Date: 11/01/10 10:51 pm Title: Things that Shouldn't be said.
oh please please please write a sequel!!! o love your stories!!!
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Date: 11/01/10 09:38 pm Title: Things that Shouldn't be said.
Stoopid Jessica ;-;
Date: 11/01/10 05:34 pm Title: Things that Shouldn't be said.
wow, very interesting. its as close to really talking as they get. and it was a good thing. i dont like jessica. I hope Tom can figure out what she is doing soon. thanks for the update!!
Author's Response: Welcome. :)
Date: 11/01/10 04:00 pm Title: Things that Shouldn't be said.
I have chills
Date: 11/01/10 01:50 pm Title: Things that Shouldn't be said.
ohmygod! the end is just sooo sooo awesome!! really :) -cries more- this story is jusst soooooooo uberly AWESOME !!AMAZING !! -cries some more- AHHHHHH! can't wait for the next chapter :)
Author's Response: Thank you. Glad you liked it.
Date: 11/01/10 01:18 pm Title: Things that Shouldn't be said.
*sniffle* what else can i say but please continue
Author's Response: Thank You. I will. :)
Date: 11/01/10 03:03 am Title: Things that Shouldn't be said.
My heart clenched at the first part and then I read on. It was really a great chapter. Tom is totally worth pretending to be in the hospital for. I can't wait for your next update so we can see if Bill really meant it when he said he wanted things to be over between them. I think I am on Bill's side in this. Tom never should have gone to the hospital and dragged Bill there with him. She may have been an important part of Tom's life in the past but she isn't anymore. He should have just gone to see her the next day. I can't blame Bill for breaking up with him and feeling like a fool. I'm excited for more.
Author's Response: Thank you. Ill try and update ASAP.
Date: 11/01/10 12:32 am Title: Things that Shouldn't be said.
aww. poor tom
Author's Response: Lol. I will fix it
Date: 10/31/10 11:55 pm Title: Things that Shouldn't be said.
First of all, I want to let you know how happy I am to see that you've updated. Your story is one of the few I come to THF for, as well as Clay!So it was an awesome surprise that you updated=D
Now to the story, I take Bill's side. I'm so tired of Tom not knowing what he wants. One day he likes Bill then the other he wants t sleep with half the girls from the campus. How is he gonna run to see his EX-Girlfriend and take Bill with him. right after they almost had SEX???I also think he doesn't treat Bill with the respect he deserves. I completely agree with Andy, it seems like he's only using Bill!!
I seriously not know what to think anymore. Tom seemed like he was telling the truth when we had that flashback but now I'm not sure anymore.I've always told you that Bill needs to stand up for himself and that I'm tired of him being Tom's puppy and it looks like you've finally listened to me!!
I definitely think you should write a sequel and to be honest with you, I'm ok with any ending you wanna give this story=D
Author's Response: First of all thank You so much for reading and replying. On the story yes you are right. What I want the readers to understand is that the courage that bill found to break up with Tom came from Tom himself when he taught bill to speak his mind earlier on in the fic. Glad you helped :)
Date: 10/31/10 09:34 pm Title: Things that Shouldn't be said.
Dang. I would feel so awkward at that hospital if I saw that. I'd also start nervously eating whatever I had with me. I usually keep trail mix for just such occasions.
Author's Response: Love trail mix :D
Date: 10/31/10 09:33 pm Title: Things that Shouldn't be said.
aww that was so cute. i loved this chapter and i can't wait 4 the next update
Author's Response: Thank You. Glad you enjoyed it. :)
Date: 10/31/10 09:05 pm Title: Things that Shouldn't be said.
I actually absolutely loved this chapter! I think the drama was much needed in order for Bill to express his doubts & fears & for Tom to express his feelings. Jessica needs to go to hell & I hope that Tom finds out about her trying to ruin his & Bill's relationship.
Author's Response: Yes. I believe this was needed for the strength of their relationship
Date: 10/31/10 08:42 pm Title: Mondays
DAMN, i was not expecting that!
awww *cries* ,okay not really but you had me close to tears..
it's so sad :(
i don't hate you!...this chapter was brilliant and jessica is a total bitch..
thanks for the update & i'm looking forward to more
take care X
p.s. Merry Halloween
did you dress up/trick or treat?
and i'm going to go read clay now xxx
Author's Response: Thank you :) glad it made you emotional. Lol. And thanks for the reviews you're so sweet to me. And no I didn't dress up but I did get candy!!!!!! (Bill moment)
Date: 10/31/10 06:26 pm Title: Things that Shouldn't be said.
i wud love a sequel! If u want a co writer i'm open.
Author's Response: If I decide to write it then that'd be great thanksrn
Date: 10/31/10 06:02 pm Title: Things that Shouldn't be said.
I really hope they stay together, follow your heart bill forget what anyone says.:(
Author's Response: Ill fix itrn:)
Date: 10/31/10 05:37 pm Title: Things that Shouldn't be said.
OMFG. i need u to update. i just did my make up for halloween and i almost cried and ruined it haha
Author's Response: Awwww. I'm sorry.
Date: 10/31/10 05:35 pm Title: Things that Shouldn't be said.
I hate Jessica and I hate Tom for defending that whore, I don't blame Bill for wanting to break up with Tom one bit. Can't wait for more, hopefully it will be more happier.
Author's Response: It will ;)
Date: 10/10/10 07:59 pm Title: Sex for Dummies Part Two
are you gonna write soon? plz? you're killin me here. its been a WHILE. i check basically EVERYDAY, and its been letdowns. PLZ WRITE!!!!! :)
Author's Response: I'm so sorry. My chapters are done but my computer is down. Even now I'm texting you through my phone :( when its up and running I promise to update
Date: 10/01/10 02:52 pm Title: Sex for Dummies Part Two
no offense but i REALLY hope she isnt iving birth to Toms baby or is having Toms baby or is Miscariging Toms baby because that would just bring the story down and is so over used i like your story TOO much for something like that to happen just my opinion but im sure whatever you write will be AWESOME
Author's Response: thank you :) and i promise it isnt any of those. Lol
Date: 10/01/10 02:30 pm Title: Sex for Dummies Part Two
NEXT CHAPTER NEXT CHAPTER!!!