Date: 10/20/10 07:59 am Title: An Important Talk?
Loved all the drama in this! I also liked how it addresses the sex issue as I was also wondering about that as well. And the cliffie! Talk about suspense... xD
Author's Response: Lol!! I had a feeling many people were wondering about the sex stuff. XD;;;
Sorry about the cliffie. ;x I'll try to update as soon as I can!
Date: 10/20/10 07:15 am Title: An Important Talk?
This chapter reminded me of what I must look like to everyone else on the site. "We'll be abstinent! We don't need sex to have a healthy relationship!" Bahaha. I'm such a...well, I don't know what you'd call it. Anti-smut writer. Except when I can fuck it up and make it really weird and then it's PWP all the way like in the Fame Monster series. :o
Anyway. This is your review, so I'll shut up about me. Gah, what is it with the weird people introductions at the end of chapters? Lord. What was it, Jorg last? I don't remember and I don't want to go searching through the fic to look. XD But yeah, anyway, Jost better not be a bastard to Bill or Tom or both and he better not reveal Bill's secret or I'm going to be pretty pissed off at him. You'll have to hold me back. ><
Morning wood. Ahahaha. You know why I'm laughing. ;)
Author's Response: Haven't we already talked about this? How I don't even find it necessary, and how I myself find it just a big hassle to write? Lol. Anti-smut does not equal abstinent.
Haha! The Jost intro wasn't even supposed to be here. I was gonna put all the Jost stuff together in the next chapter, but after writing the sex talk here, this chapter felt really empty, so I needed to throw something else in. ;p
And no, actually, I don't know why you're laughing. Mostly because we've had so many weird sex talks I can't even remember them all anymore. XD;;;
Date: 10/20/10 06:58 am Title: An Important Talk?
oh no, i hope this turns out okay...
Author's Response: Me too... ;x
Date: 10/20/10 04:37 am Title: An Important Talk?
0_0
More? I must have it! XD
Author's Response: As soon as I can! Although I don't know when that will be. >.>
Date: 10/20/10 04:07 am Title: An Important Talk?
DAVID. .. Yes wel, this was adorably awkward, and amazingly written, as always.
LOVED IT :D
Author's Response: Adorably awkward? What a combination. XD;;; Although I guess it's quite a fitting title. Haha!
Thank you so much! :)
Date: 10/13/10 02:41 am Title: In the Rain
Okay I have no idea what the ABD/TRD reference is so I won't bother looking back for it :D and I've already read the entire 10 chapters but I fealt like re-reading the fanfic and I just noticed something. In one of the other chapters Tom asked Bill how old he really is and Bill didn't know but than they figured he was 15 years old and now here in THIS chapter little Bill says when Tom asked him that he was 15 (although Bill lied but than told Tom he was really 11) But yeah I noticed that just fealt like saying that (or typing) XD don't know if it makes sense but yeah :)
Author's Response: Lol!!! I do remember finding that as well during one of my rereads for motivation. That was completely unintentional, and writing the chapter I wasn't sure yet how old I was actually going to make Bill. XD;; I'd been thinking of editing the little bit in this chapter so it's not the same, but I guess I just haven't gotten around to it yet. Anyway, nice catch though! :3
And by the way, the ABD/TRD reference was a tiiiiiiiiny one. It was just the use of the name 'Tomi boy,' because while it's probably been used in a dozen other fics, to me it'll always be sung in the song 'Barbie Girl' by Aqua. XD
Date: 10/06/10 11:31 am Title: A Kind Heart
Day-um! Just this whole plot seems amazing, especially since it's not a time travel thing, it's so original. I can't wait to see what the deal is.
Bill is so cute at the start! :D And also, point for the Omen reference >:3 The teacher Bill was also really good...The clothes was totally sus o.o' -squee- I can't wait to see what happensssssss!!
