Date: 09/07/10 02:23 pm Title: Chapter 1: Wicked World
Interesting =)
Date: 09/07/10 10:36 am Title: Chapter 6:Tears and the truth
I loved it!!!!!! Bastards ¬¬ I can't wait for more!!!!
xx Chi ^^
*hurries off to work x)*
Date: 07/06/10 06:50 pm Title: Chapter 5: Pawns, Kings, and wannabe Queens.
I love this!!!!! :D I can't wait for more!!! *faved*
xx Chi ^^
Date: 07/05/10 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 5: Pawns, Kings, and wannabe Queens.
NO! You can't just stop there it's not fair!!! The whole beginning chapters were so intense and suspenseful...now we got to Bill...Update! :3
Date: 07/01/10 06:43 pm Title: Chapter 5: Pawns, Kings, and wannabe Queens.
Yay
Bill seems soo mysterious
Date: 06/28/10 07:33 pm Title: Chapter 4: The beginning
Why do i get the feeling that Tom staying with out his gards is a bad idea? like hes litting his gard down too much.... ISNT THE GUY SUPPOSE TO PAY HIM! nOW I really SENCE a problem...
Date: 06/28/10 06:29 pm Title: Chapter 3: Riddled Road
I dont know why but i like'dre. He sparked Toms intrest for what ever reason and he's more bold than the other gards.... either that, he doesnt know the rules or he does know the rules and is just trying to get his head chopped.
Date: 06/28/10 06:12 pm Title: Chapter 2: Morning has broken
"Tom mentally smirked at them and looked over at Georg who gave him an ‘I know what you’re thinking’ look and smiled."
I dont get this part. Whats funny about them having to piss and eat? And how did Toms mother die? How did his dad get in to this 'line of work'? Did Toms mother know about all this? UGGGGHSO MANY QUESTIONS! lolon to chapter 3.......
Date: 06/28/10 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 2: Morning has broken
woah woah woah wait a minute... Red is GAY??! I thought they HATED each other. Now there pressed together all hot and sweaty in a bathroom? ...*thinks about it* sounds kinda hot actually ;) lol
Date: 06/28/10 03:00 am Title: Chapter 5: Pawns, Kings, and wannabe Queens.
ooh, quite the twist there with Bill. I'm confused but very excited for more.
Date: 06/28/10 01:05 am Title: Chapter 1: Wicked World
Little mistake in 6th paragraph. You said that David was Tom's father instead of Gordon.
Lol, no worries. Just thought maybe you'd want to know.
Date: 06/28/10 12:45 am Title: Chapter 5: Pawns, Kings, and wannabe Queens.
Wow! I didn't expect Bill's response to his situation at all! I was expecting crying mess in the corner, not take charge and take over and live up to the Demon name. LOVE IT!!!! So glad I was wrong!
Love this! Can't wait for more! :D
Date: 06/27/10 09:41 pm Title: Chapter 5: Pawns, Kings, and wannabe Queens.
So misterious I want to know more about Bill and his... Well ability. I can't wait for them to meet if they do. I think it will be very interesting.
Date: 06/27/10 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 5: Pawns, Kings, and wannabe Queens.
i really enjoyed this chapter.. i think your a very talented writer.. that olivia chick kinda annoyed me and i was glad when tom told her where to go.
wow are you a singer..what kind of music do you sing.. im just curious
take care and im looking forward 2 more X
Date: 06/27/10 03:42 pm Title: Chapter 5: Pawns, Kings, and wannabe Queens.
OMG, I'm definitely sure this is my favorite chapter so far!
SO MANY THINGS TO LOVE and SMACK DOWN do what's her face. HA!
I have to know more about Bill now, because Arthur knows much that in a way I'm still in the dark about.
Most definitely anxious for the next time Tom crosses paths with Bill!
Date: 06/27/10 02:48 pm Title: Chapter 1: Wicked World
OMG, I'VE BEEN THINKING ABOUT THIS STORY AND HERE YOU ARE!
Author's Response: haha...ok.
Date: 06/17/10 03:33 pm Title: Chapter 4: The beginning
AMAZING!! just brilliant!
i loved the first few chapters, its a great and original idea and i can tell its gonna be brilliant ..im looking forward 2 finding out more about bill...i mean the "cargo"
*faves story* and *offers u a cookie*
and i cant wait for more so update soon X
Author's Response: thanks so much...this review makes me very happy...*takes bite of cookie*
Date: 06/09/10 07:51 pm Title: Chapter 4: The beginning
Lol, I'm excited about this story
Author's Response: excited is good:)
Date: 06/08/10 05:03 am Title: Chapter 4: The beginning
i loved bill laughing. i cant wait for tom to actually meet him. keep up the good work!
Author's Response: thanks..
Date: 06/08/10 03:07 am Title: Chapter 4: The beginning
Tom's got something planned! I can tell!
Can't wait for him to find Bill!
I love all of your details. I feel like I'm reading a movie. I can see everything perfectly.
Love this! Can't wait for next chapter! :D
Author's Response: yeah I'm going for the movie type feel...I try to write it the way I see it in my mind...glad your liking it.