Date: 06/08/10 02:55 am Title: Chapter 3: Riddled Road
Don't apologize for all the detail. I love it! Makes it easy to understand what's going on.
Gonna go read chapter 3 now! :D
Author's Response: thank you, I'm glad you think so.
Date: 05/31/10 10:51 am Title: Chapter 4: The beginning
Please update soon! This is so good!
Author's Response: haha...sorry it took so long...chapter 5 is up...3in the morning...hope you like it
Date: 05/31/10 10:30 am Title: Chapter 1: Wicked World
This is a really intriguing story!!! I'm excited to read more!! :)
Author's Response: thank you!
Date: 05/30/10 09:01 pm Title: Chapter 4: The beginning
Hmm...getting very interesting, i'm curious about Bill's character in this story. Ready for more!
Author's Response: glad to hear it!
Date: 05/20/10 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 3: Riddled Road
COME ON!!!!!!...the suspense is KILLING ME!!!!!!....introduce dazed/drugged/confused/gaga eyed Bill already =B...OR at least SOME sort of ACTION!!!! XXDD....have Tom busta cap or something HELL have Andreas black belt someone for no reason XXDD...COME ON!!!!! =B ok...thats enough ranting ^^a
Author's Response: it's coming it's coming...haha
Date: 05/20/10 09:57 am Title: Chapter 1: Wicked World
i love how detailed this story is, and i love how you talk about tom in the beginning, so we get a sense of how fucked up he is. i really like that dark undertone you got going on, this was great!
Author's Response: I'm glad you see it that way, I love interpretive people who read between lines :) hope you continue to like it.
Date: 05/20/10 03:15 am Title: Chapter 3: Riddled Road
I want more
Author's Response: you'll get more.
Date: 05/20/10 02:11 am Title: Chapter 3: Riddled Road
So far so good. Very interested on seeing how this goes.
Author's Response: thank you.
Date: 05/19/10 05:18 pm Title: Chapter 3: Riddled Road
ooh, we are getting close! I want to see and learn about Bill! Keep up the great work!!
Author's Response: I'll do my best:)
Date: 05/19/10 05:01 pm Title: Chapter 3: Riddled Road
Because Tom is twitchy about this, I am too now. >.>
I know something's gonna drop, but I dunno how and when or in what way, but GAH, it's making me super anxious...
Author's Response: don't worry...hehe...read on
Date: 05/19/10 03:57 am Title: Chapter 2: Morning has broken
Famous last words. =) Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: hehe, more is coming.
Date: 05/18/10 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 2: Morning has broken
luv the fic please continue
Author's Response: I will...
Date: 05/17/10 09:12 pm Title: Chapter 2: Morning has broken
Another mind-blowing chapter, full of more questions and even more intriguing backstory!
So much I want to know, but I know all will be revealed as the story progresses but I really am dying to know now of Tom's dreams and why he was thinking of that particular one when he was fighting Red.
Fascinating! Bravo!! ^^
Author's Response: haha...you can ask any questions about the story, cause maybe I didn't make everything clear since I write sometimes in an odd way...because the characters are in my head so I know how they think...anyways, in case you didn't catch it, Tom was not thinking of that, it kind of came back to him, the dream that is, seeing red like that was a bit like a deshavoo, kind of made him remember...thanks for the review:)
Author's Response: haha...you can ask any questions about the story, cause maybe I didn't make everything clear since I write sometimes in an odd way...because the characters are in my head so I know how they think...anyways, in case you didn't catch it, Tom was not thinking of that, it kind of came back to him, the dream that is, seeing red like that was a bit like a deshavoo, kind of made him remember...thanks for the review:)
Date: 05/17/10 04:46 pm Title: Chapter 2: Morning has broken
This is so interesting! Can't wait to read more! :]
Author's Response: cool...can't wait to see what you think of the rest.
Date: 05/17/10 03:46 pm Title: Chapter 2: Morning has broken
Wow. This story is dark. I like it, even tho it's not my usual fare, i like it.
Author's Response: well, that's cool you're reading it, I'm thankful you did.
Date: 05/16/10 07:15 am Title: Chapter 1: Wicked World
Oh wow.
This is so amazing and I have to sit here and take it all before I could even read the next part, lol.
Your details are amazing and I think that's why I enjoyed your first story so much and this one is going even beyond that.
I can't wait to see Tom in the next part and what transporting 'the demon' will really be like. The fact that now we now just a bit about him and his current condition is a bit worrying, because if he gets sicker, this could be a potential deal breaker and would cause more grief than Gordon (or Tom) could anticipate.
But I shall wait and see! Fantastic first chapter. XD
Author's Response: thank you, I love that you're getting into it and liking it...well...everything will be fine with the demon...but maybe not with Tom...;)
Author's Response: thank you, I love that you're getting into it and liking it...well...everything will be fine with the demon...but maybe not with Tom...;)
Date: 05/13/10 10:23 am Title: Chapter 1: Wicked World
just got one thing to say:
I LOVE IT!
Date: 05/13/10 06:26 am Title: Chapter 1: Wicked World
thank you!
Date: 05/13/10 03:20 am Title: Chapter 1: Wicked World
very dark, but very interested. i'm excited by your new story and look forward to more. =)
Author's Response: hehe..yes a bit dark but the plot is dark in itself...thank you for the review:)
Date: 05/12/10 11:59 pm Title: Chapter 1: Wicked World
This is interesting. I"m curious keep going please.
Author's Response: I will keep going...