Author's Response: Haha I don't know how much 'originality' I can claim since it's based on something from an anime. XD;;; But I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. Thanks! :)
Date: 10/06/10 01:04 am Title: Nothing to Apologize For
PLEASE YOU GOTTA POST MORE SOON!!! I AM NOW IN LOVE WITH THIS FANFIC!!!
Author's Response: Oh wow! XD Thank you so much! I'm working on the next part and will have it up as soon as I can (hopefully this weekend or early next week)!
Date: 10/05/10 04:17 am Title: Nothing to Apologize For
i have a question though, bill cant get older (i mean older apart from 11 or 21) hes like a vampire that never ages?
Author's Response: Haha I meant to bring this up earlier, but it'll definitely be explained later (as it fits in much better for this other scene I have coming in another chapter). But to put it shortly, he still ages, but as he does so will the 'forms' he changes into. So for example, he's currently 15 and changes between being 11 and 21. When he turns like 20 though, he'll change between a 16 and 26 year old, and so on. :3 He's definitely not ageless and eternal. XD
Anyway, thanks so much for reading and taking time to leave a review for each chapter! Thank you! :)
Date: 10/05/10 02:50 am Title: Kisses, A Little Date, and More Kisses
awww the cupcake scene was so damn cuuuute
Author's Response: LOL! I felt so bad for doing that to Bill. XD;; Although I guess he got a little something good from it later. :3
Date: 10/05/10 02:35 am Title: Intentions
someone being overprotective n.n
Author's Response: Something like that. XD;;
Date: 10/05/10 02:02 am Title: The Usual Stuff… with a Few Kisses Here and There
well, now that the put it like that, indeed if i saw an eleven year old with a seventeen one it'd be weird as hell ._.
Author's Response: Yep, it definitely does seem rather odd. ;P So it's a good thing Bill's actually 15. ;D
Date: 10/05/10 01:39 am Title: In Mr. Kaulitz’s Class
i was soooo gonna smack tom for ignoring bill ¬¬
bet i guess i can forgive him for being all cute at the end n.n
Author's Response: It was the least he could do after ignoring Bill for so long. ;)
Date: 10/05/10 01:23 am Title: Bill & Mr. Kaulitz
well fot sure that explains A WHOLE LOT
it kind of remind me of rogue from X-man but just not so hardcore to the point where he cant control it…
Author's Response: Haha! I hadn't thought of that. I guess the idea IS similar to Rogue. XD But my inspiration was from an anime, not X-Men. ;)
Date: 10/05/10 01:00 am Title: Looking Out for Bill
O.O
I KNEWWWW IIIIIIT!!!!
bill should be a lil more discreet thoug, he just left so many hints >.<
Author's Response: Lol! It's not that he left too many hints. It's just that Tom hung around both his sides too much. Anyone else who only knew one or the other would have had no idea. Bill just wasn't used to having to act as supposedly separate people. :3
Date: 10/05/10 12:17 am Title: Crazy Hyper Kids
awww why deny his sweet tooth *sniff* i wouldnt deny it for anything in the world >.< sweets make me as hyper as lil bill
Author's Response: Me toooo!! *__* I love sugar. XD
Date: 10/04/10 11:53 pm Title: In the Rain
well lil bill is right, rain is always fun xD
and gustav cant understand that if (almost) anyone had bill as a teacher obviously theyll have a crush on him too, forget it not even teacher, whatever XDDD
Author's Response: Eek, I have to be on Tom's side about the rain. I hate getting sick. -__-
I definitely agree about everyone having a crush on Bill though. XD;;
Date: 10/04/10 07:01 pm Title: A Kind Heart
mmmm … sounds weird, as if bill had some kind of power to grow up into a full adult
Author's Response: Are they both really the same Bill though? ;)
Date: 10/03/10 04:12 am Title: Nothing to Apologize For
:PPP aww
Author's Response: Haha :)
Date: 09/30/10 05:34 pm Title: Nothing to Apologize For
Onh!!! So sweet!!!
Author's Response: Haha thanks! :)