Date: 05/22/23 08:02 pm Title: Mondays
I've mentioned this on other reviews: I came into the TH / THF fandom in Jan’22. The vast majority of fics I've read are quite old and I'm sure the authors have moved on (and probably wont even see new reviews), BUT I figure why not leave one anyway… I enjoyed this fic and wanted to say thank you for writing and sharing it!
Date: 11/24/15 08:26 am Title: Caleb Thinks Tom Can Remedy That
I tried. I really tried to enjoy and finish this story but I couldn't anymore. I took a hiatus from this site due to nome of my stories updating in 2011. I came back and saw a few were completed, this being amongst them, and I got excited! Really excited...basically jubilant. I started this story again, due to me not remembering much about it, and I have to say I kind of regret taking the time to even get this far in...I guess I was waiting for this to get better. But it didn't. And I know you finished this ages ago and you're wondering why I'm making such a fuss years later nut I really just needed to vent out my frustrations in this story.
The plot is so basic and simple and so easy to comprehend that a really good story could come from this but instead wishy washy at best. It took 26 chapters to progress the story to where the reader would be pleased with the contents. The progression of the relationship between bill and tom made no sense considering how at one point people were being hurt and in the next people were happy in the relationship is good. Literally tom and Bill both seem bipolar is this story...They seem to talk a lot be never SAY anything...its just a mess.
Your intentions for this story were great...just poorly executed. I'm sorry for the harsh critique but I feel like it had to be said sooner or later...
Date: 11/06/15 10:44 am Title: Monday Night
Whoo...that was one hell of a journy! The mess you we're spinning got thicker and messier and then you started unravelling it amazingly.I just gotta say this..dayum MESSY(a good messy).
It's really well written and I totally enjoyed reading it.:)
Date: 03/09/15 12:18 pm Title: Caleb Thinks Tom Can Remedy That
You incorporated the "keep looking, honey"!!!!!
Date: 03/09/15 10:17 am Title: Butterflies and Fire
I laughed so hard while reading this chapter. Hilarious!!!
Date: 06/27/14 09:45 am Title: Monday Night
Amazing story! Thanks!
Date: 10/05/12 05:13 am Title: Monday Night
Omg gross ass sobbing. I LOVE THIS FIC ;__; and omg the Tokio Hotel question in the last chapter eheheh *giggle* I'm adding this to my favourites ok ;_;
Date: 08/25/12 12:19 am Title: Monday Nights?
I hate tom in this so far. He's a twat. I hope he gets nicer.
Date: 08/20/11 11:57 am Title: Monday Night
this was a good story!!
u should make a sequel for this!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. :]
Date: 05/09/11 06:17 am Title: Monday Night
This story was amazing , I loved every word of it , And i am sad to see that it is over ,
Author's Response: Same for me. :( Thanks fir reading :-Drn
Date: 05/07/11 03:40 pm Title: Monday Night
what can i say... this is... AMAZING!!! LOVELY!!!!!!!!!!! AAAAH!!! This is ORGASM!! XD i really liked this
Author's Response: Thank you. XD
Date: 05/02/11 01:14 am Title: Mondays
I read this all in one day. I'm even losing sleep I need for school just because I couldn't put my laptop down.
I REALLY love this story! Best one I've read in months!! (:
Author's Response: Thank you so much sweets. :D Glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 04/30/11 02:54 am Title: How Broken Hearts are Formed.
Ooooh. Tom's back story. Very interesting.
Author's Response: I got great responses from this chapter. Guess everybody wanted to know what happened. ;P
Date: 04/30/11 02:41 am Title: " Don't "
Wow. Andreas is telling all of Bill's secrets to the G's and Tom is breaking his heart.
Andreas and Caleb's date sounds like it should be interesting.
Date: 04/29/11 02:59 am Title: Parties are made for Surprises
Sounds like Bill threw a great party. I was going to say too bad Tom missed it, but it sounds like they had fun in Bill's room. And I'm glad Tom had peanut m&ms. Those are my favorite.
Author's Response: Thank you. :-D
Date: 04/29/11 12:37 am Title: Monday Night
Nawww I'm always sad at the last chapter :( but anyways, it was an awesome story, I loved it
Author's Response: Lmao!!! You're done!? Wow. I really appreciate you. Glad you liked it. :-D
Date: 04/27/11 05:12 pm Title: Leading Him On.....
Hehe so again I have to review in the middle of the story, cuz I just have to answer that question. *perv* Oh and I like how the story's going with Bill and Tom hehehe ;) So anyways, to the question that I wanna answer cuz my pervy mind tells me so: I don't remember ever being afraid of sex (not counting when I was 13 cuz then you shouldn't have sex anyways). I thought, and still think, that sex is sex. Being a virgin was never to me a big thing since I never saw it as more then just having sex for the first time. Wierd I know, but it's hard to describe. Wasn't afraid of it hurting eather, since I was, and still are, kinda kinky when it comes to pain and sex... not uber masochist, just, ya know, kinky. Anyways, I think my pervy mind's had enough for the time being, so I'm gonna try not to comment 'till the last chapter lol XD
Author's Response: no its cool. I'm loving the Perv stuff. ;-) Lol. Jk. You and I are totally different though. I swear sex to me was huge. Like prom huge! Lmao. But thanks for all your support. Luv ya!
Date: 04/27/11 02:31 pm Title: Butterflies and Fire
huh. So I know I'm reviewing in the middle of the story but girl... You. Look. Hot.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Lol. I was actually having a bad day in that pic. :-D Thanks for reading.
Date: 04/27/11 03:08 am Title: Lip Rings Are Sexy...
Love how everyone loves Caleb, except for Tom and Andreas.
Author's Response: Atlantis your support is outrageous!!! :-D Thanks. I feel really good reading them. I'm glad you enjoy. Love ya!!!!
Date: 04/27/11 02:50 am Title: 223-1547
Great chapter! Love all the coversations.