Date: 05/20/25 09:20 pm Title: Toxic
I am a Chinese fan who came a bit late. Discovering this website is the happiest thing for me in recent years. I used to use bookmarking as commenting. I must say that I have read and bookmarked this story. Reading this story is undoubtedly a pleasure! Today I plan to leave a comment. Thank you for your story. You are an amazing writer.
Date: 05/21/10 04:07 pm Title: Toxic
It's so cute... *smile* Best idea, thanks for writing this fic :o)
Author's Response: Thank YOU for reading! :D
Date: 05/20/10 05:23 am Title: Toxic
Ouch.. did Tom just fall in love?? Aww.
I think this was pretty good. :)
I liked how they took it slow in bed.. it just felt right. I esp liked that Tom held Bill's hand, for some reason that detail really made it for me.
The middle felt a bit rushed- the bit when the sun went down and they decided to cuddle in bed. To me it feels like it's missing another sentence or short paragraph or something.
And Tom at the beginning was a bit too much of a drama-queen about nailpolish being smelly. LOL.
I think you brought it all together nicely at the end tho, and I liked it, it was sweet. Well done.
Author's Response: Lol that's cuz i wrote the story in two separate days, and the middle just sorta went blahhhhh... but i tried fixing it up xD. But thanks for the review!! <33 (:
Date: 05/19/10 02:32 am Title: Toxic
Very cute and sweet! I do enjoy a nice fluffy story! :D
Author's Response: Thanks! :D
Date: 05/18/10 08:11 pm Title: Toxic
It was so good! Please write another one like this one *__* loved it!
Author's Response: thanks! and i always write fluffy stories :P
Date: 05/18/10 07:56 pm Title: Toxic
Aww.. maybe I'm just depressed, but that made me cry. xD In a good way at least.. But when Tom said Bill was "boring" [he didn't really say that] I was tearing up haha... :3
That was beautiful! I loved the thing bout nail polish, and how Tom told his twin what he thinks of him... gorgeous oneshot love.
I'm going to read it again. (:
Author's Response: thank you! :D glad to make you cry.. lol that sounds awfully mean xD thanks for the awesome review though! :)
Date: 05/18/10 06:33 pm Title: Toxic
F L U F F *heart* :D
This was cutee. & i highly doubt anyone in the world would disagree with Tom saying Bill is 'intoxicating'
Thats a Fact ^^
Great Jobb (:
-----Samantha
Author's Response: aww thank you! :D