Date: 08/02/10 04:16 am Title: V.I.P.
That's a douche-baggy thing of them to do.
Honestly no clue on the next chapter.If Tokio Hotel is who she sees then maybe they will give her a ride, i don't know.
Date: 07/21/10 10:14 pm Title: Tomorrow's plans
I love all these characters! Such personalities, and you do a great job of describing! Looking forward to more!
Date: 07/20/10 07:42 am Title: Tomorrow's plans
really interesting!! please update soon!! ^.^
Date: 07/20/10 02:36 am Title: Tomorrow's plans
Awesome :D:D Can't wait :D
Date: 07/16/10 11:57 pm Title: Something In Common
i think mrs.arianna is in need of a friend. if she wasnt so damn bitchy she would have some.
i think arianna is bitchy becuse she has those supper strict controlling parents that are kind of like stage mom with their kids furture and the only reason she had been taking that out on the girls is she has her anger pent up but couldnt take it out on he parents.... oh yeah im a thinker lol
Author's Response: Thanks a ton for all the comments! I prefer longer reviews because the reviewer really lets out their thoughts, so it doesn't annoy me. You understand the characters really well. That's good. It means I'm doing my job as a writer. I'm glad you like the story (and the main character's name!) I hope you like more of the chapters if you plan to keep reading =)
Date: 07/16/10 11:50 pm Title: The Good and the Bad
Selena sounds like an attention loving girl and not in a good way....
yeah i dont like this selena chick. She reminds me why i was such a bad ass in school. But thanks to two men in their 20's walkng round shirtless i rememerd why i love twins - my bro's are twins so are my cusins, i have a best friend thats a triplet and-.... you get the point lol
i dont like arianna either. i cus chicks like that out in a heartbeat. the girls need to toughen up and show some heart.
F.Y.I there is something in the cali water. WHAT it is depends on where you are lol.
Date: 07/16/10 11:39 pm Title: Off To California
Warning- in case I didn't say it already I do comments instead of 'reviews' there pretty long so if they annoy you tell me and ill stop....
I as wondering how the car hood wasn't burning her all the way up until I read that part lol.
"Jaime harlow" ... it is pretty. has a ring to it. i suck with character names lol.
gee wiz they have a lot in common.... are we sure their not secretly triplets?
ur right het's arent as well liked on here because there isnt many f them. everyone wants the twins to be madly in love. i wonder if they realize that means they would never have children....
Date: 07/16/10 11:26 pm Title: The Ride of Their Lives
This lady reminds me of my mother but MORE caring.- that should tell you something- But i like the twins. They seam really close. Cali is cross country? So where do they live then?Not much else to say for this chapter so on to the next one.
Author's Response: Their home state is New York. It says so somewhere in there, I believe. I haven't established where in New York, however.
Date: 07/11/10 02:18 am Title: Something In Common
Wow can't wait to see what's happening :D:D:D:D:D
Date: 06/03/10 09:58 am Title: The Good and the Bad
Awesome :D:D:D
Date: 06/03/10 01:01 am Title: The Good and the Bad
Ooh forshadowing!! I love Jaime and Micki's personalities. However, their little qualms with the other girls seems a lot like high school.
Author's Response: I know, I think I had mentioned that in this chapter. Maybe it was another one. It was difficult to write about the conflicts but I assure you it's all part of the plot. And I'm glad you like Jamie and Micki. Thanks!
Date: 06/02/10 04:38 pm Title: The Good and the Bad
Ah, i have to say i'm really enjoying this fic so far. It's so well written, everything seems to flow so easily, and the subtle Tokio Hotel references are a nice touch! I have to say i'm looking forward to see how you're going to develop both the plot and the characters. I see drama in the near future, with Cody and Selena. Drama is always fun! Plus when TH are finally introduced, i imagine it's all going to get very impressive!
Looking forward to reading more soon!
BrokenFeathers.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I've tried hard to form the character's relationships smoothly, and I know that the stories don't usually get interesting until the boys arrive, so I thought the references would help keep readers entertained. I'm glad you think so, too. And yes. you can excpect a lot of drama between Cody and Selena, but I won't say what! Eventually it will all tie into the plot. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story!
Date: 05/24/10 05:07 am Title: Off To California
WOw awesome can't wait :)
Date: 05/17/10 06:58 pm Title: The Ride of Their Lives
I really like this =)
update more soon ^_^