Date: 05/24/10 11:37 pm Title: Armaretto Sour pt. 2
Aww! Tom is secretly heartbroken. ><
Bill can fix that guy or not.
Oh and your so pretty too! I really like the picture you posted of yourself. ^^
Author's Response: thank you :)
Date: 05/24/10 11:37 pm Title: Armaretto Sour pt. 2
Aww! Tom is secretly heartbroken. ><
Bill can fix that guy or not.
Oh and your so pretty too! I really like the picture you posted of yourself. ^^
Date: 05/24/10 07:59 pm Title: Armaretto Sour pt. 2
Your story is so well written! For my part, I love how things are building up slowly. I don't like when they fall for each other too quickly, it's not believable. I love the way you put their pov. You are truly talented for writing. You keep me wanting for more & I just love the way Tom & Bill are becoming closer slowly. They feel real, your story is good (love Gus & Geo!!), the characters are loveable, so keep up your amazing work! Can't wait for more!
Date: 05/24/10 05:02 pm Title: Armaretto Sour pt. 2
OH MY GOD... That ending there seriously almost made me cry. I feel so bad for both of them right now. I loved the hell out of this chapter and really can't wait for the next. You're doing a FANTASTIC job!
Date: 05/24/10 01:47 pm Title: Armaretto Sour pt. 2
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh he likes him!!! YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW HAPPY YOU'VE MADE ME!!!
aww Tom was going to ask him out! that's adorable! they can still like each other, it won't hurt anything
awesome chapter
Date: 05/24/10 01:45 pm Title: Armaretto Sour pt. 2
I WANT MORE NOW!!! Shit this is a good fics!!
Date: 05/24/10 12:40 pm Title: Armaretto Sour pt. 2
haha "say fuck bill" lol
i liked that confession, another brilliant chapter *gives you skittles *(do you like skittles?)xo
Date: 05/24/10 12:14 pm Title: Armaretto Sour pt. 2
This is soooo GOOD :D I love reading it!
Date: 05/24/10 11:11 am Title: Armaretto Sour pt. 2
i love this story so far :) they way they talk to each other has me lmfao while i'm reading. hope you update soon. n.n
Date: 05/24/10 10:46 am Title: Armaretto Sour pt. 2
First of all: Best confession EVER. Secondly: I love that you have a banner. These last two chapters were great and I'm really curious to see what will happen between the two as a result. Their friendship is probably going to be a little peculiar. I feel like they're pretty set on their way to becoming friends. That is, of course, if Bill doesn't wake up and become WAY bitchier than necessary.
Author's Response: thank you :)
Date: 05/24/10 08:35 am Title: Armaretto Sour pt. 2
This is not too slow. Some of the authors on this site rush through their stories and that really detracts from the quality of their writing. Trust me when i tell you, your pace is suitable to the plot you've chosen. Continue, please. Trust your own gut and let this story flow at it's own pace.
Date: 05/24/10 07:22 am Title: Armaretto Sour pt. 2
:O how sad for tom... but :D:D bill was unbelievable innocent xD I couldn't but laugh!! :D moremore!! :)
Date: 05/24/10 06:49 am Title: Armaretto Sour pt. 2
aaawww, people are impatient and selfish! They should let your run your plot, write your story and decide the happenings! I love how it goes "slowly", cuz' the entire story is like finished when they get toghether, you know? This chapter was great! I just don't like how you unconsciously switch 3. person and POV. It would be better if you only wrote 3. person, like 'he said' 'she thought' (: Just a suggestion. Fantastic story! : D
Date: 05/24/10 04:01 am Title: Armaretto Sour pt. 2
i loved tom's confession and it's moving along fine
Date: 05/24/10 03:24 am Title: Armaretto Sour pt. 2
awwww...damn i cant wait for more!!!
Date: 05/24/10 02:54 am Title: Armaretto Sour pt. 2
i honestly like that the two are professing love to each other by now. I've seen that in so many stories and i think it kind of kills them. So ja I like the slow pace. :3 but damn it he just had to be asleep XD
Author's Response: I'll make it up to you ;)
Date: 05/24/10 02:33 am Title: Armaretto Sour pt. 2
ch....dont mind those other reviewers...most fictions here have Tom and Bill liking/loving each other in the FIRST CHAPTER! its like WTF! chapter ONE!...please....i like how this is going...them taking there time in at least getting to know one another or start getting to =D...Drunk Bill is AWESOME!...hehehe...only cause he cant keep his mouth shut...and poor Tom for his confession but having Bill falling asleep T_T...take your time on there relationship...cause we know that it will be awesome...no need to rush cause readers want them to f*ck like in few chapters ...ugh.....=B
Author's Response: you are awesome!!! thank you. finally someone who understands that love doesn't happen over night. :P
Date: 05/24/10 02:19 am Title: Armaretto Sour pt. 2
i loved this!!! maybe Bill heard everything and fainted? that would be cute~
Date: 05/23/10 12:29 pm Title: Armaretto Sour
ahhhhh more more more