Date: 05/23/10 03:33 am Title: The Kids Don’t Stand a Chance by Vampire Weekend
Looking forward to reading more! :]
Date: 05/22/10 02:26 am Title: The Kids Don’t Stand a Chance by Vampire Weekend
Love this story alot very curious!!!
Date: 05/21/10 11:11 pm Title: The Kids Don’t Stand a Chance by Vampire Weekend
This is so good so far!! A word of advice that might help you get more reviews, run your chapters by a beta for some grammar checks it will help the flow of the story more
Date: 05/21/10 08:57 pm Title: The Kids Don’t Stand a Chance by Vampire Weekend
ohh I love it! It's always great to hace a new mpreg, I'm reading bill+1 too.
The baby is beautiful...poor thing, tom must really need a boy, I hope bill can give it to him, just keep writing I'm sure many more are following but they're lazy just like me, lol
Date: 05/21/10 03:32 pm Title: The Kids Don’t Stand a Chance by Vampire Weekend
Tom's a fool for not wanting that baby. She's so freaking cute! Bill is pregnant! Yay! I cant wait for more!
Date: 05/21/10 10:12 am Title: Virginity by System of A Down
What!! Tom is one carzy mofo! I feel so bad for Bill : (
Author's Response: lol
Date: 05/21/10 09:20 am Title: Virginity by System of A Down
SO good! 16 year old Tom wants a son? I'm livng this! So the girl that was with Tom is pregnant? Update soon
Author's Response: tom is a king and like most kings he wants a son, and yes genenieve is pregnant
Date: 05/20/10 07:42 pm Title: Virginity by System of A Down
oh yea I LOVE IT!!!!...it was VERY interesting from chapter one...and was still getting more interesting...POOR BILL!, knowing nothing of the world except his willage(XD)...man everything was fast moving for him too...and NOT knowing what sex is either T_T...wonders whats gonna happen in the next chapter or so...so GOOD =D
Date: 05/18/10 05:17 pm Title: Prologue by Into The Woods
This sounds as if it has a lot of potential. I already want to read more and will definitely be checking up repeatedly on this story.
Great start :)
Date: 05/18/10 04:13 pm Title: Prologue by Into The Woods
Hey it´s really not bad so far! For a better judgement I would like to read more of this story!
Date: 05/18/10 02:19 pm Title: Prologue by Into The Woods
I like how it starts, I'm interestet, keep witing :)