Date: 05/23/10 02:43 am Title: Armaretto Sour
lol drunk bill! XD im loving this story i love how Tom is sweet yet an ass at the same time. Btw maybe during the dialogue make it clearer who's talking, i get a little lost when they are talking.
Author's Response: yes ma'am :)
Date: 05/23/10 02:07 am Title: Butterflies and Fire
YOU ARE GORGEOUS!
excellent writing skills btw. keep it up
Date: 05/23/10 01:58 am Title: Butterflies and Fire
aww thats a cute picture. Lol i can't believe Bill is going XD
Date: 05/23/10 01:50 am Title: Silent Truths.
hmmm im now wanting to see what happens when those two see each other again
Date: 05/23/10 01:36 am Title: Grey Eyes and M&M's
lol i can't believe Bill gave up so easily XD
Date: 05/23/10 01:25 am Title: "Sorry Bill"
lol locking them in a room pure win XD
Date: 05/23/10 01:08 am Title: Monday Nights?
lol freaking Georg he fails at life
Date: 05/22/10 08:37 pm Title: Mondays
haha i'm liking this, but you do realize that's not the full theory of evolution? Or was it just for the story? Sorry i just took a class on evolution and it bother me when people mess up the theory.
Author's Response: Yeah. I'm taking a similar class in my college African American Course. A girl and I had the same arguement so I put it in the story. I know it isnt the full theory but I had to move on.
Date: 05/22/10 03:41 pm Title: Armaretto Sour
=D I got the epic Tom actually starts to care chapter dedicated to me!!! *jumps up and down flailing* THIS CHAPTER WAS FANTASTIC!
Author's Response: glad you liked it ;)
Date: 05/22/10 03:16 pm Title: Armaretto Sour
i love it
poor bill tho with the chik... i cant wait to see how hes gona be the next mornin
Date: 05/22/10 01:23 pm Title: Armaretto Sour
oooooooooooooohhh Tom has found the "prize" in Bill's mouth...this should be interesting
awesome chapter
Date: 05/22/10 12:12 pm Title: Armaretto Sour
WHY is that when something goes wrong at a party...they ALWAYS have to get wasted ^^?....its like in most of all fictions like that XD....ugh Tom you MOFO....why did you think that Bill needed that....is surprised that Myra didnt come being a bitch to Bill or something ^^....uh oh....so onve Tom see thats tongue ring i bet hes gonna have all these thoughts and start to like Bill maybe =B...other than that....awesome chapter =D
Author's Response: I was trying to give the impression that Myra likes Tom and since Bill was his guest, she wouldn't be bitchy but still ignored him. lol. sorry if that didn't get through. but thank you for reading. :)
Date: 05/22/10 11:41 am Title: Armaretto Sour
OOOH LA LA! UUUPPPDDDAAATTTEEE!!!!!!!
Date: 05/22/10 10:23 am Title: Mondays
Naaw... XD I like it.
Date: 05/22/10 07:55 am Title: Armaretto Sour
it was alright. i guess i was hoping for Tom to be a bit more attracted to Bill. maybe now that Tom knows Bill has a tongue ring, the two of them might have a little more trouble keeping the attraction away~ im hoping for at least kissing from them soon. update babe, i love you!
Date: 05/22/10 07:53 am Title: Armaretto Sour
love it, need more please
Date: 05/22/10 07:44 am Title: Armaretto Sour
C-can you PLEASE update shortly..
i really wanna know cuz you left me just hanging there.
Date: 05/22/10 07:37 am Title: Armaretto Sour
GIVE ME MORE!!!
Date: 05/22/10 06:10 am Title: Armaretto Sour
*thumbs up* *big cheesy grin because bill is wasted*
im loving it!keep it up!and im excited for the next chapter xo