Date: 06/23/10 05:45 pm Title: What Everybody already Knows.
I LOVEEEEEE IT!!!!!!! I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!!!!!!!! XD XD XD
Date: 06/23/10 05:42 pm Title: What Everybody already Knows.
Good for you, Tom. Sadly, it's too late. I was kinda hoping you would have manned up a lot sooner than this, but the fact is that you're angry at Bill for something he had no control over when he wasn't even AWARE of it.
Bill, I get where you're at. It sucks that you decided you were starting to fall in love with him, only for him to then throw it in your face and basically say you don't matter.
Boys--- you live, you learn. However, I do hope that you give each other maybe just one more chance, because I think you two would be good together, keep each other stimulated in many ways. ;-)
Tom, you're not a bad guy, but you are focusing on one single thing, when what matters is what's in your heart.
Bill, I think you need to hear what Tom has to say. He's had a broken heart too and I think this is something you guys need to discuss properly, without fighting.
Great update! XD
Date: 06/23/10 05:38 pm Title: What Everybody already Knows.
:'O
I HOPE IT WORKS OUT!! :( Poor Tomi...I really liked this chapter. One of the best ^3^ Billa is the blind one now. TOMI, YOU NEED TO BE MORE..uh...HONEST..? SYMPATHETIC!? SINCERE!?! Something along those lines...I can't think of the word...but yeah, he needs to be it. It made sense in my head...
Can't wait for the update!!!
Date: 06/23/10 05:33 pm Title: What Everybody already Knows.
I loved it....I just...naaaaaaaw! Tom is still in love with him! :D And then of course Bill decides to be a jackass.. *sighs* I really hope it'll make a turn for the better soon, they're both hurting, and I don't like hurting twins :( It's so obvious they're meant to be together! Oh, and the "everybody knows you belong with me" line was so sweet, you know, in that "I'm being extremely posessive" kind of way ;)
Author's Response: lol yeah!!! thats what i was going for. :D
Date: 06/23/10 05:17 pm Title: What Everybody already Knows.
* takes a second to appreciate being alive today*
I LOVE THIS!!! ITS ABSOLUTELY AMAZING!! BEST CHAPTER YET!!I LOVE IT SOO MUCH THAT I HAVE TO USE CAPITALS..
im glad tom finally realises he loves bill..and bill's reaction i think tom kinda deserved it..but i want a happy ending..please *insert puppy dog eyes here*
*offers you cookie*
hope your good and update soon X
Author's Response: AWWWW you're adorable. Glad you like it :)
Date: 06/23/10 04:49 pm Title: What Everybody already Knows.
awwwww, this is SO much better, and now im totally in love with it again. Bill will come back around, Tom just needs to show him how much he loves Bill~
Date: 06/23/10 04:42 pm Title: What Everybody already Knows.
You don't know how much on come on here, just to see if it's posted LOL..im in love with this story..it's my favorite one on here!!!
*back to story*
I love it!! Poor Tomi..i hope Bill clears his head....they do belong together..awwww
Author's Response: you just made my day 1000x's more better. Thank you ;) glad you like it.
Date: 06/23/10 04:41 pm Title: What Everybody already Knows.
Bill you are an idiot!
Give me more sooN!
Date: 06/19/10 04:57 pm Title: How Broken Hearts are Formed.
I hope your mother gets well soon :(
As for the story...
I'm kinda lost...but ecstatic. Does this mean Tom actually loves Bill, but won't admit it?? :O I hope so!! ^_^ It'd be better if he actually admits it though...
Date: 06/18/10 02:53 am Title: How Broken Hearts are Formed.
I really like this story. Keep up the good work. Hang in there with your mom, I've been there done that and I know its hard.
Date: 06/18/10 02:07 am Title: 223-1547
omg, that is too funny. i love bill and i love tom and i love the pace this is going at. i think its perfect.
Date: 06/16/10 11:23 am Title: How Broken Hearts are Formed.
I'm really sorry about your mom, I hope she gets better. No hurries on the update, family and personal issues are definitely more important.
awesome chapter! it's nice to understand Tom's side of the problem. He can't blame Bill for him falling in love. He should just embrace it.
Date: 06/16/10 10:49 am Title: How Broken Hearts are Formed.
Oh god i feel so terrible now, i didn't know Tom had gone though all of that.I'm sorry if my previous comment was a little too harsh but i didn't know tom's side.I guess i should have waited huh?I feel so bad for Tom now, poor guy!I understand that finding out Bill was a boy and that he was completely in love with him hurt him a lot.
Although i still think he should treat Bill a little bit better.
Don't worry about the updates, we can wait.I hope everything goes okay with your mom.I bet it must be really hard for your family but you have to be strong for her=D
Date: 06/16/10 10:41 am Title: How Broken Hearts are Formed.
Best wish's to your mom! Take all the time you need, we will be here. *hugs*
Date: 06/16/10 10:01 am Title: How Broken Hearts are Formed.
Thank you for updating regularly even though it's hard for you to do so. I hope your mom all the best. This chappy is so sweet. Now I know half of Bill (the real Bill)'s anti-fan were guys who fell in love with him at firs sight because they had thought he was a woman hehe. Can't wait for more.
Date: 06/16/10 09:06 am Title: How Broken Hearts are Formed.
BRILLIANT CHAPTER!!
i loved it in Tom's POV !! it was really interesting to read..and now we know he was so obsessed over him...
on a personal note ..are you okay? i know how hard it is when a family member has cancer..if you every need to talk dont hesitate to contact me.. and im praying for the best for your mum..good luck with the move!
take care (update as soon as you can)
ps..I LOVE YOUR STORY!!! XXX(what does p.s. even stand for?) :P
Date: 06/16/10 02:10 am Title: How Broken Hearts are Formed.
Ah, Iīm so sorry for your mom! And, isīt okey. God, this chapter is amazing. II truly love it, Tomīs so cute, and feels so real, yīknow? God, canīt wait until next chapter, but, take your time, itīs okey^^
Date: 06/16/10 01:14 am Title: How Broken Hearts are Formed.
I'm really sorry about your mom. On the bright side, I didn't get what this chapter was about, till I realized that this is when Tom first met Bill.
Date: 06/16/10 12:34 am Title: How Broken Hearts are Formed.
O_O!!!!!...OHHHH!!!!!!....so that is WHY Tom wont give Bill a chance....*shakes head*....but Tom if you REALLY think about it, Bill did nothing to make you fall in love with him....you cam to your own conclusion that Bill was a girl by stalking him and everything...so i dont think that you should be pissed at Bill for your own fault and not to mention that you dont want to admit to your sexual orientation as well ^^a...ugh Tom you and your stupid delusions XXDD.....
yea....one of my aunt/grandma passed away with cancer and it was pretty hard to cause she was a joyful person to be with and talk with....*hugs*
Date: 06/15/10 11:58 pm Title: How Broken Hearts are Formed.
Aww now I feel really bad for Tom & Bill! Why can't they just love each other already?? And don't worry chemo's tough, especially when a loved ones taking it, so update whenever you can.