Date: 01/03/11 06:50 am Title: Just A Normal Day
Oh my :( What a shock to find your love dead like that.. :(
I'm so looking forward to reading the chapters you've posted, this seems lika a great story!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you've found an interest in this story! :D
Date: 06/08/10 04:12 am Title: The Pain of Love
Aww, it's heartbreaking to read Bill as he moves through the stages of grief (that's a terrible way to phrase it, isn't it? My bad, I can't think of a better way to say it xD). But it's so well written, so amazing, you're such a talented author! This story is awesome, and I've been pretty bored all week because I haven't had the internet on my laptop so I haven't been able to read!! *sad* But anyway, enough of my technology problems xD I love this story!
Author's Response: Lol. I hate when I can't find the right way to say something (which happens a lot!!) Thanks for the review!! New update soon :)
Date: 06/08/10 12:12 am Title: The Pain of Love
This chapter was really intense. I loved it, although it made me really depressed. D: I keep hoping for it to get better for Bill, but I know it's impossible since Andreas kicked the bucket...Dx
Please update soon!
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter although it made you sad. I actually cried while I was writing it, but that's probably because I have been more depressed than usual lately. New update soon :)
Date: 06/01/10 07:34 am Title: Don't Make it True
Aww, Gordon's a bit cynical...Bill needs much Tomi love xD Anyway, more seriously, very cool chapter, sorry it took me so long to review *panic panic* I love this story, I love your style in general, it's very well written (do I say this every time? That's because it's TRUE!!! XD) Oh, and congratulations on getting featured!! *party*
Author's Response: Ha! Even if you do say that every time, it still makes me smile!! I'm really glad you enjoy my work. :)
Date: 05/31/10 01:18 pm Title: Don't Make it True
Wow! But why oh why did Andreas kill himself?
Tom is so adorable already!
Can't wait for more!
XD
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!! I'm glad you're enjoying my story so far :)
Date: 05/27/10 04:38 pm Title: Don't Make it True
I really liked this chapter; Bill's emotional response was really hard to read. I can't even imagine how painful a situation like that would feel. I wonder how Bill and Tom's relationship will turn out - if they'll be friends, or confidants, or if they'll remain acquaintances.
I also wonder how Andreas's parents are going to take it - if they'll even consider that it might have been partially their fault.
Great chapter! Please update soon. :3
Author's Response: I can imagine Bill's response very clearly, because I knew a girl who once attempted suicide. She survived, and she later told me about the experience. I couldn't help but think what it would have been like if she had actually died, and that partly inspired this fic. Also, there was this major teenage suicide that was triggered by bullying and was featured in the papers recently, so that gave me the idea to write this story. Somber, I know. Thanks for the review, sorry for the ramble :)
Date: 05/27/10 03:44 pm Title: Don't Make it True
Did tom know bill and andreas was a couple?
this was great! now you just have to write some more and im gonna marry you xD <3
Author's Response: No, Tom did not know that Bill and Andreas were a couple until Bill confessed it just now. The boys kept their sexuality and their relationship a secret at school. Thanks for the review :)
Date: 05/26/10 10:45 pm Title: Don't Make it True
Awww billabear
Author's Response: Poor Bill :(
Date: 05/24/10 10:41 pm Title: You Break the Ice When You Speak
Ohhhh no. Dx It really kills me to read this chapter, knowing Andreas dies. I wonder if Bill contributed to the reasons Andreas had for suicide? This chapter was really good! Please update soon!
Author's Response: I do think that it's really sad to hear about the past of Bill and Andreas' relationship when you already know that Andreas dies. You'll just have to wait and see. New update soon :)
Date: 05/21/10 11:11 am Title: You Break the Ice When You Speak
Awww
Author's Response: :)
Date: 05/21/10 11:06 am Title: Just A Normal Day
Omg nein
Author's Response: NEIN!!!
Date: 05/21/10 10:51 am Title: You Break the Ice When You Speak
Awww...poor Bill. I feel so bad for him, I can't imagine how horrible it would be to find your boyfriend and best friend like that. But, anyway, you've written this really well, you can feel Bill's pain. Awesome story, very touching, can't wait for the next update :D
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Date: 05/21/10 10:43 am Title: You Break the Ice When You Speak
This is so good, hurry up and write some more cause im waiting :D
Author's Response: More soon :)
Date: 05/20/10 01:54 am Title: Just A Normal Day
I'm really excited to see how this story pans out - I usually avoid stories like these, just because they depress me. xD But when I saw that you wrote it, I had to read it. I loved this chapter - it really killed me that they so obviously loved each other...and it fell through. It's great that you can evoke emotion in people through your stories. It's really rare to come across an author who can do that so well. :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I was actually a bit hesitant to post this story because I had the fear that someone depressed read this and be upset. But as long as people heed the warnings, I'm comfortable posting it. It makes me smile when you describe my stories!! Thanks for the compliments!
Date: 05/14/10 01:03 pm Title: Just A Normal Day
Oh wow. This is awesome :D I can't wait to see what happens next, how Bill will deal with his loss, and so on. Please update soon XD
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I have a feeling that Bill is going to take this loss really hard.
Date: 05/14/10 12:25 pm Title: Just A Normal Day
Aaarrhhh! Hurry up and write some more. Dont you leave me hanging here . Its so good! :D
Author's Response: Haha, nice pun. "Dont you leave me hanging here." *coughthat's-what-Andreas-saidcough*. That joke was probably in bad taste, but eh... ;)
Date: 05/14/10 03:46 am Title: Just A Normal Day
Sooo good! i wanna know what happens next!! update soon.!!!! :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it so far. New update soon!!