Date: 05/14/10 06:15 pm Title: The First Nightmare
i always was afraid of the freddy movies...they were the scariest to me...i like a lot and will keep reading...
Date: 05/14/10 03:28 pm Title: The First Nightmare
I'm liking this so far! please, update soon :)
Date: 05/13/10 10:59 pm Title: The First Nightmare
Ohhh, The Man in her dreams was the Freddy Krueger huh? From the Nightmare on Elm street Movies.
[i havent seen the recent one that came out like two weeks ago. i REALLY want to though. everyone said it was some scary shit xD]
Awww, Tom & Ann Kathrin (:
even though she woke him up because of her close encounter, it was still cute when they said 'i love you,' i couldnt help but get a bit mushy over those two lines xD
Im quite interested & anxious in seeing how this all plays out, so no doubt, i will be tracking this one (:
Plus, who doesnt love a little horror with some sexy men? *looks around and no one raises their hand* yep, didnt think so :D
Great First Chapter.
Btw, i caught something [just a minor thing] where in Ann's dream, there is this line:
"She was was yanked back onto the hot pipes, at which that moment her eyes opened and she sat up."
I figured that the extra 'was' was just a little type of some sort.
Cant wait for another update
-----Samantha
Author's Response: Thanks a lot for reading and reviewing. And yep, you guessed it, that's Freddy lol. You should totally see the new ANOES, it is great. But I want you, it is filled with jump scares (which I hate because they soooo catch me off gaurd) lol. And thanks for tracking because I will definitely be updating very frequently.
Date: 05/13/10 10:17 pm Title: The First Nightmare
*shivers in esxcitment* ooohhh! this sounds good! i cant wait fo more :)
Author's Response: Trust me, there's definitely a lot more on the way. Stay tuned for more. Thanks for the review :)