’t want to deal with the whole anorexia issue – it’s done so much and I have a friend who actually had anorexia, and I don’t want to get into that in this. rnrnI totally know what you mean about having a lot of different cultures around you. I live in the most multicultural city in the world, so there are people from all over the world here. I had completely forgotten about Germans learning French in school – I think that makes a nurse speaking German really plausible! rnrnHaving cancer really hasn’t hit Bill yet, so that’s one of the reasons he’s still so happy. Also, there’s the whole psychology thing of the people who are close to someone is sick being more effective than the person who is actually sick, so…rnrnThanks a lot for the review. I hope to continue the close updates!rn
Date: 07/08/10 07:43 pm Title: Chapter 3
thanks for the update
cant wait for more
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Date: 07/07/10 02:22 am Title: Chapter 2
I'm hooked more with each chapter-please please update soon!
Author's Response: I'm glad that you like it - thanks for the review!
Date: 07/06/10 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 2
cant wait for more
Author's Response: Thanks for the review.