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Reviewer: QTPieS Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/16/10 07:14 am Title: One Last Chance
Author's Response: Sorry I didn't reply earlier...erm...uh...rnI know! I've been searching for one for YEARS(not literally. xP) and finally I was just like...I have GOT to write about my favorite guy! :D So this came out of my messed up mind. Heh. Thanks for saying it was written well...I didn't think so. It could have been longer, bwahaha :)
Date: 05/16/10 07:14 am Title: One Last Chance
THANK GOD SOMEONE WROTE, "HET - TOM/OFC - ONESHOT!!" just my typa story! hehe
I thought it was awesomely written!!! You're really good at explaining and keeping the reader interested; you plan and set out the story really well. And despite the fact that the BlondeBimbo kinda scared me with the gun (which was unexpected), I thought that it was an intriguing plot :)
-And i'm really glad you didn't kill off Sara :) it's nice to read a happy ending every once in a while x)
Nice story :D
Author's Response: Sorry I didn't reply earlier...erm...uh...rnI know! I've been searching for one for YEARS(not literally. xP) and finally I was just like...I have GOT to write about my favorite guy! :D So this came out of my messed up mind. Heh. Thanks for saying it was written well...I didn't think so. It could have been longer, bwahaha :)
Reviewer: JumbieCasanova89 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/13/10 10:40 pm Title: One Last Chance
Date: 05/13/10 10:40 pm Title: One Last Chance
WoW. That was intense. Honest and intense. I like it.
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