Date: 05/12/10 11:44 pm Title: Chapter 1: Wicked World
LOVE THIS!!!! I need more!!
Author's Response: more is on the way..:)
Date: 05/12/10 09:57 pm Title: Chapter 1: Wicked World
WOW this is pretty interesting....was thinking of Transporter^^a...sorry for the reference. i only meant that cause you know Tom is gonna transport "something" ^^a...hehehe...i likes it... and Toms personality WHOA! though it may change due to his meeting of Bill?...nice and long chapter*love*. i want to know more about it.cant wait for the next update =D
Author's Response: it's ok, the first time I told one of my friends this story they said it was like transporter, which I have never seen...but I'm pretty sure it will be a bit different then that...:)
Date: 05/12/10 07:03 pm Title: Chapter 1: Wicked World
This is simply amazing in every way! I have to admit when I read the slight summary, I wasn't at all interested, but then I thought "What the heck? I might as well see what the beginning is like." And.... NOW I'M HOOKED! I SO love the tormented Tom. The way he's so disturbed is amazingly written. I felt like this was a movie playing in my head the way you described everything. When an author can get me to SEE the story in my mind, I get SUPER excited!!
This is AMAZING! and I can't wait to read more!! I'm tracking this story FOR SURE!! :D
Author's Response: it's ok, I was never good at writing a summary anyways...but I'm really glad that you read it anyway, and thank you for the review, I'm very flattered.
Date: 05/12/10 06:32 pm Title: Chapter 1: Wicked World
WOW! This is kinda ~something~ *_*
I love the beginning, you have an exquisite writing style. Thank you for posting a chapter THAT long. I canīt wait to find out how this continues.
Pls update sooon ^__^
Author's Response: long I know...thank you, glad your enjoying it...
Date: 05/12/10 02:52 pm Title: Chapter 1: Wicked World
I didn't expect to like this so much when I opened it! I can see the obvious meeting between Bill and Tom will be a climax, I can't wait to see Tom's reaction. I just hope that rape warning is not actual rape but a try :/
please update soon!
Author's Response: haha, ok, glad you like it so far.