Date: 06/15/10 02:41 pm Title: How Broken Hearts are Formed.
Aw poor thing. Hope your mom gets better though^^ Don't stress it's worth the wait I promise ^^
Author's Response: :) thank you. it makes me feel better. It's just so hard, you know?
Date: 06/14/10 08:22 pm Title: " Don't "
i can't figure out who i hate more in this chapter >.
Date: 06/14/10 07:12 pm Title: " Don't "
*shakes head sadly while sighing* tom why are you a douche all the time? think with your actual brain for once and you might not be so douchebagy all the time. but hes good for comic relief if you have as twisted a humour as mine! and your friend? ja hes kinda hot.
Date: 06/14/10 06:36 pm Title: " Don't "
your friend is definitely cute, i just felt the need to say that and that i'm happy you put him in the story haha.
awesome chapter! i think Bill and Tom were just putting on a show for the guys because both of them knew they would be listening.
can't wait to read more
Date: 06/14/10 02:08 pm Title: " Don't "
PLZZZZ update again todaY. LIKE RIGHT NOW I LOVE THIS SOSO MUCH
Author's Response: lol. i'll try. thank you.
Date: 06/14/10 01:48 pm Title: " Don't "
That chapter WAS like a soap opera. I think Bill needs to give this Tom thing a rest for a while. I really think that if Bill focused on himself stuff would work out better for him.
Date: 06/14/10 12:35 pm Title: " Don't "
heyy!! i was missing you and the story!
good chapter tho (well done..keep it up) ..cant believe tom and that cheating jessica are back together..poor bill =( aww but caleb and andreas..cute couple!!
lol at the 90210 comment ( i loved that show)
update soon X
Date: 06/14/10 08:17 am Title: " Don't "
omg i freaking hate tom, love caleb, hate tom though. He's so mean always leaving bill heartbroken
Date: 06/14/10 04:59 am Title: " Don't "
Hahah. Caleb is kinda cute ;]
Date: 06/14/10 04:45 am Title: " Don't "
aw, caleb is cute!
But bill and Tom isnt, Bill should stop being so clingy and find someone else, and Tom should get jealous!
I love your story!
Date: 06/13/10 10:21 pm Title: " Don't "
lolz he's a cutie...must suck to be bi against your will XD...awsome chapter by the way =]
Author's Response: thank you :)
Date: 06/13/10 10:14 pm Title: " Don't "
Please don't get mad at what i am about to tell you but i just want to let you know how i feel about this story.I really like it but there are somethings that are bothering me a little.
First, who does Tom think he is?is he too good for Bill or something?What the fuck is he doing going back with that whore again?!I mean i get it that he used liked Bill but then he found out Bill was a boy and that left him hurt but he needs to stop being such an a**.
Second, why is Bill being such a 13 year old(just like Tom said) Yes, he likes Tom and he's trying to make him fall for him but he can at least have some self respect!He needs to stop begging Tom and find someone else so he can make him jealous or better jet, he can act like he doesn't care about him anymore and ignore him for a while and see how Tom reacts!
Don't think i don't like your story because i love, its just that i have that little problem with it!
Omg Caleb is really cute, i bet your friend isn't too happy about it?does he know yet?lol I guess Bill only likes white gangsters huh?XD
please update again soon=D
Author's Response: thank you for being honest. i respect what you think about it and i appreciate that you even read it :). Thank you. and yes khalil is a cutie. lol.
Date: 06/13/10 09:25 pm Title: " Don't "
aww poor bill whats toms problem i thought he was all cool with him after that kiss man
Date: 06/13/10 09:12 pm Title: " Don't "
geez great story....cant wait till tom and bill get all close:)...if it even does happen lol
Date: 06/13/10 07:55 pm Title: Mondays
I can't believe it. And here I thought things were starting to look good. Someone or something has to beat that boy out of his denial. I'd love to say Bill should just leave Tom alone (stop coming to his place, stop talking to him, completely ignore him) for a while, then Tom would realize he can't not live without Bill, but in reality if people do that, it means they give up (and that's just not Bill) and there is no guarantee if the other party will turn around. I can't wait to see how this'll turn out. Please continue soon. :)
Date: 06/13/10 07:35 pm Title: " Don't "
I love this story! It's so realistic to me because we all know true love doesn't happen over night. I love it! =]]
Date: 06/13/10 07:12 pm Title: " Don't "
wow poor bill all the guys he likes turn their backs on him
Date: 06/13/10 04:48 pm Title: " Don't "
LOL, Haha! XD I wish Tom would stop being so bitchy D:
Date: 06/07/10 06:43 pm Title: Parties are made for Surprises
PLEASE turn Tom gay. I'm getting pissed off with his DENIAL. Cause obviously that's all it is. DENIAL. DENIAL. He loves Bill but doesn't know it yet. It's in the VERY back of his brain, waiting to burst out. It should be some random experience. Like he's in the shower and then "HOLY FUCK I LOVE BILL!!" Okay I'm rambling now. Can't wait for the update! :D
Date: 06/07/10 12:45 pm Title: Parties are made for Surprises
im in love with this story, and im in love with you for writing it! i love Bill and Tom in this story, and i seriously cant wait for Tom to crack and kiss Bill!!!! delete this and ill cry...