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Reviewer: angelbaby2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/02/10 07:51 pm Title: “Shut up Zoë mommy and daddy are having sex.”

Loved it!



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Reviewer: darkuniverse Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/30/10 06:12 pm Title: “Not yet.”

OMG!!!...that kinda all I can say right now...please post soon...?!

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Reviewer: corn Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/25/10 06:43 pm Title: “We will I promise”

What? The last chapter alreagy? D; Can't say I didn't enjoy this! :) Update the last time because I'm sure the end's gonna be great. :DDD

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Reviewer: julialyssa Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/25/10 02:48 pm Title: “We will I promise”

I loved it, love that Tom is still perverted and that he loves his son and girls so much. The ending was beautiful, I love how connected the girls are. Since she lost the weight they can get married now right?

Author's Response: it's another chapter

Reviewer: darkuniverse Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/25/10 01:17 pm Title: “We will I promise”

Awwww...adorable...just adorable...XD

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Reviewer: julialyssa Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/21/10 01:02 am Title: “They’re happy tears girls.”

Aw, this made me cry: )

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Reviewer: corn Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/19/10 04:53 pm Title: “What’s a Chicago accent?”

Aw! It took two kids and a baby on the way for Tom to finally pop the questionnn! If I were Lexa I'd be satisfied. =P And dude, I'm from Chicago! xD Gym shoes and pop all day! ^_^

Author's Response: hell yea!!! Fuck sneakers and soda :P

Reviewer: julialyssa Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/19/10 02:44 pm Title: “What’s a Chicago accent?”

Awwwwwwwwwww....beautiful

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Reviewer: darkuniverse Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/19/10 02:08 pm Title: “What’s a Chicago accent?”

awwwwww...how cute and sweet and just...adorable...I loved this chapter...keep up the amazing work...:D

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Reviewer: julialyssa Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/18/10 01:39 pm Title: “Nothing girly or after something stupid. Like cupcake or Stephanie.”

Awww....Absolutely beautiful...hes such a good dad and boyfriend

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Reviewer: corn Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/17/10 06:35 pm Title: “Sometimes couples fight.”

Aw! Too bad she has to deal with the girls like Kate. But, she's been through it twice already so I guess it's just the hormones getting the best of her. I'm glad they made up! Also, I liked the little scene I got when the girls ran under the table when Tom and Lexa were yelling. Update soon! ^^

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Reviewer: corn Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/16/10 08:02 pm Title: “That’s what I said, hurted.”

Yup, the banner's up! And boy, is it colorful! Are all of those kids in the banner supposed to be Tom's? Holy cow! xD I was kind of mad at Bill at first. xD "That's none of your goddamn business." I thought it was something bad but that's what it actually means! xD And the fact that Tom wasn't in the mood for night kinda made me feel bad for Lexa.

Author's Response: it's just various versions of Alexandria and Zoe

Reviewer: Doms Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/13/10 08:28 pm Title: “That’s what I said, hurted.”

this is an AMAZING story! just one question. are tom and lexa married?

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Reviewer: corn Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/13/10 04:43 pm Title: “But my curls are all frizzy daddy! I can’t go to school with frizzy curls!”

Don't be sad about the reviews, hun! C: They would come sooner or later! C;
Have you thought about getting beta reader or checking your own work? Also, with a little more detail this story could be even better! I LOL'd when it was revealed that Tom's 27 in this story. ahahahaa Now for the next chapter when Tom goes to the studio and the other guys are there! Update soon. C:

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Reviewer: corn Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/13/10 04:27 pm Title: “Shut up Zoë mommy and daddy are having sex.”

Hmm, so I wonder what happened! This story is good! :) Actually, I thought it was so remake of KIDS: the movie but I found out it wasn't when I began reading it. lol There's something wrong with you banner (if you haven't noticed) because it doesn't show up! Anyway, I've never heard of BMRC but I have heard of Rammstein. Anyways, nice start! C:

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Reviewer: darkuniverse Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/13/10 12:15 pm Title: “But my curls are all frizzy daddy! I can’t go to school with frizzy curls!”

Hahaha...it's really cool!!! Well, since nobody else reviewed, let me be the first one...:D...your story's very interesting...please continue...? :)

Author's Response: thank i definitly will

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