Date: 07/26/10 02:43 am Title: Chapter 1
So far so..
Oh screw that this is the qreat start of an amazinq story my friend :)
The last sentence qave me the chills!
Date: 05/17/10 07:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
i love the begining it's interseting
good job (:
Date: 05/17/10 12:14 am Title: Chapter 1
Holy S*** IN a good way!
sorrry haha, Well, good first chapter!
Everything is descriptie and well organized. I can imagine the story in my head which is great! =D I can't till the next chapter! when are you going to post a new chapter on your other story?! IT was getting good, "this is the lat time!" i think that was it? quote fromyour story? =)
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! And I'm going to try, I currently don't have a computer, but I try whenever I'm in school or when I'm at my mother's house, which doesn't happen often, so that's why updates are so sporadic. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 05/16/10 08:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
hey good start for a great story
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 05/16/10 08:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
hey good sart for a great story